I Can't Be Conquered as a Woman

It's a pretty good book, but it's a bit biased at the end. For example, I'd like to mention more about System Energizer. The description of the protagonist is a bit too wordy.

The writing style is very familiar, like "The Poor Man's Five Thousand Years" which I have read before. The writing style is very natural, just like the breeze that is meant to pass by so gently

I will be sending out a companion book. It is called "Things That Have Changed for Thousands of Years" and will describe the modern story from Jing Xiaoxiong's perspective. I am only satisfied with the first ten chapters of this book. To be honest, the writing is getting worse. Because my energy is scattered, I take online classes, learn football, watch videos, learn Japanese, including playing black and white games as a routine. As a result, except when I started typing, I didn't pay attention to the story at all the rest of the time. I am still too arrogant. I think that if I write like this, I will maintain the standard. Another reason for the decline in quality is that I feel that as Long Huaijun, she is not suitable to be the protagonist. Her lack of ambition and motivation gives me a headache. I always feel like she doesn't even care when I mention her. In an online article, the appearance of the protagonist makes me very embarrassed. He is not like other "Xianyu" protagonists. He is said to be Xianyu, but in fact he works harder than anyone else. She was simply too ordinary. She is more suitable to live in legend, and what she did to her actual end is completely worth mentioning. She is Xiao Longnu and also Yukino Momoka. This book must be written safely no matter what. This is what I ask of myself. At the same time, I will be more mature in modern plots. Try to write it as less confusing as possible. I once wrote a science fiction novel of 160,000 words. I once wrote a novel in junior high school and was executed by my class teacher in front of the whole class. Now I am attending a hopeless university, where there are pigs like me who have no dreams. But I still dream of something... Comments from readers, stories I wrote, some encouragement and awards. In this way, you will have a reason to persist. I once liked Haruki Murakami, and once imitated Mo Yan's magical reality. The results are not suitable for me. In the end, it was Xin Haicheng who saved me. This is not a farewell. This is called showing your heart, admitting your mistakes, and actively correcting them. You should be able to understand me, right? Haha.

Opinion Floor: If you feel dissatisfied or have other good ideas, you can complain here. I'm not good at writing in the third person, I hope someone can give me some advice (´-ω-`)

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel so uncomfortable. Let's not mention the weird connection between ancient China and modern Japan. I feel that the protagonist has no real sense of being alive. He has been drifting with the flow without goals, and it is not in line with modern people's values. For example, he was saved once and promised to be a family for the rest of his life. If it weren't for the introduction saying that he was single, he would have given up on the article. The ancient natives are okay, and it is not too inconsistent to put it on the protagonist who has traveled through time. I can't say anything about the writing, but I still want to complain about it.

When I saw that I joined the army for my father, I felt weird. Wuxia is not like martial arts, and fighting for hegemony is not like fighting for hegemony. In fact, it is difficult to write about martial arts and the army. If you can't write it well, it will look different. And you are the heroine...

The protagonist is too passive and has no sense of safety

Why is it that the protagonist of the ancient chapter is in China, but the modern chapter is in Japan?

It's weird. I thought it was a system document at the beginning, but I found out that it was just going through the motions. After a few pictures, I joined the army. I thought it would be something like fantasy, but in the end I found out that it was martial arts, or low-level martial arts.

It's easy to get a 404 on transformation stories, and this book is a minefield.

It's getting more and more wrong, and I can't stand it anymore after more than 10 chapters. Isn't it a man turning into a woman? Why do you have the nerve to say that a woman is disguising herself as a man? Isn't it possible to find the original self? I feel like the protagonist in the back already regards herself as a woman, and there is no essence of the transformation story... Eh~

I saw it accidentally, but the story feels like it has no beginning or end. It just doesn't have a precise reason, and it's too far-fetched. It may be that it was greatly influenced by the poor man, so I personally think that the entire first part is a complete failure.

It was good at first, but now the more I watch it, the more uncomfortable I feel. I don't know what's going on, and I feel like I can't stand it any longer.

Married or Lily or single?

Well, I can't say any gorgeous words to describe this book. It's very light, very strange, and very beautiful.

Amazing writing style, rare in online writing

After reading more than ten chapters, the writing style of this book is good, but the biggest drawback is that the writing is completely different. The martial arts does not look like martial arts, the military does not look like the military, and the pig's feet do not look like a time traveler, but a native of this life.

It's fine now, but it's a little short.

I would like to ask the author, has the protagonist always been 15 years old? I feel like it's better to set it at 18-22 years old, at least you're an adult.

Come on, maybe you can catch up with the poor guy

Sorry, I may not be able to keep reading. I am already out of touch with the plot. I will leave if I give you one more tip at the end. Author, I hope you can write better works and let us meet again.

Come and eat ashes in my collection, I like this style of writing,

It doesn't matter if you don't look at it, you are a time traveler. Still a woman. Why are you so strong?

It's amazing that it's actually on the shelves. Please give me support for your first subscription, even though I no longer watch it.

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As long as you write about Xin Haicheng, I will follow you

It's over without an ending? Ask if there is a book club

Can you tell me, if you are married, if you are single, it would be good for everyone.