My Magic Weapon Is Bricks

Except for the two advertising guys, I am probably the first person to post this in the comment section. Let's talk about the perception first. The setting and plot of this book are great. It made me laugh out loud basically every two chapters. It's really interesting, especially the protagonist's handstand skills and hitting people with bricks. I think these two settings are really creative and can be developed vigorously. As for suggestions, I am very satisfied with the content of the novel and can't fault it, but I feel that the title of the book is not very good, because the first thing readers read when choosing a book is the title, followed by the introduction, and then the content, so the title should match the characteristics of the novel as much as possible. As for the current title "My System is called Xiaohei", the only element that can make people understand is the word "system". It feels like a pity. If someone hadn't spoiled the plot of this book in advance on the Qidian Post Bar, when I saw this title, I would not have thought of clicking in to read it. So, I personally feel that changing the title will be more attractive (such as "Sand Sculpture System Accompanying Me", "My Sand Sculpture System", etc.). In short, I just want to put the core features of the article in the readers' faces. Therefore, I still suggest that the author first Baidu the steps to change the book title. As for whether to change it in the end, it is up to you to decide. The above is purely my personal opinion. Please ignore anything that sounds unpleasant. The book is still very interesting! 😁

It made me laugh so hard, I was really convinced, the author is really capable

66666666666666My admiration for the author is like a surging river, endless. Another example is a new moon rising slowly. Like a white foal passing by, it is fleeting.

Just read this book and have fun. I really don't understand the plot or anything, but I just make do with it. When it comes to comedy, you are really unique in your writing, and your writing is very good in developing this aspect. Sometimes a good book is not so balanced, but has one aspect that stands out far beyond its peers. Come on.

Come on, come on 😆😆😆

It actually works, let me laugh to death because of my stupidity, but I don't have any recommendation votes.

The new chapters have a tendency to shift towards a serious main line. Well, that's pretty good. It's a bit of a joke when it needs to be, and it's a fire when it's time. Just like the early Gintama, there's absolutely nothing wrong with it. But I just feel it's a bit strange why the protagonist fell off a cliff and almost died, and then grew mentally. . . Gives me an unexpected look. Personally, I think that mental growth is a serious plot, and it must be matched with serious setbacks. It just so happens that the plot just mentioned that Jian Yin is a young boy. If I were to give an example, I would write that the protagonist and his group managed to escape from the mountains, but were betrayed and plotted by Jian Yin, which led to the protagonist's almost death. This would lead to Xiao Hei's discouragement and the protagonist's inner growth, which would be better. Of course, the above are all personal opinions, and I look forward to the follow-up. 😁