The Martial Saint in Lin Zhengying's World

It's interesting, I saw Mr. Zombie, Kung Fu, and even some hints of Tomb Raiders Notes

You can add Ghost Blowing Lantern, various Hong Kong films and movies, Miscellaneous Boy, Lam Sai Wing, Salted Fish Reincarnation, etc.

I haven't read the book, but I read the introduction. Lin Zhengying's world is the Republic of China, right? I just want to ask the author if he has any misunderstanding about the decline?

The decline of science and technology. Come on, that was the background of the Republic of China and the beginning stage of science and technology. You are telling me about the decline of science and technology.

I haven't finished reading the first chapter yet and just saw the cultivation state of this warrior and walked away silently. Goodbye.

After reading the first chapter, the question arises. One moment I have the first level of Ming Jin, the next the third level, and the other the second level. With this level of cultivation, can I still dance?

Where is his father's body? I'm not looking for you anymore. I'm too busy meddling in my own business.

It's inexplicable and looks very awkward!

It doesn't look good. Dad's coffin was stolen and he's still trying to pick up girls.

A martial arts master with the first level of Mingjin is also a cowhide. Can the author keep a low profile, even if he is refining skin, blood, marrow, and then to Mingjin? What a nonsense.

Just don't write dead dates in there, dead dates are too confusing.

Brother, where are you? Why isn't it updated?

I'm convinced, author, you are forcibly improving the strength of the original characters! You still can't ask questions, how long have you traveled through time, and you have found some kind of martial arts, and you are still the only one? Damn it, uncle, what qualifications do you have, and what experience and background do you have to fill in the words "oneself"? Just ask, is the protagonist worthy? Why did you take revenge from the very beginning, and even Fei Zong, your protagonist's father is worse than the protagonist? What qualifications do you have to fight Fei Zong and still save the protagonist? Is it so easy for the person controlling Feizheng to let you run away?

Vulnerabilities seen before the vip chapter: 1. The strength of warriors is too different. When the protagonist Ming Jin is at the second level, he can kill his father into a jumping zombie. As a result, other warriors can be killed by ordinary zombies. 2. In the early stage, I realized the god-level skills of martial arts and had a self-centered mind. However, the results were of no use. As my martial arts cultivation level increased, in actual combat, I still played like an ordinary warrior, which was no different from before I realized it. 3. The plot is smelly and hard. The plot of beating the priest was written from the beginning to the end. The fight took 50-60 chapters, but the writing was not good. It felt like a running account and a low word count. 4. The ability to innovate is not good, that is to say, the imagination is not good. The initial setting is OK, but the follow-up is almost the same as the movie. It is the same whether there is a protagonist or not, and the importance of the protagonist cannot be written. 5. The power system is a bit collapsed and the preparation is not good. Any summoning spell or divine summoning spell that can be used to cross levels will be 100% successful. Blindly exaggerating the villain's strength, and seeing that he can't be defeated, he will give the protagonist a halo and experience pack.

Although the subject matter is not new, the idea is unexpected. It seems that he wants to recreate a bizarre and strange world of gods and demons. I think so far, the author has written the fighting scenes very smoothly. However, did the author notice that the fighting scenes are actually a bit long-winded? The fighting scenes could be refined, and some key actions could be enlarged and some unimportant action descriptions reduced. When writing, does the author find it difficult to write enough words? In fact, he can add more descriptions of scenery, especially the scenery at key plot points. The author has good control over the description of the characters, and the writing power is distributed appropriately, but it could be a little streamlined, such as the description of some of the characters' clothing. Another question that is not a problem is about the adventures and advancement of the protagonist. Qiyu is a bit too fast. There are not many chapters at the moment, but Qiyu has written them all together, and I am a bit anxious. This may not be conducive to the development of the subsequent plot. It is recommended that the author should not arrange the adventures too densely from the latest chapter, but should use some other plot lines to fill it in to enrich the plot and article content. For example, the author can go and see I Have a Date with a Zombie, and can build a world similar to this, or can learn from some of the plots in it to make some appropriate transformations, which may be better. Of course, the above suggestions are just some personal opinions, and are still based on the author's outline. (I wonder if it can be refined).

Don't touch the stalemate, you will die if you touch it