Feeding the King Brings Trouble

▲Overall Comment: As a book of ancient Chinese proverbs, this book has beautiful writing, ups and downs of the plot, tight story structure, and vivid characters. From some ancient rhyme words in the article, we can see the author's profound literary foundation, and it reads comfortably and naturally. Although the rhythm control of some plots is still somewhat lacking, overall it is a rare and good book. ▲Microscopic Advantages 1. Writing style: The writing style of this article is ancient, but it is not completely retro and obscure. Instead, some common vocabulary is mixed in to make the article read fluently, without losing the unique charm of ancient sayings. 2. Plot: The plot of this article is ups and downs and fascinating. It has both the emotional line of the male and female protagonists and the current situation line. The two lines are neither intertwined nor confused, and the reading is smooth. And it can be seen that the author has a profound skill in shaping the image of small characters. The supporting characters such as King Xin and Concubine Xie have their own personalities with just a few opening words. 3. Grand View: The distribution of paragraphs in this book is reasonable. Although some plot paragraphs are still crowded and lengthy, it generally does not affect reading. The plot of this book has a good momentum of development. The main characters have three correct views. It is visually estimated that the long-term development prospects are very high. There are basically no obvious shortcomings in the overall view. Weaknesses 1. Concreteness: The plot of this article is fascinating, but there are still narrative deficiencies in some plots, and the description is slightly less. Although the whole thing can be written smoothly, it is still weak in concreteness. 2. Macro: The macro of this article is a little small (maybe because the number of words is a bit small now and the plot is not spread out). The events develop slowly, resulting in a slightly weaker ability to control the rhythm. However, generally speaking, it tends to be gentle, and there is no obvious rhythm chaos. 3. Protagonist: The supporting role in this article has a clear image, and the heroine can also see the rigorous and solemn character she has created. However, the image is still not fuller than the supporting role, and the male protagonist is not vivid enough in shaping, and the character characteristics are not distinct enough. The hero and heroine are the soul of a book. I hope you can add more descriptions in the future development, which will make your book more outstanding among ancient Chinese novels. I hope you can get better and better, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง By: Baidu Tieba, Jingmeng Yuanran

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This work was written based on the system of the Han, Wei and Jin dynasties. It can be seen that the author has certain historical knowledge and has made sufficient preparations. The writing style is becoming increasingly mature, and the storyline is very attractive, with ups and downs and interlocking links. Highly recommended! I hope everyone will pay more attention, vote more, and repost more! You won't be disappointed! 🙏🙏

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