Great Country and Heavy Tank

After reading less than 50 chapters, I gave up. The pig's trotters in the book understand this and that, and I only understand it. If someone has traveled through time or been reborn, it would be excusable. As a native of this time and space, I just don't know how to pretend to understand. When I was in military uniform, I often fired artillery at the national shooting range. When I saw the section on school artillery, I was speechless. First, to calibrate the gun, aim at the benchmark (three o'clock and one line) at 1,000 meters through the firing pin hole in the rear of the gun and the muzzle crosshair, and then adjust the peripheral sight to also aim at the benchmark. At this time, it is considered that the sight and the bore axis are coaxial (actually there is an angle, but it is very small and can be ignored); second, pig's feet also need to compile a shooting table, do you need to compile it? Where do you think the reticle in the scope comes from? If you don't have a shooting chart, you can try to engrave the marks for me. Also, do you know how many people and how long it takes to compile a shooting chart? Let me tell you, in the 1970s, it took a dozen people three months to compile a shooting table using the computers of the time. The part about why Pigfoot's father died is also speechless. The military production system has a clear division of labor. The No. 1 Machinery Factory was a tank factory at the time. It was only responsible for producing tanks and not supporting ammunition. Therefore, it was absolutely impossible for the No. 1 Machinery Factory to sacrifice its father because of the trial production of new ammunition.

To be honest, it's really hard to imagine that you wrote this book

Damn it, stop watching. It's all drama and intrigue. It took more than 300 chapters to introduce a new car. The structure of the new car is almost the same as the history, and there is no creativity at all. Then it continues to pour water into a new car that has no creativity at all. If it continues to pour water, it will make me want to vomit.

Memorial

After reading more than 200 chapters, I can't stand it any longer. It's very stiff and lacks passion. It's a lengthy process of writing data and introduction. How about reading the article?

I think it's fine if you write about the protagonist entering the R&D room and designing a 40-ton MBT called Type 421, and then the R&D process is arbitrary, and then writing about the protagonist designing the foreign trade MBT called WZ35120 is much better than your current plot.

From 69 to 79 to 80, 85, 88, Khalid, 96, 99, 99A, half a century of running has finally achieved results.

Author, after reading it, I found that most of your articles contain time-travel themes, which seem very contradictory. I suggest changing them to time-travel or rebirth to enhance the sense of immersion.

After following the author's works for so long, I feel that foreign history is better.

The military industry should be more practical and stop playing tricks.

The writing is good, there are few good military novels, but the real situation is that tanks will be eliminated in the future, and the main ground battle weapons in the future will be multi-functional armored fighting vehicles. It is recommended to add more air support weapons, otherwise the future development will be too narrow.

There is a book about a man who was reborn as an airplane manufacturer. The protagonist has a forward-looking vision and knows the development trend. However, he directly designed the aircraft, which was very advanced, and then built it, but I was bored. Who doesn't know the situation in China? Does China lack design talents? ? What's missing is materials and precision processing. . These two things need to be done well, otherwise heart disease will come from nowhere. .

Aviation, tanks, and later a giant ship will be all in one.

It's all rubbish. Not to mention that in those days, being a modern person wouldn't be that bad. No one would look down on you. Technology is king Technology is king Technology is king This important thing is said three times. Not to mention that in those days, even now, anyone who can handle technical matters is regarded as a treasure. As a result, everyone looks down on the protagonist every day and has a grudge against everyone. People should also pay attention to meeting each other in the future, right? As for writing a fantasy protagonist with enemies all over the world? I can't watch it at all

The Babylonian Empire, the Dominance of South Asia, the Red Soviet Union, and an American book. These four books are really good to read, but it's a pity that Qidian doesn't allow me to write them now.

Are realistic novels so difficult nowadays? Alas, people are too eager for quick success. What Qin Zhenhua represents is that our military workers have bravely taken the lead to develop and grow on the basis of poverty and nothing. It seems cool to travel through time and space, but it is too fake. Don't we all have the courage to face the past?

How could such a garbage novel be written? I read the beginning and it made me sick. A small master, a few apprentices, and a deputy human resources department in a military factory can be lawless in a large national military factory. The security department has no guns. In the 1970s and 1980s, he was fired after stealing things from the factory, and he can still serve as a soldier. How could this be written? Some people are bragging about this author. I almost vomited.

What to say about this book? The author has never been a soldier, and does not even know about ordnance maintenance. He is a bit ignorant and pretends to understand. It is obscene. I am a 98-year-old soldier and a tank driver. I drive a 59 modified tank driver. Tank driver training lasted for 10 months. Not only driving, but also vehicle maintenance. Troop vehicles are basically repaired and maintained by themselves. Very few are returned to the factory. No, there are ordnance repair shops. The technology is no lower than or even higher than that of the manufacturer. Cleaning the gun on a tank vehicle is not done by one or two people holding a gun brush and brushing the inside of the gun barrel. It is useless to fool around. It is a company with more than 30 people in one vehicle. They wrap the gun brush in white cloth and pull it out from the gun bed again and again. Repeated many times, tank base training and even more than 100 people paint a vehicle together. It's very uncomfortable to see a layman pretending to know how to write a book, especially when writing about professional issues.

In those years, the central government did not give much support to the development of military industry and focused on economic development. This was the right path. How did Mao Xiong collapse? They all failed because of the arms race. They were like the Bald Eagle. The high-end Star Wars plan was unrealistic and they didn't have the capital to apply Huawei's military and industrial technology to civilian applications.

This kind of novel is boring to write about intrigue. Can't we just unite together? Do you just like to write about your own people so badly? I have found that many authors like this kind of writing style, all kinds of Westernization, forcing Western styles to be used.

The tank is a miserable weapon of war. To say that a tank is strong is to say that it is really strong. It is true that it is rampant and within range. To say it is weak is to say that it is really weak. Nowadays, individual anti-tank guns are very popular, and large-caliber sniper guns can also hit tracks. He is a target in front of the helicopters and fighter jets in the sky. The effect is too useless.

I am an old machine person from the 1960s. I am very happy to see you write the story there. Come on!

First, the protagonist should solve the problem of the forging machine. Is there a shortage of designers in China? Lack of materials? Lack of engine design? There is no shortage of these, there are piles of drawings. Either the counterfeiting is too high, it needs to be forged in another country, or it is not released early, or the quality is not up to standard. Look at how Yun-10 dismounts! Isn't the material good? Not good at design? No. For there was no forging machine to satisfy it. In 2013, there was an 80,000-ton membrane forging machine. Previously, the maximum was a 40,000-ton hydraulic press. Moreover, the forging effect of many parts of the hydraulic press was not good. For example, a gun barrel requires a forging machine of more than 30,000 tons, and titanium alloy materials generally require film forging. Heavy-duty forging machines are the foundation and core of heavy industry. Then there is the furnace, which must be an electric furnace. Whether it is arc or electroslag, it must have it. The carbon furnace has too many impurities and is simply not qualified. With these two items, there are basic materials that can be processed, and the machine tool can be used, regardless of the number of axes. Not to mention asking other countries to help make it. At that time, the only ones that met the conditions were the United States, Germany, and the Soviet Union. Many materials were kept secret, and the finished products and scraps had to be weighed. Some of them needed to be accurate to the gram. Even if confidentiality was not required, others had to be willing to make it for you.

I was very disappointed when I saw Chapter 66 First of all, there is no golden finger. He is just an ordinary person but knows everything. Are everyone else fools? In addition, up to Chapter 66, it was almost all about intrigues and basically no contribution to the factory.

This intrigue, pretense and slap in the face are too much

As someone who has worked on both 256 and 617, I feel that the author does not even have a superficial understanding of the military industry and supporting equipment. He takes it for granted that he can talk and do it. Can the main engine manufacturer make requirements for the engine? The Military Research Institute will not fight you to death, and Huachai will kill you soon. Can the main engine factory change the artillery? The Military Research Institute just ignored you. The military representative immediately left the army and retired. The director of the second machine factory (at the ministerial level) immediately dismissed get out of class. Believe it or not.

Someone recommended this book on a book list, and I read more than sixty chapters. Well, I thought it was an industrial novel, but it turned out to be Gong Dou + Long Aotian, which was a huge disappointment.

Why do today's novels of this kind always start with intrigue? Like TM politicians, they cannot resign unless they have to fight?

It feels like you are writing a script. It can be made into a TV series, which is in line with contemporary core values. It feels similar to "Falcon of the Great Power", with one tank and one plane. The plot is a bit slow and not enjoyable to read, but the writing is pretty good. Maybe you could consider writing a screenplay.

It's frustrating to read, it's a very old-fashioned, pretentious and slap-in-the-face article. There is nothing but being targeted.