Belief in Divine Dynasty

I suggest the author to read the novels on the list and learn the writing techniques of other masters. After reading this book, I feel that there is no sense of substitution. The golden three chapters are considered useless. I know who the protagonist is from the beginning of the first chapter. In the following chapters, I doubt the protagonist. Who is it? Some settings were not handled well at all and could not be continued. Many chapters in the middle could have been handled in a thousand words, but you, the author, used tens of thousands of words. How do you feel? It felt like reading an encyclopedia to me. According to book friends, it is too watery.

A very interesting book that should not be buried

In the early stage, Luo Liba's Shui background wanted to marry a wife in her 20s before she was half a year old. This is not a cultivation background, but a mortal background, marrying a woman who is better than her mother. . . . Haha, pig's feet are so disgusting. . . .

I feel like there are some things that are a little weird. For example, in ancient times, it was better to use the word mother to refer to mother. But the book is still very good

It feels like the protagonist married a man in his twenties when he was only two or three years old. Can you pull this off a bit? Did the protagonist ask for it? Do you want to become an immortal?

Other people's water is like a river, your water is out of the Pacific Ocean

I have received the contract for the short-term website. If you want to invest, hurry up.

This is so awesome. This is the first time I have seen it. It dares to use 5 chapters to introduce history at the beginning. I almost yawned.

You can read it yourself. There are about 160 words, and there are 9 mentions of names. There are %2 names in a chapter of 4000 words, which is about 800 words. There are about 200,000 meaningless names in 1 million words. Although Man Piaopiao has only broken through a small realm, Man Piaopiao's combat power has made a major breakthrough. Originally, due to Man Piaopiao's training and the advanced version of the Blade of Destruction, Man Piaopiao's combat power was two and a half realms higher than his realm. This allows Man Piaopiao to have two transformations, a peerless master in the mid-level state, but a four-transformation peerless master to peak combat power. Now Man Piaopiao has a breakthrough, and his combat power has also broken through immediately. Now Man Piaopiao has the fifth transformation, a peerless master's combat power . This is definitely a big breakthrough. After being excited, Man Piaopiao controlled his emotions and then continued to practice. This -cultivation, Man Piaopiao practiced until dawn. Written by an old bookworm, Although Man Piaopiao only broke through a small realm, his combat power had a major breakthrough. Originally, because she had practiced the advanced version of the Blade of Destruction, her combat power was two and a half realms higher than her realm. This allowed her, who was only in the middle stage of her second transformation, to have the combat power of the peak of her fourth transformation. Now that he has made a breakthrough, his combat power is even comparable to that of a master in the fifth transformation period This is definitely a big breakthrough. After a while of excitement, he quickly regained his composure and continued practicing until dawn, which shows his hard work.

I quit after reading Chapter 5. The protagonist is a one month old baby. Can know so many things. Although it is a novel, it should be close to the facts.

If you write a supporting role, senior brother, you need more than a dozen pictures to figure out who is the protagonist. The main character takes over the main role. It was originally written quite well, but writing one chapter a day and always writing about other things is too bad for my level. I can't stand it anymore. What a pity. Personal suggestion, just for reference!

The author of this book should have started writing it from the time of fertilization! ! It's too late to start the plot after birth! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I can still hold on! I can still hold on! It can't poison me 🙂

I want to say what kind of novel this is, I feel dizzy after reading it

Memories are so long-winded that the first few pictures can put a lot of people off.

He was so convincing and so straightforward that I gave up immediately.

The book is very good, keep updating quickly

After reading the introduction, you will know why people on earth are so awesome when they travel to other worlds. After hundreds of millions of years of development, they have developed like this?

Very good book, highly recommended

I have been a bookworm for more than ten years and have read most of Platinum Master's major works. I feel that the author's writing is very good and has its own unique characteristics. It is very detailed, immersive and has a strong sense of involvement. Upgrading monsters and changing maps makes people feel very happy. There are some details that still need to be enhanced, such as the power system, the currency price system, and the map system. The computer should be used to calculate it more clearly and perfectly, and try to avoid loopholes. For example, when a protagonist sees the main god coming to kill him, his avatar appears and nods to each other with the demigod-level protagonist, and then he merges to fight against the enemy. The speed of God is billions of times faster than the speed of light. When you see it as a demigod, you will clone out, then the clone will nod, and then the demigod protagonist will nod, then merge, and then make a move. Even if your clone is faster than others, your demigod protagonist is billions of times weaker than the main god and will be killed long ago. In the early stage, the power system is not big, but it is better to pay attention to it in the later stage. In the later stage, platinum and gold masters generally use light years to calculate distances, such as the king of online articles: I eat tomatoes, dream about magic machines, etc. {"NickName":"Book Friends 20191123031603472","UserId":340012553}

How can there be such a watery book? I'm convinced.

It's so disgusting to write about a wife with such a big gap.

It's so long-winded. It takes several chapters to introduce the background, and another one or two chapters to introduce a person.

I think the author's setting outline is very good. You will know it when you read it. It is really good-looking. I felt really happy after reading it. I often thought of the content in the book within a month. The protagonist is decisive in killing, but there is a bottom line. It is really refreshing. The author's articles are delicate, detailed and clear, and won't be confusing to read. As a bookworm of more than ten years, I thought it was very good. Maybe the first few chapters discouraged me from reading it, but the rest of it became very interesting. It may be that the writing style of the new author is a little immature, but it is still a good book, and it can be said that the flaws do not hide the advantages.

I saw some good comments, but I still can't enjoy it, it's uncomfortable to watch.

Hey, there are too many hydrographs and I look tired

Chapter 1: Strength persuades you to quit! ! !

It's too long-winded and the fighting is a mess.

This is the most clumsy novel I have ever seen. It contains seven or eight martial arts secrets. It is too clumsy to read.

Everything else is fine, but it's uncomfortable to forcefully suppress the level. You have peerless talent, and a breakthrough speed that is worse than ordinary people. You also forcefully explain the reasons for the technique. Others practice to break through faster, but you practice to break through slower. You are really suppressing just for the sake of suppressing.