
Overhaul of Super Seminary
超神学院之大修者
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- 1.0M Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
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- 5y ago
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- Qidian
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Helpless, if you write about cultivating immortals, you will cultivate immortals, and your combat power is unclear. Let alone the golden immortal who suddenly became a golden immortal. The golden immortal who traveled through ten years is nothing. Run, follow the monkey's fighting strength. He can be on par with the Golden Immortal as a Mysterious Immortal with his martial arts. You, a Golden Immortal, can't beat the Mysterious Immortal. What a fool. Super God writes nondescript and Immortal Cultivation is a mess. Can we sort out the Silk Road and write it? It is a good idea to bring fantasy and immortality into the world of science and technology, but writing it without uncertainty and understanding will only ruin the book. If you do it just to make some gimmicks and attract attention, the book will be useless.
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Twelve years of compulsory education has taught us a truth. Read novels and write reviews. You can't just say he is poisonous! Something. We need to write an article to discuss him, to make the author deeply understand all his shortcomings, and to hope that the author will not be so ignorant in his next book. Creating is far more difficult than you think. I have also written novels myself, and it was really nerve-wracking. 😅😅😅
The more I watch Super Seminary, the more desperate I become. What era can best give birth to creatures like heroes? The Dark Ages. How dark is the background of the Super Seminary to the people on earth? Except for genetic warriors like Ge Xiaolun, everyone else is just cannon fodder. Super Seminary occupies the earth for research and consumes resources. Have they given anything to the earth? We cannot interfere with the development of low-level civilizations, you must progress freely. Shameless enough. What thoughts did the Super Seminary instill in Ge Xiaolun and others? You will be the Lord God of the Galaxy in the future, and you will be the warriors under the Lord God. There are other things about the country, and there are things about the Chinese people. Why did Kesha die? Because she blocked the way to the Super Seminary. How did he die? The knife passed by Kiran, the hand moved by Morgana, the damage repaired by Rena, and the soil buried by Karl. Then Angel Birch came out, Angel Yan returned to his hometown from the earth, and became the guardian angel designated by the Super Seminary to be the future Lord God of the Galaxy. Angel Yan had no choice at all under the circumstances, otherwise the enemies Angel would face were the Super Seminary, as well as those civilizations that had been judged by absolute justice and those who peeked at Angel's technology. At that time, Angel Yan still wanted to cause trouble on Earth, but Carl gave Angel Birch a level up with a backhand. The Super Seminary poked Angel Yan in the nose and said: I warn you that if you cause trouble again, you will die. What is Super Seminary? It is a large-scale scientific research institution, and the Milky Way is the experimental site. Ge Xiaolun and the others are experimental products, Carl is the quality inspector, Rizdukao is the nanny, Reina is the energy source, and Kieran is the anti-virus software. The higher civilizations in the universe are the audience, the middle civilizations want to fish in troubled waters, and the lower civilizations are all cannon fodder. Kesha wanted to cause trouble, but ended up in trouble. Angel Yan thought, if she was not the guardian angel of Ge Xiaolun, the second Pojie would definitely appear.
As the top Immortal World in the Ancient World, the author, I don't want to see the kind of weak Golden Immortal whose fifth generation divine body is equal to the Golden Immortal.
What washes Morgana off is really poisonous. Does the three senses follow the five senses? Don't you understand what's happening on Earth? The Experimental Field of the Gods, a testing ground to verify the existence of the void. The people on earth are just a bunch of cannon fodder. After the invasion of the gluttonous demons, less than half of the human race is left. China, where the protagonist exists, barely survives, and the United States is playing ball. Morgana only wants the earth and doesn't care about the life or death of the people on earth. What did she say? Don't destroy her favorite home. Not allowing Taotie to use star-destroying weapons is not for the good of humanity. Angels at least abide by the rules. If the earth doesn't agree, they won't force them. If Kesha dies, the earth will fall. Who is to blame? Aren't dead people able to guide the world by themselves? Given the circumstances, those who died definitely include your whitewashing party.
The protagonist, Xiaobai, is brainless, not enterprising, and has a strong self-esteem. Starting with Jin Xian, he called himself the Emperor of Heaven. He fought against Angel Yan in Kunlun Mountain and was beaten into a dog in a fight. Then he shouted to see through the autumn water and won with a long sword on his neck. Read the book review and say that if you marry an angel, only the queen of this world will wear the Emperor of Heaven. I really don't know what the author said in the early stage about Dukao and you invaders, and what kind of skills should not be passed on to people other than the descendants of Yan and Huang. He also called himself the Emperor of Heaven, and then a group of people transformed there. How powerful the myth of Heaven is. Believe it or not, in the case of you and Angel Yan fighting, Pan Zhen Angel of Super Seminary Duka Oriz Fierce Sun Star would jointly beat the protagonist to death on the spot. Don't think it's impossible. The core power of Lieyang Star was cut off by an outsider, and there was no reaction. Just like the switch on the US nuclear weapon is gone, what kind of reaction is impossible? The alien Dukao was told to get lost at the beginning. Do you really think that the war madman is a good gentleman? The purpose of the Super Seminary is to create gods in the Milky Way. Their plans have been laid out, but when you come up, they tell them to go away. You tell them whether they will fuck you. The protagonist's first battle must be an extremely crushing gesture to intimidate some people and be worthy of the title of Emperor of Heaven. The protagonist ran away in the battle with Angel Yan. What can you do to scare Karl, Super Seminary, Lieyang Star and other cosmic civilizations? For a civilization system that is completely different from dark energy, and the strongest person in this civilization is not very strong, he is like a shark that smells blood. The protagonist's attitude towards Dukao in the early stage is right, but the protagonist should not expose the fact that he is weak. The protagonist has no money to waste at all. He is said to be a golden immortal, but he is a third-generation civilian who is not even a soldier. This is still saying he is strong. Do you think Kieran is interested in a training system that is completely different from technology? Don't tell me that Kieran is a good gentleman. If he were a good gentleman, the big clock would not be in Karl's hands. Believe it or not, the Taoist Master's jade plate of creation was stolen by a Taoist boy. Lie Yangxing probably wants to kill the protagonist the most. He takes someone else's nuclear button switch and shows it off in front of others, because he doesn't want to die quickly enough.
Please ask the author for other protagonists to join the Super Seminary
In the first few chapters, the author really wanted to imitate the painting style of Super God, but the author did not notice that animation is different from novels. The same content that the author spent several hours writing and the reader who finished reading in three minutes has a different feeling. An animation may put one frame in a novel and 500 words cannot describe that feeling. Actually, I felt pretty good when I endured it until I read Chapter 30. For example, the first time I read it in the 10th year of the Qin Dynasty might have been a bit toxic, but when I read it the second time, I felt that it was only reasonable to come back after spending thousands of years in other worlds, so that I could have the look of the Golden Crow. There is also the issue of realm. Why are there so many great masters from ancient times? The author of this book is the real God of Creation. Your prehistoric characters are awesome. Pangu came to the world. If the author asks him to die in the next chapter, he will not survive the few thousand words of this chapter. I can see my sense of superiority after reading a novel. In The Ancient World, immortals and gods create and destroy the world, transcending time and space. It's so fierce. That's in other books. The author of this book wrote it this way and you just read it. All you can do is not read it. I was so addicted that I skipped to Chapter 9. Isn't this the end? Reading novels, you can see that the sense of superiority is really awesome. If there is a novel in which Jinxian is killed by the Replicator Alliance, will you be angry to death? Looking at the people in the chapter reviews who all embarrass me, I really want to laugh. I am so angry after reading a novel, hahahahahaha
New book friends are welcome to try the drug.
Welcome all book friends to join the book. To be honest, Yi Kuan is just a new author, so there are inevitably some poisonous points in his creation and the plot is a little off. Everyone needs to bring in the combat power settings from other works. Be more sincere. The last sentence, I read everyone's book reviews backstage, and to be honest, the writing is better than my novel! ! ! Everyone is welcome to correct mistakes. But please don't curse. Yisuan will not reply to curses, nor will he scold you, because it is not necessary. When I have time, I will add a few more words so that those book friends who support me can see the new chapters earlier, so I will only delete them silently and ban them permanently.
Morgana, do you want to wash it? She is a fallen angel herself, when has she ever been nice to humans. Use your little worm brains to think carefully about how many human beings can live under the righteous judgment of angels. Do you think anyone can marry an angel? Marrying Morgana is more reliable than marrying the Angel King. Who is Ge Xiaolun? He is the main god of the Galaxy designated by the Super Seminary, the power of the Galaxy recognized by every civilization in the universe, and the main force in the future battle against the void. Angels say they are righteous, but are they righteous to humans? After judging two-thirds of mankind, are angels still righteous in the eyes of mankind? When it comes to relationships, is it an angel who has a crazy brain, or you who haven't mastered a single basic knowledge has a brain that is crazy. Do you have a common language? You don't even know what justice and order mean for others, yet you still want to mess with them. Wow, Miss Angel is so beautiful, I want to have sex so much. Wake up! People can read minds. Do you think Angel Hua has this mentality? You still despise Angel Hua, you are not even as good as him. You have been a former angel king since you were young and have received education from interstellar civilization. As for you, you have not learned the basic physics of pre-nuclear civilization well.
Kesha is Hua Ye's guardian angel, which disgusts me so much. I guarantee that not many people will read it when you write it like this.
The Heavenly Soldiers and Heavenly Generals are coming out soon. The author has set that according to what Sun Wukong said, Daluo is at least equal to the sixth generation. Then Taiyi is equal to the fifth generation, Jinxian is equal to the fourth generation, Xuanxian is equal to the third generation, True Immortal is equal to the second generation, and Heavenly Immortal is equal to the first generation. So even if the immortal is set to be so weak, it will at least be a god of the same level and not a super warrior, such as a second-level god. > Celestial Immortal ≥ Level 1 God > Super Soldier, after all, in the original work, even Level 1 God is > Third generation Super Soldier. Although the difference between God and Super Soldier is blurred, the difference between God and Super Soldier is clearly defined. Refer to Yan and Chi Xin, God is the one who has the body of God, and all of them are Super Soldiers without the body of God, although sometimes they are all called Super Soldiers.
The biggest problem for those who write super seminary fan fiction is Angel. Angel has many cerebral palsy fans and you can't help but say something bad. However, Angel's rude image is not suitable for the protagonist. The protagonist is the Emperor of Heaven. Offending the majesty of the Emperor of Heaven should be a big problem, but he still can't kill her.
I read a few chapters, I'm sorry I quit, I couldn't bear it and it made me a little embarrassed.
Author, I have been following this book since you wrote it. I am waiting for your update every day. It is well written, but the word count was a little low before. I hope you can add more chapters and word count after you put it on the shelf 🤭🤭🤭
Sure enough, the whole article is filled with poison every day. Shennong will die no matter how many times he comes.
Seeing that she gave up marrying an angel decisively, she became the emperor of heaven and married a star angel. Like a licking dog.
Everyone can give up. You can see from the recent update that this is a ghostwriter. I don't even know what he wrote. Give up.
Author, can you stop doing this? If you want to open a new book, go ahead and open it. But can you not write this and that in the book? It's very annoying 😅😅😅
*Chapter: Intrusion, good water, cheating money, this kid
What a mindless lick from the back, you don't want to accept a woman wholeheartedly (Kesha), and what's wrong with you? A chapter describing the background of any supporting character? Why did Elizabeth and the others suddenly become the protagonists? Now the protagonist starts licking them again. It's really disappointing. I feel like Ruoning is doing better than the protagonist.
The author updates the question! ! !
Guess what the author is doing? Yes, the author is moving bricks, laundering sand, and transporting stones. Tens of thousands of kilograms of building materials in one day. The author discovered that I am an architectural talent delayed by novels! ! !
Isn't the heroine unworthy? ? ? The protagonist doesn't accept it?
Author, it's been a few days
This cuts JJ, 😡
What a trap. . . . . . . Still a poison pit
The back of the story is erroneous and careless,
You can't beat a Golden Immortal, but you can't beat a Third Generation. It's probably because the Golden Immortal is a realm, has no experience in fighting, and doesn't have magical powers. Your self-statement of identity was so awesome at the beginning, and others barely believed it. Didn't you do this to show others that you are nothing? And you don't need to fight back the Xuanxian awakened by the pool! You just came back and you were sitting on the big throne. In a blink of an eye, the three generations were beaten and disappeared. Then the 100 Xuanxian was eating shit. The most important thing about holding the grass is that the golden immortal can't beat the three generations without magical powers. If you have it, you can only beat the three generations. So what is the big Luo? How to calculate the next five generations 🙂
It would be boring to read a few chapters of the invincible book given at the beginning.