Butterfly Swirl

This is a true suspense novel! ! ! Except for the length of the second chapter, which is a bit too laborious in terms of details, overall it is a trap within a trap, which is quite exciting! ! ! (If you really want to write the second paragraph, I suggest you make it more compact, add some little excitement, small conflicts, etc... Don't be so vain as you are now!)

The first story is short and concise! Attract attention! ! ! Why is the second story currently a bit of a suspense drama? ? ?

The author is a literary and artistic criminal, the second young man 😁, let's work together!

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's over if it's not satisfying... What a pity! I hope the author can work hard! ! !

The latest chapter 4 has many highlights. The author is very experienced in describing many scenes and details! It's just a conflict. The description of the collision is too bland and the points are not prominent... Come on, author! The more you write, the better! ! ! I am increasingly looking forward to how the author will come true in the end? Sad or happy? Or a Möbius strip? ? ?

Sprinkle flowers greatly😊

I'm complaining about the inexplicable third chapter... It's only 4 chapters, is it a continuation of the past? ? ?

Come on, come on 😡

I personally understand that your intention is to "go back to the past", "important nodes", "change history", "butterfly effect" and "important choices"! I don't know, right? Your first story didn't reflect the "butterfly effect" choices you made on the lake! I don't know how you would deal with this "choice" if you subjectively don't know how it will change history. ? ? This "choice" should be the key to whether your book will be popular, and it is the most important test for you as an author!

The 12 books will be finished at 12pm tonight! Hahahahahahahahaha

The second story is too watery! ! ! I think your collection of short group portraits is very good, but if you grasp the key points, the taste of yours will change too much! ! !

Some readers questioned the rhythm of the story. Alas, the book only has about 100,000 words in total. If we only tell the outline of the story, it will be finished in three to five thousand words. If we talk about the framework, it will be finished in a few hundred words. Hahahahaha. The fan of the female channel said that the category I chose was quick travel. There is nothing I can do about it. The content of my story only fits this category. It is not my fault that other authors classified this category as quick travel~ Have you seen the movie "The Butterfly Effect"? If it comes to a female channel, do you have to choose this category? My first 500,000-word book, which I had written for three or four years, was blocked for half a year, so I opened this book. That book was meant to make myself happy, but this one opens very accidentally, and can be said to be restless and fast-paced! (The reason for irritation: the contract letter has been sealed for half a year and cannot be released - write another book - a plot involving a cat - I accidentally bought a sick cat and have to take care of it all the time!) I am naturally very happy that there are readers who like this book. For example, my idol and mentor in my writing career and a junior book friend like it very much. Well, hehehehe~ I personally don't like daily writing, but some people like it~ Everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables~ In other words, I'm happy to write just for them~ It doesn't matter if some readers don't like it, I've been dropping it from my collection in the past few days, hahaha, I've already read the first Buddhist book I've ever read. Do you know how many you have in your collection now? 20, 4 Of which are my own numbers! There are also 4 or 5 friendly collections! Ha ha ha ha! I don't care! He is so willful as a second grader! ! !

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