Create Worlds

The writing style is novel, concise and clear. Whether it is the details of the story or the beauty of the sentences, it is logical and can get to the point.

Author, I really want to say a few words in some places 1. Since it is about prehistoric times, don't add the skills of those anime characters, because nowadays prehistoric novels are constantly improving the B level. If you add some anime characters, it will make readers feel low. For example, the King Buddha of the World, whose skill is called Immortal Techniques Thousand Hands, makes people feel that this prehistoric world is unnecessary. Thousand Hands Hashirama, who is as strong as the Earth, can move vertically and horizontally, and the sense of substitution is gone. Even if you are writing a low-end version of Prehistoric, don't let readers feel that this prehistoric is low-end 2. When writing about Prehistoric, try not to write down specific values for fighting scenes, character forms, etc. If you want to write, use the unit of zhang to describe it. It is best not to use the modern unit of meter. Also, try to be vague in the performance of combat power, so as to avoid making holes as big as one punch 3. And the author, I feel that the writing style is not very good, like the full name of the character, it is best in one paragraph. It only appears once, and later use him or his abbreviation as much as possible. After all, the full name of the character appears several times, which seems a bit uncomfortable 4. The most important point is that in other novels, the sign of "The Great Desolate" is at least the father level, the grandfather level, or even the ancestor level. Even if you write a low profile, you have to make readers feel that this prehistoric person is awesome. You can learn from Yi Ziqi in this aspect. Obviously, his actual performance is to make a villa tremble three times. He can write to make readers feel like he can blow up the world.

My biological knowledge tells me that if a sudden evolution occurs in nature, the first thing to evolve will be viruses and then microorganisms. Anyway, the first thing to evolve in the microscopic world will be the evolution of marine life. Terrestrial life bugs evolved first, and symbiotic microorganisms on animals also evolved, as did humans. In fact, as soon as the micro-life on the human body evolves, the human being itself will probably suffer. Also, I am very curious about whether cultivation is to cultivate the consciousness of the brain or the body. In addition, the body can actually survive without a brain, it just cannot move.

Can you please stop making jokes all the time? I haven't watched Low Dimension or Blue and White Society. What's wrong? Do I have to read the first two novels before I can read them? I can't understand all kinds of memes, they're too discouraging, I just don't know what they mean, there should be limits to how you can enjoy yourself.

The pig's feet have such awesome golden fingers, and they are still bound to the sect. They have to trouble others if they want a seed. As long as they don't destroy the world, they can create whatever they want.

I'm just a ruthless attention machine, I didn't have a choice before, now I want to be a good person. The big guys who have been attracted by the attention have come to gather 🤓. It will be on the shelves next Friday. Big guys can invest in the car for free and only need to read for ten minutes. The introduction and content are consistent, but the progress is different. Now the author has written about the Taibei Era. Welcome all the big guys to join Shuyoujunyang, there are many girls there. Just sauce~

What the author wrote is an idiot. You are at the level of a god in this small world. In reality it's still rubbish. Then what use do you want this for?

Another account of mine is also writing this kind of novel. The author should not copy these basic low-dimensional settings. When adding settings, you should also enrich the settings. Otherwise, it will bring great limitations to your future creations, and more seriously, it will be called a low-dimensional copycat. For example, in terms of genes, the low-dimensional author referred to a lot of information. He can skillfully apply the content of these materials into the novel, but what about you? Have you checked it? It would be best if you checked it. If not, then after you write it, how should you round it up? If the content is the same, you will inevitably be criticized for plagiarism. If you want to innovate, but you don't have the knowledge to replenish your library, this will be very embarrassing.

The part where the protagonist's master overcomes the tribulation. . . The dialogue and fighting made me sick to my stomach. . . Especially the conversation between the headmaster and Li Taibai. . . It's not funny, it's not serious, it's not something that someone who stands at the top of the world can say. . . Or the style of painting should be doudou from the beginning. . . Now I can't get it up or down.

After reading the first few chapters, this book gave me the feeling that the protagonist was standing on top of an ant nest, looking down at the ant nest, then leaning up to the sky with his hands on his hips, laughing loudly and shouting to the ants that he was invincible! It feels so awkward!

Does this book have a female protagonist? I feel like the behind-the-scenes writing about the female protagonist's emotional scenes would be very toxic.

Why does every protagonist end up in a sect or something like that after arriving in another world? As power develops until it reaches the pinnacle of power, this book is almost finished. Can't we abandon these? Travel the world. Understand the landscape and ecology of this world. As small as an ant crawling across the ground. An eagle soaring in the sky. Fish swimming in the water. Wait, wait, wait... I have been scheming among sects and sects. Profits reach their peak. Little is known about this world for the reader. There was no mention of the strange creatures in that world. It feels like a living creature on our planet. It feels like nothing unusual. Seems common.

Technology doesn't talk about fantasy, and fantasy doesn't talk about technology. When I saw the word "battleship", I didn't even want to read it.

After watching Raising All Humans, I don't know why but I don't feel that much about this type of thing 😥

New book building. 🤓 There are three world views that create all worlds. The main world is the Tang Dynasty, Ming Dynasty, Han Dynasty, Song Dynasty, and some other small countries. The school of cultivation is Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism. His profession is weapon training, elixir training, and formation master. The training system is to train the body, train the Qi, train the spirit, and become immortal. 🤓 Power is the right way, the magic gate. Well, that's right, it's the various dynasties that flourished in ancient times, plus some martial arts animations, and the setting of the game King of Glory. The world created by Mo Bai also has two world lines, one is the prehistoric world, and the other is the starry sky and the world. Before that, there was the Taichu life that Mo Bai's body in his previous life transformed into. This is an interesting idea. When a person dies, he does not really die, but his body transforms into various terrifying creatures. This is the Taichu era. As soon as a being in Taichu is born, he has at least the cultivation level of a human immortal, which is equivalent to the god-king realm in the fantasy system. You can travel in the void for a short time, break through the limitations of the prehistoric world, and enter the starry sky. The birth of life in the Taichu Era will inherit part of the talent path. Of course, in the early days, although the Taichu beings had the realm of God Kings, they only had physical strength. Some Taichu beings had a little bit of talent that was a little crooked, and they might not necessarily be able to fly. The master of the prehistoric world is the path of immortality, and the starry sky and the world are the path of fantasy. All races in the starry sky were forced to flee deep in the starry sky by the beings from the beginning. So, the supporting actor you can choose is. The ascendants in Mo Bai's native world are the group of people who founded the Immortal Way. The original life in the Taichu Era can be imagined as a life that the readers have become a part of themselves, and what kind of talents they have. The existence of the ancient tribe, and who created a new cultivation system in the starry sky through the system of the ancient tribe. In the prehistoric Spring and Autumn Period, players should also be introduced. The players were extradited from the earth world. Big bosses can also imagine the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period and the Immortal Way, fantasy, and the Shinto after the gods have been enthroned. Will there be any collision on Qin's Human-Huang Avenue? Welcome to leave a message. 🤓 The general format is as follows: Name: Li XX World: the wild world, ascending to the wild world School: Demonic Way Race: Human Ability: so-and-so avenue, so-and-so magic weapon. Performance: Became a disciple of Luo Hu, and confronted the prehistoric saint. 🤓 The player format is as follows: Name: Lin XX Game name: Shuai De Bu Yao Bu Yao De World: Earth, the game enters the prehistoric era Genre and power: Military strategist, Qin Kingdom Race: Human Ability: Military formation, tiger and wolf division! Performance: One army destroys Baiyue.

The golden finger of the protagonist is already so awesome, why is he restricted to a sect? Why do you want to become a disciple? Develop according to your own ideas in the small world you create, and then. Lead them to create whatever they want. The results all belong to the protagonist. What kind of exercises, knowledge about the human body, etc. Isn't this what you want? This golden finger is omnipotent, okay?

I don't care about the plot. The key is that energy is not conserved. After taking in the energy of the Tianhuang Continent for a few minutes, the evolved world is actually more advanced than the Tianhuang Continent, with more spiritual energy. Is it confusing?

The protagonist looks very smart when he creates his own world. But once he arrives in the main world, he looks like a fucking idiot and doesn't understand anything.

I read nearly ten chapters. Not to mention unattractive, it's also very boring.

It's boring enough. I read 80 chapters without any highlights. I copied them here and there. How many chapters have I created to create a thousand races?

[I have a world where I can grow] Come and worship the great God! Come on, God!

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From the beginning to the end, I have been jumping in the same world. Is that the first world? That's a village. Also, the training system is too messy. In the real world, there are acquired gods and immortals who can be trained innately, but there are also golden elixirs and Yuanying that can be used to refine gods. There is no difference between in and out and peak. There is no differentiation in how much life span is increased, how much life can be reached, etc. There are still levels of magic weapons, but there are no elixirs, and the same goes for the treasures of heaven and earth. Okay, let's not talk about the real world, let's talk about the world created by the protagonist. The prehistoric cultivation system is even more chaotic. Only the first, second and third realms are differentiated. There is no difference between in and out and peak. There are no levels of elixirs, there are no magical metals, there are almost no magic weapons, and the cultivation system is chaotic. Martial arts system, cultivation system. Cthulhu system. The evil god system. What kind of half-life system is there for the ancient Celestial Demon Clan? The system of innate gods and demons. There is also the creation god system. There is actually a technology system behind it. By the way, there is also the Zerg, which is a hodgepodge of all systems anyway. Indifferent. He was actually born in the same world. Also, the timeline of the prehistoric world is too short. It will take at least tens of thousands or hundreds of thousands of years. You have lived for decades, decades. I just read two hundred chapters and I couldn't stand it anymore.

Please update the author every day. I don't ask you to update twice a day, I only ask you to update once a day!

Your power is boundless and you are unparalleled throughout the ages. When the protagonists point their fingers, they are all grandchildren

Take your time, I want to see the Ascended One appear.

Come on, author, don't be discouraged by the depressing words of others. Newcomers have become old fried dough sticks through the scorching heat of the frying pan, step by step. Now that I have the advantage of having a big imagination, I can grasp the plot well, slowly improve my writing skills, and then gradually grow into an excellent novel writer.

I found that I was being noticed again. The old rule was to collect it first and then talk about it. It's not easy for newcomers, it comes from being noticed. If you can read it, try to collect it and subscribe. The more new people there are, the more books everyone can read. Qidian's mobile reading is not very friendly to new writers and readers. Readers can only see lists and recommended books. If the author doesn't list and recommend, the book won't be known to others. This makes the new author spend a lot of time paying attention to others and thinking of ways to let others know about this book.

Didn't the author save the manuscript? I see others have it!

The timeline of the prehistoric era is too short, it's not interesting