The Legend of Time Traveling God of War

Well written, bookmarked. I hope you can give me more opinions.

The large text and language make me feel as if I am immersed in the scene, and the world I have conceived is also very grand. If I continue, I will definitely achieve good results. 🌹🌹

As a person who watches anime all year round, I feel a kind of chuuniu atmosphere.

Very creative, looking forward to the follow-up.

The writing is not bad, it is considered to be excellent. The foreshadowing is a bit awkward. I suggest you read Liu Cixin's article to make your skills more solid and the language more powerful. Come on, let me see your updates and wait for your highlights.

It is an advantage to show the aura of the protagonist from the beginning, but you should pay attention to the text wall and divide it into multiple sections. Come on! Asking for feedback and advice

It's better than what I wrote, so I don't dare to comment 😌

Already collected, come on! 😁

After reading more than a dozen male videos, I found that the author's writing style is pretty good in the industry, and I really enjoyed investing in it.

{"NickName":"refute the thief side","UserId":342302673}Welcome to continue, there will be a second male lead who loves the protagonist girl later

Great works have been collected, keep up the good work

Ahem, these two days are to celebrate the application and signing, we will continue tomorrow

After reading the prologue, I didn't expect it to be time travel...😂, It's well written, but the move names can be made smoother by using your brain, and don't have to be so exaggerated, otherwise you may get memory fatigue if you write too much at the back 🤭 The rest is good, it has a plot and ideas, it's not a brainless article, it's worth reading.

I just finished reading it, the author's writing is good. The writing is also very good, awesome!

Not even advice. I didn't sign a contract either. But with your writing style, I feel like you're on the wrong channel. You should write light novels or games. But you are almost 100,000, I wish you success in signing the contract.

The writing is good. No wonder it has so many votes. I'm envious!

{"NickName":"refute the thief party","UserId":342302673}Thank you for your support, why did you like them all...

{"NickName":"Mengguang","UserId":336272799} I'm still doing daily updates, but they don't plan to sign me

{"NickName":"Shengshengyu","UserId":343127110}Thanks for the recommendation

Wow, you are the one who stopped updating for two years 😂😂 After stopping updating for such a long time, maybe the best choice is to give up and stop writing? I'll warm up a book and run away, come on! !

I am still quite miserable, 😭😭😭 No one is watching, come and take a look at yours and cast a vote -_-|| (It's just one vote anyway)

{"NickName":"","UserId":344391741}, Oh Summer nights It feels so right I want to swim here Your heart sea Forget the Party, just u and Iwoo yeah Verse~

{"NickName":"In the next Ke belt table","UserId":342438456}Continuously updated

{"NickName":"Mysterious Platinum Boss","UserId":227942143}Who are you? Thanks for the recommendation

{"NickName":"Pope's Oath","UserId":11781956}Mom, worship the boss! ! ! !

Poyin-

{"NickName":"Brother Jun Yang","UserId":343521659} Are you really reading my book?

{"NickName":"Mengguang","UserId":336272799} Damn...

{"NickName":"Xingzhongmo","UserId":304884914} Come and take a look

Recommendation tickets are sent to 🌹🌹🌹 Great support