Japanese Manga Urban Ninja

I feel like the author has no outline, and the early and middle stages are okay, but now it's either detective work with Conan or daily life is not interesting at all. In order to open the Sharingan, the teacher died of old age and his girlfriend sent him away. In the end, he forced Saori Kido into the story. It felt very awkward, and there were some typos. . . . . . Don't say too much. Anyway, I don't know what the author is thinking. I guess the author is confused and doesn't know what to think. Anyway, the quality has been declining, and the author should adjust his state.

I want to know where Chapter 408 went?

There is something about this cover!

Can the author get past these unimportant plot points? As a ninja, the protagonist doesn't have to fight. Instead, he solves the case with a detective. Either add more fighting scenes, or let the protagonist become a detective.

The main character's name is too inconsistent and he keeps making dramas🤫

Author, I would like to ask, when will the protagonist possess the Sharingan? The powerful protagonist who controls everyone in the Conan plane should also have the Sharingan. It is best for the protagonist to walk around a little bit. I don't remember the name of the plot of Hakusho. The Rinnegan Mangekyou Sharingan is a must.

The dialogue is very funny. The author might as well read the dialogue in the original work, even if it is a Chinese dubbed version. Take Maori Kogoro as an example. Unfamiliar people, such as the client in the case, are called: surname + honorific = Mr. Maori Relatively familiar people, such as the friends in the mahjong parlor, are called by the surname, which is Maori Very familiar friends, relatives, and family members can call him by his first name, Kogoro. Except for introducing someone, no Japanese would call someone by their full name without hostility, OK?

My name is Lin Feng again. I remember that seven or eight years ago, when I first started reading novels, there was someone named Lin Feng. Now basically every year I see at least 5 books with the protagonist named Lin Feng. It was originally gone this year, but it reappeared. By the way, there is also someone named Ye Feng. Lin Feng, Lin Feng, Ling Feng, Ling Feng, Ling Feng Ye, Maple Leaf Feng, and there are a bunch of people named Su. In recent years, there seem to be more and more people named Luo. Alas╯╰ It's not that these names are bad, but they do get a bit boring after seeing them too much.

I can't stand it anymore. You are the main character. Do you think a child can be more powerful than Uchiha Madara with two sets of punches? You are writing as if a primary school student can fight the Five Kages by doing push-ups. What else are you writing? Go ahead and save the world! There is really no room for this book on my bookshelf, so, never again!

Author, did you copy everything you wrote from others? I saw the part about the foggy dog. The wizard in the detective world was written in 2016. You changed the name of the protagonist and copied it word for word.

I suggest the author to read a novel called "The Wizard of Detective World", which is also a time traveler in the world of Conan. The overall plot arrangement is very smooth. The daily plot, tense plot and slap-in-the-face plot are relatively arranged very reasonably.

Should we ask Dr. Ali to come up with this? ヽ(ﾟДﾟ)ﾉ

What a trap. I said earlier that I was going to dress up Conan as a girl on Saturday, but I ended up running away to play some kind of game. I lost so many chapters in the game, and when I finally came back, I didn't dress up as a girl for Xiao Ke.

Plagiarism is so shameful. I just watched Detective World: The Witcher, so I still have an impression of the protagonist and Koizumi Anko's capture of Kiritengu. The plagiarism is really excessive, so I will report it decisively.

I think Officer Megure is a very upright police officer, and I don't like the author's calling him a "deadbeat"!

After reading a few chapters, I feel like the author doesn't know much about Conan's plot.

Regarding the environment and action plot, there is basically no plot. The whole process is just language. At that time, I felt that the writing was awkward.

Don't read this book with your brain in mind, it insults your IQ.

Two pictures of the garden

Hey, it's still mainly about Conan and Phantom Thieves, with the addition of Sailor Moon Mangekyo and Yu Yu Hakusho's skins, as well as a wizard role from Detective Conan... I don't remember if there is Inuyasha, and there are no spiritual snacks! !

The first plot was changed to this, I'm really speechless

Why are you being trolled by so many people? No one was trolled after reading my book.

What the hell are you not watching? How come the heroine is the one I don't recognize? I haven't watched Conan before.

If the protagonist has a problem with his shoulder, just tell him, don't shrug it off all the time...

To do things by force is illogical and embarrassing.

When I saw Okino Yoko's case and where the protagonist picked up her hair, I knew that the author would definitely write that Ikezawa Yuko was the murderer. Eh, nothing new.

Are there any friends who are still watching? Who is the heroine?

It shouldn't be based on the world of Conan, it can be a combination of several love worldviews

Doesn't it look like her ex-boyfriend committed suicide? How did you change him to kill him? Can anyone tell me?