Live and Become a Villain in Marvel

Too confusing, no foreshadowing at all. After shaking it all out, and looking at the protagonist, it is completely like looking at the clown.

Since you are practicing writing, don't pay too much attention to the comments. After you finish writing according to your own ideas, go back and read the comments carefully. The big frame is better than 60% of Marvel. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง!

You wrote a damn good book! Who can withstand such a poisonous book like yours? You wrote it to entertain yourself, right?

He has superpowers, but he doesn't worry about it. Instead, he went to school and fell in love for three years without studying superpowers.

I can't understand it, it's so frustrating to watch

It's so poorly written that I'm too lazy to comment.

I have read nearly a hundred Marvel fics, and to be honest, the author keeps making mistakes. Marvel has several big surprises: being checked by Ancient One at the beginning, kneeling down to lick Iron Man, opening up the Crystal Palace to recruit beauties without writing key plot points, joining S. H. I. E. L. D., And the name Coulson is naturally poisonous. The character of the protagonist is really fascinating. I kept saying that the protagonist is very stubborn, choosing a school and going to such a dangerous place. Ultimate move superpower panel, I haven't studied it for 3 years, it's so awesome👍🏻

The plot development is a bit slow (personal opinion)

To be honest, no one with any brains would go to Snake and Shield. Sooner or later it will be over. Why are you there, working for free? ? ? And then you help Americans like dogs. Why bother? Would you sacrifice yourself to save others or do tasks in China? Isn't it good to make a fortune quietly and find a woman? Everyone is self-interested

It feels like the protagonist is mentally retarded and his IQ is getting lower and lower (｀Δ´)!

If something happens to the protagonist, can't he ask his parents? The protagonist's parents are rich people. In the United States, isn't being rich a kind of superpower?

No wonder he is still a first-level author. With this level of writing, he has six pictures and nothing has been explained. Alas.

Author, it is difficult to write about the Marvel theme. The design of Goldfinger is weak, the development is slow, and the book dies quickly. The design of Goldfinger is too strong, and the book collapses quickly. Life is always in danger. Without a strong golden finger, who would dare to take advantage of the situation? For people who don't know anything, life is like that. For time-travelers, it's like a pressure chamber. Various possible villains can jump out at any time and anywhere, killing a few lucky spectators at random. It is really difficult to avoid regional villains and map cannon villains. There is nothing leisurely and leisurely. The crazy pursuit of power to survive is actually a normal manifestation of this kind of pressure and mentality. Come on!

In two lifetimes, you can still be hot-headed. When others reject you and call you just a friend, you can still be angry and become a beauty.

How many chapters have I read? Why did you write about Lucia? Written to be disgusting on purpose? I don't know how other people feel after watching this, but I feel aggrieved anyway.

To be honest, at the beginning, the protagonist asked his teacher to teach his girlfriend martial arts. Seriously, for a traditional person, would it be better to pass on the male to the female?

The author's writing skills are so bad! What's more disgusting than dog blood is menstrual blood! Pig's Feet keeps saying that people in movies have low IQs, which makes me happy, but Pig's Feet immediately lets you know what a reversal is! All kinds of shows show the lower limit of IQ! There are also colorful plots that keep saying to stay away from dangerous choices and the results of the school! Within a day after entering, various superpowers appeared frequently! Forget it, speechless! Unable to complain! Slip away✘

I can't understand the frustration, and I always felt that the main character was particularly useless.

Others are getting stronger and stronger, while the protagonist is getting weaker and weaker! ! After training, the attributes even decreased later! !

My IQ fluctuates up and down, and my EQ is only 5. I traveled through time and lived for so many years, like a giant baby. You might as well learn to be an aborigine🙃

Another S. H. I. E. L. D. Sweet Dog I don't want to read anymore