Because I'm a Coward, I Maxed Out My San Points.

Please improve! When I read this book in the early stage, I didn't have much emotion. I just thought it was quite interesting, and it was not bound by levels, and there was no routine of upgrading for the sake of upgrading like Xiaobai's novels. I looked at it later. Because I had read Mystery, I felt that the two worldviews were actually similar. The author also wrote it very well, so I didn't skip a chapter. Just when I was watching the chapter "Entering Dreamland", the task force member said, "I am just an ordinary person. Even if I just listen to it, it is very likely to be contaminated. If you feel wrong or dissatisfied, you can ask for a substitution at any time." The tears suddenly fell And while typing these words, the tears flowed inexplicably and uncontrollably. In the previous article, the death of ordinary people is usually just a number, or a brushstroke. Even in the chapter before this sentence, when the task force made it clear that ordinary people can kill at will, I felt it was too much In such a world, those who condemn, those who strangle, the Foundation, the Red Order, all capable people, including the protagonist, I just feel pity for them These people who have no ability but become front-line combatants, and risk their lives one after another, they are respectable Maybe they are forced to be put on the shelf, and they have to move forward even though they know they are cannon fodder, just for the sake of a possibility in the future, right? The author reminded me of the old lady in The Mysterious Squid, who had a good meal at the end, and left peacefully after drinking the black tea They are all people at the bottom, like many of you and me, people in troubled times are not as good as peace dogs. Maybe this is the reason why I shed tears for no reason.

Long review! Hope it improves! Thanks! First of all, there are some people in the comment area who really don't need to be like this. The audience for Cthulhu themes is much smaller than that of urban fantasy, so those who don't like it or are not interested can just quit. There is no need to step on it. The author just tells us the story in his mind. Then, let me talk about my thoughts after reading it. I personally feel that this book is actually of high quality. My mentality has also changed as the protagonist continues to change. So far, I have only read one chapter of the new volume. When I was watching the early stage, the main personality and the sub-personality could communicate but could not exist at the same time. When the main personality had to teach the sub-personality emotions, I refused. I was afraid that the sub-personality would really have self-emotions and start a different route, just like the rebellion of the artifact in fantasy. If the protagonist becomes like this before he has grown up, then he will definitely have to take the perspective of a pollutant, and I will definitely give up the book, because that kind of world is too hopeless. Facts have proved that I thought too much. At least by the chapters I finished reading, the sub-personality had no obvious emotional growth. But now there is another situation. The protagonist's emotions are slowly fading. From the beginning, he felt aggrieved for the life of a criminal, then he understood the reason for the "consumables", and now he is a man-made monster. I know that these are necessary for growth, and the article has made it clear that the protagonist is a certain god, but from the bottom of my heart, I still hope that the protagonist can retain a little bit of humanity in the end, whether he is alive or dead. Why are you not sure that the protagonist is alive? Because this book reminds me of mystery. A truly good book is not that the protagonist will be in the air for seconds at the end, but that at the end of the book, the protagonist still has his own persistence, even at the cost of his life (otherwise, forcing Amon to lose will be a bad ending.) The shortcomings of this book are also obvious. The author's writing power should have a lot of room for improvement. The overall rhythm is not a big problem, but there are some places that obviously cannot withstand scrutiny. Take the latest one that I remember, for example, someone stabbed himself with a knife under the obvious signal of the protagonist, which is very inconsistent with his character, although it also created a moderate laugh. Another clear point is that the author may not want the tone of the entire book to be depressing, so he would like to add some funny moments from time to time to relieve it. However, because the twists and the like are not well controlled, there will always be a few chapters of short paragraphs in the plot. Maybe some readers will have the same feeling as me. Of course, most of these are my personal feelings and conjectures, and they only represent my own point of view. Because I don't read books continuously, I can't remember many of the plots, so I just talked about what I want to say now. As for the book, it must be a good book, otherwise I wouldn't take the time to comment. As for progress, the author is always making progress, so don't let it be unfinished. Let's work together! Come on＾0＾~

After reading most of the part, the concept and world view are very good, but the further I read, I felt that there were too many contradictions and it was biased toward refreshing stories. In many places, Ye Tingbai's character change was too abrupt. At first, Si Youxu checked his past and found that he deliberately concealed himself. It was obvious that he wanted to mold Ye Tingbai into a high-IQ talent, but I really didn't see this now, and he relied on his strength all the way. The rapid increase in strength and indiscriminate killing are indeed very satisfying, but it may be due to personal reasons that I cannot accept indiscriminate killing. Of course, this kind of baptism is normal in the world view, but Ye Tingbai's divinity completely overwhelms human nature, and human nature only retains the dark side. Then I really don't understand the use of his high IQ in paving the way for his flat-headed brother's character. The character creation is also too thin. From the whole story, only Xiaohei and Guangri are relatively three-dimensional existences in my mind, and the other character descriptions are too superficial. Although the storyline, reasonable layout, and rhythm are all very good, and sometimes the novel setting of the author can also make people's eyes shine, but the chatter becomes more and more exciting... And the protagonist's way of dealing with things in the later stage is indeed very boring, and the wide branching road is forced to turn into a narrow path, which hardly causes my mood swings when reading. I prefer to follow the protagonist's thinking, so the description of strength and power struggle and ancient gods is very boring and a bit disappointing. Of course, I hope the author can make more progress and improvements. After all, the fact that I can persevere until now means that this article is still very good. Come on, author!

Everything about this book is good, the setting is great, the characters are great, it has a wonderful story, and a lot of hidden and bright lines and foreshadowing. However, the mistake is that the author does not have much experience in writing online articles or very long articles, and the writing is not very particular. Although the story is good, the actual viewing experience is as bland as water. The more important thing is the title of the book. This title really has nothing to do with the text. Most people who like this story will not click in because of this title, and most of those who click in because of this title will not like this story. The author has set up a double filter. The writing level is not very high, and it cannot be separated from the readers' interest to retain the readers. Personally, I can persevere because the author's new book gives me a good feeling. The biggest difference between this book and the new book is that the author lacked experience when writing this book. In other aspects, whether it is various settings, various light and dark lines, or even characters, this book is better than the new book. My personal feeling is that the author put a lot of emotion and preparation into writing this book, but the new book does not have as much effort as this one.

I actually think this book can continue to be written, but it's a pity to end it like this. Since it has written about some of the worldview of Warcraft and Cthulhu's worldview, etc., I think it can actually be written more. The ending is indeed expected, but I personally think this book can continue to be exciting. It writes about the void and so on, and the outer gods are only true Dharma. Then the true derivatives of all masters can be replaced at any time. And the pit of the God of Dreams has not been filled, and the foreshadowing has not been completed. The protagonist and Zuo have mastered similar rules to a certain extent. Either one is higher and the other is lower? Maybe the god died and no one was responsible for the corresponding laws, so another one appeared? After looking over and over, there are many points that I don't understand. After all, I read books relatively quickly and I am also an old bookworm. In fact, according to the Cthulhu universe, the Outer Gods don't care about toys at all. In fact, the Outer Gods prefer disorder and chaos. However, I think this is some changes made by the author. It looks pretty good. This book is quite good, but it makes me feel like I still have more to say. However, the author also said that he was too tired to write about the Cthulhu universe. It is indeed tiring to write about the Cthulhu universe. I was a little tired while reading it, but it was still quite comfortable while reading it. I still hope that the author can extend it more, and I look forward to the time when the author writes about the law system and masters the power system of the entire rule, because I really want to see the author's description of the power system of the outer gods after this book, because the outer gods in this book have given me a feeling that they are very much like an animal, like a cat. Perhaps these outer gods are essentially the sublimation of an animal. The original animal life form has touched the original rules? It's getting further and further away, but I still recommend everyone to read it. Although I was put off by the title of the book at first. It gave me the feeling that there is no heroine, no harem, and no cool novels. However, if you read it carefully, this book is actually really good, and it is quite suitable for an old bookworm like me. Then I really look forward to the author writing novels in the fairy tale system or the magic system, because this novel makes me think that the author will be very good at writing this type of novel, or a time travel novel, a savior novel, or a big conspiracy novel. Finally, the book is good, not a novice novel. The control of the character's personality and emotions is very good. If you are a bookworm passing by, you must not miss this kind of genre novel.

It's time to spread positive energy, and I actually have such a day. First of all, regarding the issue of risking your life to save others, please don't bring reality into fiction. What kind of life are we living now. Since childhood, most people will lend a helping hand when others are in trouble. You don't have time to think about whether you are in danger. Compare the protagonist's world horizontally. The third brother is seriously ill, happy education, life-threatening, and precarious. Living in this kind of world, there is no such thing as dedication. Therefore, it is right to save or not to save, but it is only relative. After all, it is the world that is wrong. Welcome to the pole, the little pacesetter on the construction site.

It was very well written, I read it all night long. However, the moral level and world view of the protagonist always feel very dangerous to write, and there is always a risk of writing failure, just like the improvement of abilities and the loss of control and madness, which complement each other all the time. Up to now, I have written several times that the protagonist's character is about to collapse, only to have it come back around after two chapters. The plot rhythm is quite good, so far it has been very good. I hope the author won't write too much in the future, keep up the good work.

I can't stand it anymore. The main character is a loser. In this world where the criminal master regards the lives of civilians as nothing, he is still the kind of person who doesn't even dare to fight back when someone kills him. The sub-personality kills decisively and is very reasonable in the face of danger. However, the main personality has absolute control over the sub-personality and often restricts the sub-personality from letting go of people who want to kill them. The reason is that I can't afford to offend

I felt there was a bit of a problem early on. The protagonist is a filial son. But the chapter about caring about his parents is just a little bit. There is no relevant description behind it. There is also the identity of the protagonist as a lower-class civilian. Why do he speak so forcefully with those upper-class and almost aristocratic people, giving the protagonist a feeling of superiority? And those people forced him to do something. But the protagonist seems to have been greatly wronged and feels that those people are sorry for him. This is okay. The problem is that the protagonist is still clear. Isn't that the same as that social class? Isn't this a bit inconsistent with the character of the protagonist who is struggling in society as a reporter? I only saw the first 14 pictures.

I have read a similar novel called Joker Game

So far, I feel it's pretty good, and the plot and character design are also okay. I have a small problem. I actually like both the main personality and the secondary personality. Each of the two personalities has its own charm, but I don't know why when the two are put together, it feels like the main personality is making green leaves for the secondary personality (just a personal opinion). The sub-personality is strong, cold, obedient and has a cute contrast in greedy attributes. The main personality feels that on the one hand he has the moral values ​​of ordinary people, but on the other hand he is more cold-blooded than the sub-personality. The handling of some things seems a bit strange, maybe I didn't get that point. Time Train should be regarded as a turning point. The main personality can be cowardly, but cowardice does not mean blind tolerance. The sub-personality doesn't know anything, so it doesn't matter about the sense of morality. The main personality may be that the plot is not advanced enough, and some things are vague and haven't been established yet. I hope that the character design and plot will gradually become more fleshed out in the future, and I look forward to it. Finally, give Xiao Hei a call. He can be said to have performed the best effort that an ordinary person with no sense of existence can make in the context of the times. It will be eroded and confused, but some things cannot be completely abandoned. It is more important than life. Xiao Hei is one of the shining points of this book that I like. I am very happy to still see him in the small theater.

It felt very good before it was put on the shelves, but I felt a little problem after it was put on the shelves. Mainly because I saw a reader saying that it has the potential to be a best friend, and I had high expectations, but there was a bit of a gap. After reading it after it was put on the shelf, I felt something was wrong, and I picked out a few chapters and read the comments. The comments may not necessarily have reference value. First of all, I want to explain that this book does have a lot of creative ideas, which are eye-catching. I won't go into details about the advantages, but mainly mention the sensory issues. 1 The narrative lacks an epic feel and uses too many metaphors. Although some strive for precise description, it feels a little less interesting. 2. The facial expression of the character's personality and the routine of the plot. 3 The lack of creative scenes, the concept setting of Jiangda University not long ago and the selection of candidates through competitions make people feel a bit traditional 4. The character of the protagonist in the early stage is not as weird as others say, and lacks idiosyncrasy. Although the author has repeatedly emphasized the extraordinary character of the protagonist, it always feels a little less interesting. 5 describes a grand world, but the setting is very simple and the scene is very simple. This can be referred to Kayaking and High in the Sky. I read it with gusto to expand the novel world view. Or just like the Bizarre Detective Agency, the whole world is full of despair. 6 After a quick glance at the back, I saw that the characters of Qin Huang and Shi Mu were too ordinary, with no ambition or courage, and no personality charm. They simply put a layer of skin on Xiao Baiwen's villain, and his emotions were stirred up in just a few words 7 In addition, I also saw that when he was separated from his sub-personality, he actually wrote down his thoughts on paper. It felt like the fighting spirit in the TV series turned into a horse.

I just started reading this book and have reached Chapter 16. I feel that the author's writing style is very smooth and does not have the abruptness and tackiness of ordinary novice novels. The interactions between the characters or the words they say have their own characteristics and basic logic. I like it! Chased!

I haven't seen such an interesting article in a long time. If it doesn't break down later, I will keep reading.

It's so well written. I like to read Cthulhu type and plug-in type. The author combines the two and writes it very well. I will continue to follow it.

When I saw the first chapter of this work, "Psychological Assessment Bureau", I was reminded of "The Psychometrician". My mind is open. Combined the setting of this game that if mental pollution is too high, one will turn into a monster, and pp's Sybilla system. The Sybilla system detects the pollution value of everyone in society, and dispatches executioners who are highly polluted but have not turned into monsters (pollution brings distortion but also brings strength) to execute people who have turned into monsters. Next to each executive is a surveillance officer with high pollution resistance, who is responsible for executing the executive when his pollution value is too high. Add some esoteric world views, occultism and psychic settings, plus a high-tech background of cyberpunk (somewhat similar to the book "Do Good Things and You Become Stronger"). The essence of the Sybilla system is the aggregation of souls of those who have a special talent [contamination immunity] (not so much immune to the evil god's pollution, but like the clown in Gotham, crazy to the extreme, a perfect combination of madness and reason. He himself is polluted to the extreme by the madness in his heart, so he is not afraid of the evil god's pollution). The Sibyllan system itself was also a conspiracy involving godhood. The plot unfolds from the perspective of a pair of partners, with group portraits narrated by other pairs of partners. The best combination of protagonists is male and female. The executive takes the route of using pollution to fight madness to gain power, and there are several story lines behind it. There must be a life experience of great suffering and hatred and an enemy to be pursued. The surveillance officer follows the path of orthodox psychic training. It is best to be a newcomer who has just taken office. He has high talent but no experience to facilitate the development of the plot. At the same time, the surveillance officer must have some abnormal traits under his simple appearance. (This is the protagonist configuration of standard criminal investigation film and television works) The story clue must involve a shocking event several years ago, and the executive must be involved. It must be related to the boss's conspiracy, and it must be slightly involved with the surveillance officer. Then, as the world view unfolds bit by bit, we continue to collect clues to the events, that is, we intersperse the main threads in the unit story. Both partners must also have several hidden contradictions, which can be concepts, attitudes towards past events, or behavior. Then do the routine of conflict outbreak + incident handling + emotional warming. Although it is very cliché (after all, there are actually only a few story archetypes in human history, and all stories are a combination of these archetypal frameworks plus different depiction styles), but as long as the writing style is enough to match the cyberpunk + occult + similar world view settings, I feel that I can write a good book.

Harmful. . . How should I put it? It feels like a newcomer is writing a book for the first time. There are a lot of details and language expressions, contextual links, and various descriptions. There are also some problems, and then there are typos! (There are really a lot of typos. Wouldn't it be better to check it before posting?) But overall, the plot is still good. If it is polished, it may become a masterpiece. It depends on the author's writing style. Come on~

I will always pay attention to the number of your 24 recommendation votes every day, You said it yourself, not a single one should be added Come on 💪, you are the fastest in coding

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Come on, I gave you the recommendation vote, try my best to vote every month, I have invested, the book is very good, but be careful when writing, excellent novels cannot be eaten by river crabs.

This is a world where the value is shaking crazily at 40%, a world where more than 50% of the old rulers have come, and there are still people frantically testing on the edge.

The first book is fully ordered. I really like the characters, background and story of this book. It's a pity that the subsequent plot is written in a hurry. Alas, this book may be the number one in my heart for the rest of my life. Cheers for the author's new book! !

If you find errors or loopholes in this book but are too lazy to join the group created by the author, you can report them here. I will contact the author for changes and clarification. Of course, good suggestions can also be made in this post, thank you all.

In fact, compared with the previous book, we can see that the author has made great improvements. The setting of this book is very good. It is the kind of book that I feel can be regarded as a high-quality product. There is nothing too toxic. If you have any dissatisfaction, you can also say it and comment below this post. I will help you criticize the author, if it is reasonable. To put it simply, if you read it, you will read it. If you don't like it, you don't like it. I like this book very much. Good luck to the author.

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What's wrong with eating the dog when the villagers are starving to death? ? Why are you still "worse than an animal"? ? It also became a base point because of "guilt". . . ? The cows still plow the fields every day We are all dog lovers, some like them alive and some like them cooked

I don't know why, but watching the interaction between the two personalities always brings out my aunt's smile. The little mate is so cute!

Bai: Please, another me! Black: Yes, yes~

Someone actually posted a post saying that dogs are poisonous, saying that they feel guilty after eating everything, but so many people still agree with it. To be honest, my worldview exploded when I saw this kind of post. Those who say this are all the kind of great men who have no regrets in my life and will live up to the world and live up to you? Let me give you an example that everyone can understand, a sentence that everyone hates, he is still a child! Why do everyone hate this sentence so much? If a child breaks something of yours but sincerely regrets it and sincerely apologizes to you, will you not forgive him? In our own minds we also think we are still children. What we really hate is using him as a child as an excuse and taking it for granted that children make mistakes. My friends were playing in the water together, and one of them was drowning. I didn't dare to save her, and she drowned. Of course it is worthy of forgiveness in theory, but if you don't feel guilty and don't feel guilty, then maybe you are an individual? So, eating a life-saving dog and indirectly killing the dog who has been protecting me for many years is worthy of forgiveness, but does it mean I can feel at ease if I am worthy of forgiveness? Guilt becomes unreasonable? Need to take it out and be attacked into a brainless person? I am really surprised by the outlook of people who say such things