Dan Maple Is Not Frost

Wow⊙ω⊙, why are there so few posts? Where have all the fans gone? 1. The text is clean and the writing is smooth. 2. Each chapter is... So short, not enough to read! 3. Jumping off a cliff is an old trick! Not very good. . Let me write this first. I have collected the book. Congratulations on gaining another fan. I will come back when the sun rises. I slipped away first. There are still many books waiting for me, hehe.

Well, your fans are here. Sorry for coming just now, eh! I left Diandian for a while at the beginning of the month, and I'm catching up now. But I am born in the 2000s, and you are older than me, haha ​​(I feel a little bit proud (//∇//)) 1. The beginning is good, the characters are well described, there is a strong sense of immersion, and the impression is deep. 2. Some words and phrases are used too repeatedly, which destroys a lot of appeal! It would be nice if it could be changed, but I personally feel uncomfortable anyway. 3. Your "digression" ruined a lot of my tenderness... Just kidding, well, this method is very nice. I... Like it very much, like it very much. It's unique, I just think you're quite naughty (●°u°●)​", this can also be regarded as a way of interaction! It's a bit off-topic, haha 4. Some paragraphs are too long and have a poor look and feel. It is recommended to modify them. Ruofeng, the name is quite cool. When used on the heroine, it gives off a sense of heroism. Is it true? Hehe. 5. There is not much about the plot that attracts me. As the old saying goes, just keep it to a certain level and then use your imagination crazily! As long as it's not too out of the ordinary. Looking forward to it, I will watch it slowly, come on! 💕💞💓💗💖💘💝 ♡(*´∀｀*)(*´∀｀*)♡ Send you the sky Heart, and... 🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭🍭 My favorite lollipop (｢･ω･)｢Hey

The author's writing style is very delicate and model-like. I have collected it for you. Please return your heart to the peak.

The author strongly recommends that you change the introduction. It's too long and it's really not good. It feels like a story. It should give people a hazy feeling. You can't let them know what the content is, but just let them know how to introduce it.

Alas, I just forgot to bookmark it. 😒

Already collected, followed, recommended and voted for support, please do your best

Come on, the new book has been collected. Can we share it with each other?

The writing is very delicate and the characters are well drawn. Come on

Come on ヾ(◍°∇°◍)ﾉﾞ

Nice writing! Collected! Take your time, keep updating, and welcome to visit again!

The story is exciting and beautiful😁😁

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Come support, let's comment and learn from each other and let's cheer together😊

Come on, people, you can have a bowl now (●°u°●)​"