Survive in the Wilderness and Start Becoming a Monster

After reading it, I felt that the overall rhythm and style of the book was good, making people laugh, and relaxed and enjoyable. But compared to the advantages, the shortcomings are too prominent. Poison point 1: There is a big problem with the image of the protagonist in the early stage. The heroine is lazy and lazy, and this image lasts too long. Although explanations will be given later, it is very likely that some book lovers will be persuaded to leave. Poison point 2: The character image is not full enough. For example, Xinyou lacks an eye-catching or distinctive character trait. Poison point 3: The plot is slightly confusing. There is insufficient foreshadowing in the early stage, and the foreshadowing that appears in the middle of the article seems vague and confusing. In summary, I still hope that the author will make appropriate revisions to the first dozen chapters. I have little talent and little knowledge, so don't criticize me if you don't like it.

To put it simply, the author wrote this book for pleasure. In order to write a cool article, the most basic logic is ignored. The heroine is mainly looking for someone to pretend to be a couple. Wouldn't it be more in line with normal people's IQ to find a retired soldier? Even if the heroine considers not wanting to be seen out as having a fake marriage for the show. Can't you find someone with good physical fitness? Do you have to find a male protagonist? Also to point out the topic, the male protagonist is a real person. Do it by force! You can hide your cheating! You can pretend to be a novice, but the protagonist is no longer a novice, but a waste. In the early stage, the male protagonist is not in good health, but no matter how delicate a man is, you can gather some firewood. Take a look at the fire and hit the target, you won't expose your golden finger, right? Looks like the Emperor! It just shows that he doesn't do anything! As for that? In short, the author wanted to write a self-improving heroine, but he made the heroine a willful person. I wanted to write a low-key and well-developed male protagonist, but I wrote the male protagonist as a fool with delusions of being persecuted.

You are forced to be weak and lethargic. Are you suffering from hypothyroidism or hypotension, insufficient blood supply to the brain? There are obvious poisonous points in the character setting. If you don't fall asleep when you get married, you will fall asleep once you get married? Adhering to the golden three-chapter rule, I will endure until chapter ten and return this virtue, but I can pull it off and see you later.

Dear pioneers, those of you who are in good health, I have been traveling in the world for three years, and I can't stand the realization, ha,, tui! ! !

It was really disgusting in the early days, but it got better later on.

I still give it a thumbs up, I can still read it when I'm bored, but it's a bit lacking.

The setting of this male protagonist is really not very likable. What the male protagonist should have done was done by the female protagonist. The heroine seems... Too strong. And you said first that this book is a sweet book, so it shouldn't be about filming a music video or holding hands with other boys or holding hands. Makes you feel uncomfortable. (Representing only personal opinions) 😐

This is great! It's just that some people's names are mixed up. Come on! This is purely said. It's a really good book.

The male protagonist is really disgusting. This is the first time I have seen a male protagonist who can make people sick. The female protagonist is very real, but the male protagonist is really rubbish.

I don't know what's going on, but I feel very unhappy. Pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger should not be the rhythm of Internet writing. It's fun to keep pretending and slapping people in the face so that readers don't run away.

I originally wanted to spray it, but after reading the book friend, he said everything I wanted to say, and I felt comfortable.

The book review successfully persuaded me to quit, don't blame me, read it yourself

It took me 100 chapters to develop into La Shou? You are so vicious, do you want a man and a woman to live a sexless life in the wilderness? Have you ever experienced sex? Two people live together every night. Do you understand what sex is?

After reading the previous dozens of chapters, the male protagonist is shaped like an NT. I don't know what to think.

To be honest, it's really addictive. I don't know what happens next, but I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 10. Don't tell me that I just traveled through time and my physical condition is not good enough so I can only sleep. Isn't it nice to not play with mobile phones and computers before recording the show? Why didn't I sleep at that time? I didn't think there was any machismo. The male protagonist should do everything, but he should do what he can, right? Are you so useless that you will die if you take even two steps? You are like a piece of trash, dominating others, why should you treat her as a training exercise? You are really awesome.

It's pretty good. Can you please stop criticizing those who have seen it once or twice?

What is the relationship between the author and Qidian editor? I have seen this book many times on the Daily Guide. I have read more than ten or twenty chapters, and I feel that it is not only poisonous but also poisonous.

After reading the first few chapters, I could barely read it, but after more than 20 chapters, I really couldn't read it anymore. Relaxed but not relaxed, sweet but not sweet, funny but not funny, and even grabbed things under the camera to engage in bullying, so poisonous...

Let me summarize some of the poisonous points: Raising hares, the heroine is too strong, the heroine grows up too fast after watching the video for a few months, the dog, and the setting of grabbing things These are damn poisonous points Instead of you sbs shouting that the male protagonist is too useless, it is really poisonous. You didn't even see clearly that the female protagonist was dragging the male protagonist into the water, so you are so chauvinistic. You'd better go back and see Mary Sue, that's suitable for you, because maybe there are too many rare words in the name, which will make you feel taller.

Chapter 16, death from poison! Not recommended for those who are not immune to all kinds of poisons! How terrible! What are the things being pushed on Qidian's homepage right now!

You are not acting as a monster, you are seeking death, acting as if you are poisonous.

To be honest, this is one of the most useless male protagonists I have ever seen in a male channel. Others are soft-boiled, but they are not so useless. He is like a big retard, and he says he can't exercise, like he has cerebral palsy. If you want to write this kind of male protagonist, don't post male videos. The real male protagonist is just a fw. Don't think that anyone can think so much. Why not write a novel if the female protagonist can think so much? You still act like the heroine can tell, and can't you take yourself into it and think about it? Bring yourself in. The heroine is a normal person and will be angry. I work hard and you don't dare to do anything by the side. You still want me to share the fruits of my labor with you? It's like if you don't know him, you have to give him half of your salary, and he doesn't have to do anything.

You are afraid that others will know that you have wilderness knowledge. I thought you were building an aircraft carrier, so shameful.

I think there is a problem with the setting of the protagonist. Although the protagonist has just traveled through time, his body and soul may be adapting, and he has no strength, he can still do what he can. To put it another step back, even if the protagonist has no strength at all, can't move his hands, can't carry his shoulders, then there should be at least respect and guilt. It calls it exercise, and actually pretends to be nonchalant. Is this what an individual should do? It wouldn't be like this even if you are facing a stranger, let alone a companion, even though you have known each other for a short time. I can barely accept the other settings, but the selfish look of the male protagonist is a bit... Some readers said that the later chapters are more beautiful and sweeter, but I can't hold on to the first ones. Do I have to skip directly? Hey, forget it, I don't want to say it anymore. Personal tastes may be different. These only represent my personal opinions. You can still go in and try it. Anyway, the front is free. The worst is that you will be poisoned, haha.

I've read over 50 chapters. I also read the comments before reading it. The person who criticized it probably didn't read it carefully. Details determine success or failure. If you want to read it, read the comments first. Don't follow the trend when reading. It's not just what they say. You must have your own opinion and try it yourself to see if it's good or not. .

I really can't stand this group of random people. Just read a few chapters and stop talking nonsense. Wouldn't it be better to be a quality person? I haven't read in the book that the male protagonist has just traveled through time and his body is not used to it. He can only adapt by sleeping. Besides, participating in this show is not voluntary for the male protagonist. What can you expect others to do for you if you have no feelings? I beg the author to add more details! {"NickName":"Xinyu","UserId":227953915}

I just saw the update, and then automatically jumped to the post. Are there a lot of comments about Sanguan? I thought about it carefully. Is there something wrong with my outlook on life? What's the problem? Eating soft food? Are you sure you read it carefully? Let me summarize a little bit about the poisonous points of the trainees that I roughly saw spraying. First, the male protagonist didn't work at the beginning. At the beginning, the male protagonist has just traveled through time and his body is still running out of energy and making him sleepy. What do you want him to do in this physical state? Expecting sick mice to do manual labor is your view? Second, pretend not to understand. The male protagonist was forced to participate rather than voluntarily. If you were forced to participate in something, would you still take the initiative to propose, guide and teach, and do it yourself? If so, I would like to call you the white lotus of the new century, a modern sage who paid for someone who was cheated. Third, the male protagonist acts like a monster and makes demands. As mentioned before, the male protagonist is unwell and can only say that he cannot do it. Secondly, the male protagonist is forced to participate. He originally quit after clearing his ability, but because he has an agreement and cannot withdraw voluntarily, he has to make trouble for the female protagonist to make her withdraw voluntarily. The motivation for this behavior is not a problem, but what is his way of making trouble? Food, clothing, housing and transportation are all problems that must be faced to survive in the wild for a long time. At the beginning, the male protagonist directly puts the biggest problem of persistence in front of the female protagonist. It is an ugly positioning. If the male protagonist does not mention it, will those problems disappear? Wouldn't the male protagonist be anxious if he didn't ask these questions? The problem has always been there and has been there since day one, very urgent. The female protagonist not only persevered (showing that participating was not just for fun), but also did not complain to the male protagonist (bonus points for the male protagonist's favorability), and also reluctantly fulfilled the male protagonist's request (barely scored 60 points), so the male protagonist came to help and raised the 60 points to 90 points. Is there a problem with this? Is this called eating soft food if you don't have a correct outlook on life? I'm afraid you may need to go back to the drawing board and start over. Next are some relatively poisonous points The heroine's early performance was too strong. The heroine's family is not that good, but she is a cold-faced goddess when she is a star. In other words, this woman has no money, no power, and is not good at catering to become famous. This means that the heroine is really strong. (Complaining, I think the real problem is cooking. A cold-faced woman with no power or money has become famous without any unspoken rules, which means she has strong talent. Strong talent = a lot of time to practice. Asking how the cooking skills are developed, I personally think that the current cooking skills have gone too far. Is it true that a strong student can do everything?) Raising rabbits. Raising rabbits is not a problem. Rabbits reproduce very quickly and provide a stable source of meat. The poisonous thing is that after raising rabbits, they become affectionate and don't want to eat them. You have never seen people who love raising small animals. If you don't raise them, you will kill them at will, and you will love them in every way. This cannot be considered a poisonous point. Dog. That dog was an official arrangement. Didn't you look carefully? The arrangement of the dog training master used to bring the two groups of people who had the medicine and the sick people together. (This may be a foreshadowing at present, because the official boss has done two things. The first one is to check the heroine at the beginning of the variety show. The second boss said that the heroine cannot quit and must be saved. This may be the heroine's most profitable live broadcast. It may also be that the heroine's grandfather or father is a former island explorer. The boss is also pursuing that secret.) Dogs are artificially arranged and have a purpose. How is this poisonous? Can you carry a medicine box, wait for someone, and know the way? I taught you in advance. The last thing is stealing. That's called taking it back. As for why not take more, there are drones filming it. It's shameful. Personally, I advocate tit-for-tat and blood-for-blood. So I don't say much. It's okay to take it. Not retaliating can only be interpreted as having a camera to save my face. But the male protagonist should not be soft-handed. He has a bottle of snake venom hidden and is waiting for the venom to come in handy. I finished writing, I feel comfortable, that's it for now.

Poison, poison, poison, you are more poisonous than drugs. Stay away from drugs and poisonous novels. Please cherish life.

It was not an ordinary book in the early stages. I held back and read a few more chapters, but I couldn't stand it any longer. I have never written a review in more than 10 years of reading. This is my first time for you.

After reading four chapters, the pig's feet are boring and lethargic, which is very poisonous. The pig's feet I wrote about are just like a hindrance.