The Number One Cancer in the World of Immortality

I just hope that this book can be the author's real beginning and continue on this path.

Damn, why is this book so similar to "I May Be a Fake Immortal"! The names are all similar. A familiar school, familiar configuration.

I read dozens of pirated chapters and thought it was okay. I came to support the genuine version, but I was kicked out of the book group. It was boring. After all, it seemed that dozens of chapters were pirated. I gave up the reward of 500 coins.

Damn, this book is so awesome! ! ! I feel jio can reach the top The author is a talent I like this type of book very much

Love, love, the source of happiness every day is you. Read a few chapters every day and be happy every day.

In fact, I feel that this book has many flaws, but the characters are very good. The author does not need to care about the trolls. After all, trolls who even write their own ideas into books, what qualifications do you have to criticize other authors?

First of all, let me explain that the forest is not in the school, not in the school! This is outside the academy! Why do so many people say this is on campus? This kind of thing will definitely not happen on campus. If you dare to fight in school, isn't that just asking for death? It was Sun Kai who lured the little girl to the forest outside the school, and then the fight broke out! 1. This is a world of cultivators. It is different from the harmonious life on earth. Countless monks die every day. Although human life is precious, it is definitely not valued as much as in a realistic harmonious society. 2. The top bosses of the college have been sleeping in seclusion for a long time. The college will not be easily dispatched unless it is in danger of extinction. The strong men who guard the academy on weekdays also have their own affairs. They cannot pay attention to the safety of every student at all times. 3. If something happens to a large number of students, or a super genius student, it will naturally attract attention (such as the ancient ruins incident in Volume 2). But just being an ordinary student doesn't really require special attention. Moreover, students often go out for training, and sometimes die outside. If everyone must be thoroughly investigated, how can the strong men of the academy have time to do other things? And this is a college with high mobility, with a large number of new students enrolling every year. If everyone really takes good care of them and protects them even when they leave the school, this college will no longer need to be opened and can be used as a shelter. (Of course, if it is an obvious murderer, the college will still deal with him. After all, this is what the school nursing team does) 4. Moreover, Sun Kai is not an ordinary human trafficker. And instead of being reckless in the academy, he disguised himself well and coaxed Xiaoli into the forest outside the academy before knocking her unconscious. No matter how powerful a practitioner is, he cannot read the human heart. Even if a big shot noticed the two of them, they would only regard them as ordinary lovers. Moreover, Sun Kai himself is extremely powerful (the ancient ruins incident was also mentioned), so concealment methods are of course not a problem. 5. Although the protagonist and Xiaoli are roommates, they have never communicated or even met. Although he was heartbroken, it was just heartbroken, and there would not be much fluctuation. Just like when you go to the hospital and see a deceased person, although you will feel a little sad when you see this person, but when you leave, you will continue what you are doing, and laugh when you should. And with the adjustment of system tasks, the protagonist's mood can naturally recover quickly. 6. Of course there are corresponding actions within the nursing school team, such as follow-up investigations, etc., But this has nothing to do with Ye Zijin and the others, right? After Zijin informed his mentor, there was nothing left to do. And just missing an ordinary student would not lead to an emergency meeting, a mass riot, or an alert state or something like that. 7. Again, this is a world of cultivating immortals, and it is common for a bunch of students to die every year. Compared to sects that have fierce internal competition and are on the verge of life and death at every turn, the campus is already quite harmonious. Private fights are not allowed, students are not allowed to be harmed... As long as they do not leave school, their life safety will definitely be guaranteed. But it's impossible for the bosses to completely guarantee the safety of every student when they go out, right? Then this is not a school, but an all-weather shelter. As a book friend said, the plot needs to be logical. Although this is a sand sculpture, there will definitely be due conflicts and competitions. If after reading my explanation, you still can't accept this plot, then Lemon can only say sorry. Finally, I hope everyone will read that chapter carefully before making comments. Zijin has already reported the matter, but I just walked through the process, not that I will directly participate in the ceremony after returning.

👉Want your favorite character to appear in the novel? 👉Want to see what status your name will have in the world of immortality? 👏🏻Come here and leave a message and reply with the supporting character you want to see appear! ⚠️Because the style of this book is more casual (shady) and (carving), so in theory, any style of name is acceptable. As long as you leave a message here, although it may not be adopted, the author will definitely read it carefully one by one! 🙈By the way, if you have any special requirements for a certain character, such as it must be male or female, it must be in a friendly relationship with the protagonist, or it must be a member of a mysterious organization, etc... You can also put it forward! (Of course, the more requirements, the lower the chance of being adopted...🐶) ———— Additional: The adopted supporting role does not appear immediately, it usually takes a while. And this is not in the order of comments, but is determined based on the development of the plot. Please don't be impatient...

In Chapter 15, I wanted to persuade him to quit. I didn't want to BB him, but I couldn't bear to complain about it. In the previous thirteen chapters, the style of painting was silly and funny, and everyone was happy to see it. In Chapter 15, the author forcibly turned on the dark wind. He really persuaded me to quit. Can't I just continue writing nonsense? The author has explained a lot, and it seems that the plot is very reasonable. The problem is that the style of painting shown by the author is obviously a comedy novel. Just like daily animation, you can just make fun of it. Who cares whether it is reasonable or not. Daily animation also has high school students physically in the universe. I haven't seen many people complaining that it is not in line with scientific principles. I bid farewell. I wish the author will get better and better.

All mysteries are revealed. In 2006, Sun Kai hired several gangsters to abduct and traffic girls for him. With the help of Sun Kai, these gangsters succeeded repeatedly and always escaped police pursuit. But in an operation, the gangster caught the young Lin Xiaomeng, and Ye Zijin who was passing by happened to see this scene. Ye Zijin called his biological father, Ye Chengdong, director of the Y City Public Security Bureau, but he was caught. Later, the police dispatched a large number of personnel and finally killed the two gangsters and rescued Zijin and Xiaomeng. (Lin Xiaomeng talked about this in Chapter 67 of Volume 2) Sun Kai terminated his cooperation with the gangsters because he alerted the police. The little gangster began to develop his own power with the large amount of money given by Sun Kai before, and named it Qinglong Gang. In the same year, Ye Chengdong, Ye Zijin's biological father, took his wife and son out for fun to relax their mood. However, in order to rescue those who fell into the water, Ye Chengdong and his wife both died, and Ye Zijin became an orphan. Ye Zijin was severely stimulated when his biological parents passed away in front of his eyes. In the end, his brain protected itself and forcibly closed the memories before the age of six. Ye Chengdong's good brother Ye Xiangyang adopted Ye Zijin. Coincidentally, both families have the surname Ye, and both are heroic people's policemen. After Ye Zijin woke up from a coma, he forgot his biological father and mother and regarded Ye Xiangyang as his father. And Ye Xiangyang also planned to conceal the incident first, and then tell him about it when Ye Zijin grew up and had enough endurance. In 2007, the Qinglong Gang found a new backer - the Zhang Group. With the help of the wealth left by Sun Kai, the Qinglong Gang secretly funded the Zhang Group. The Zhang Group has become the protective umbrella and shade tree of the Qinglong Gang. In 2008, Ye Xiangyang, an underground worker, unfortunately died while obtaining information. The Y city police have mastered the criminal evidence of the Zhang Group and the Qinglong Gang. But they didn't know anything about the original mysterious man (Sun Kai). In order to avoid alerting the public and arresting Sun Kai, the police chose to continue the secret investigation for ten years. After learning all the truth, Ye Zijin's ideological realm has been sublimated. Biological father Ye Chengdong is a people's hero, and adoptive father Ye Xiangyang is also a people's hero. They all put their own lives and deaths at risk, sacrificing themselves for the happiness of more people. But because he was afraid of danger, he hid in the academy and did not dare to join Lu Zizhan's team trying to save the world. In the end, Ye Zijin made up his mind, sent contact information to Lu Zizhan, and decided to join his team to fight against the mysterious organization and contribute his own strength to save the world. ———— Well, originally I thought this paragraph was quite lyrical, especially Zijin's final self-questioning and his change of mentality. It's a pity that I was lost by an inexplicable river crab... Heartbroken...

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The God of War returned and found his daughter living in a kennel. With an order, one hundred thousand retired soldiers from China came. The plane crashed and nine stewardesses were stranded on a deserted island. The flight attendant couldn't bear it anymore the next day and took away his bloodline. She didn't want the God of War to awaken 108 bloodlines. Ancestor Hongyun asked where fellow Taoist friends were going to survive the disaster. "You have no right to know!" Ancestor Hongyun tried his best to find out that the one he defeated was only one of his clones. Before he died, he said to his apprentice, "Be for me after death." After guarding the tomb for five years, he opened the coffin and discovered that the city lord ordered the eldest daughter to bring 800 tiger stones to propose marriage. Unexpectedly, the wedding banquet broke three times and the murderer's coffin could not be lifted. He violated the regulations to carry the female coffin, which caused a big disaster and made the young lady who was pregnant with triplets angry. The poor boy got the ten thousand-year-old amber to open his eyes. He accidentally saw his college girlfriend betrayed him. He was rejected by his girlfriend for being bronze. After dumping him, he found out that he was a mysterious man who could beat professional players...

It can be said that Chapter 15 was a small failure. The school went to the forest for a while and left without finding anyone? That's over? It is obvious from the front that this is not the first time this kind of thing has happened. People have disappeared one after another, and no one will find out? So many people died in the school and no one cared about it? I know that the author wants to write about the cruelty of the world of cultivation, but what is the school for? The most basic safety is to have a guarantee. Even if the big guys are practicing in seclusion, what will happen if the person in charge of the school issues an announcement to remind them? It was obviously not the first time Sun Kai had done this, so the school didn't take any precautions? We are a county with a population of one million. If a person is missing, someone must know about it. Even if the school suppresses the matter in order to maintain order, will the school be prepared?

Author, [The moon is frosty on the ground] Is this your vest? Or maybe you are his (her) vest or trumpet! ! ? The writing style of "I May Become a Fake Immortal" is almost the same as the first few chapters, except that the names of the characters are changed.

Both the big and small sizes have been rewarded. Please improve. The big size has been banned by my mother. Hey, I can only use the small size to discuss life.

If you are new to this book and see something that says it is very poisonous in chapter 15 or something, it is best not to abandon it directly. Chapter 15 is not too much and I read it in half an hour. Some people find it poisonous, but I don't think it is poisonous, and no one said it was poisonous before it was put on the shelves. After it was put on the shelves, it all came out. Definitely keep reading it, and you can point it out if you feel it is wrong (but some ancient plots and some big foreshadowings cannot be changed). What newcomers fear most is their mentality. If the lemon collapses, you will definitely be fine, but other readers will be sad In short, you have to verify the facts yourself, and don't embarrass newcomers too much. Keyboard warriors don't have a good reputation Finally, I wish everyone good health

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. After the second chapter, the male protagonist told the boy that it's okay to be a boy. He put his senior's hand on his heart and giggled. He also said a lot of middle-aged words on the stage that sounded very embarrassing. I really don't understand where the jokes in the comment section are?

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After reading the last chapter, the book Cultivation of Immortality is truly finished for me. I am very emotional, what will be the future story of Xiaoyu and Zijin? Wen Liang, Lin Xiaomeng, Senior Sister Xiaojiu... What will happen to these familiar faces? Will there be any excitement of my own? I remember that I came in because of the new book investment point at first, but in the process of pursuing books, I felt that I couldn't leave. Although I haven't been able to read much in the past two months due to schoolwork and some reasons, I have tried my best to recommend, monthly pass and subscribe. (One time I came up and found out that I had become my number one fan!) The reason is because Ye Zijin and Xiaoyu have become like my friends. I want to know what will happen to them in the future, I want them to have a bright future, and I want to see more interactions between them... It's a pity that this book will end one day. Fortunately, I quite like the ending, so that's good. As a book fan, I am also very concerned about where Lemon will go after. I don't have any books in qd that I'm following other than Cultivation of Immortality. If it wasn't for voting, I wouldn't want to open it... If you have any new information, please let me know. There are other things going on recently, everyone, please do your best! By the way, I actually quite like the author's final thoughts. It feels very lifelike hahhh

6 Chapters, just 6 chapters, I can't stand it anymore, it's poisoning me to death

Whether your IQ is online or not depends not on what the author says, but on what you write. Ask yourself, does the protagonist you wrote deserve this sentence?

When I saw that the protagonist's IQ was online, I suddenly didn't want to read it. Because there are so many brainless books, has having a brain become a selling point? Isn't this what a book should be?

Why do I feel that this book of yours is very similar to another one? The beginning is simply

Could it be that what I am cultivating is a fake immortality? This... Looks a bit like the introduction

To be honest, it was really embarrassing in front of me, rubbish system, rubbish options, and tm forced, no wonder it became popular.

Emmmmmmm.. Slipped away

Hey, I read it with a smile before Chapter 15, but I was in tears after reading it.

This is my first post for this book. I saw the author's single chapter after defeating Sun Kai. I tied it to my mobile phone to encourage him. I believe the author is still reading the comments First of all, I specifically wanted to find funny works and found this book. After reading a few chapters, I felt that I had found a treasure. It is very funny and to my taste. I only found it a few days ago and I have almost finished it now Open When I first started watching it, the only reason that made me hesitate to read it was that it was already finished, and the number of words was not too many. I like super long novels, but the plot and character descriptions were so funny that I couldn't stop reading it. I believe that the author's positioning of this work is also a piece of fiction. What's the point of a piece of fiction that requires three correct views, a rigorous plot, and rigorous logic? There are a lot of works with the character of the protagonist Lang Sao Jian, do you want to break down and scold them all? Catching these people who are biting and spraying is really too full and too leisurely! Just because of the malicious words of you people, a few small blessings in my heavy and uncomfortable life have been shortened. Reading a novel is just for fun and to understand the pressure in everyone's life. Why destroy other people's happiness? I have seen many works myself, but the plot or character design suddenly collapsed in the later stage and became unsightly. I also scratched my nose and quit watching. Everyone has their own tastes. There is no need to criticize. After all, the works you think are bad are also the hard work of others Then As for copying Fake Fairy, I have read Fake Fairy from beginning to end, and it is one of the masterpieces that I recognize. However, objectively analyzing the two works, they really have nothing in common. They are just similar genres. The first few chapters are a bit similar. They are routines. If you use routines, you call them copying. Should all works that the male and female protagonists bump into around the corner be destroyed? With so many chat group-type works, are they all copied from Xiu Chat? Finally, I would like to say cheers to the author. You are really great. You don't need to change anything or give up any big principles for the sake of other people's voices. I hope you can get rid of these voices and pressures, always be yourself, and keep it up. Of course, there are many areas where you can improve. Readers can refer to many constructive suggestions. I look forward to your next work. I hope it will be as relaxed and funny, Oli! Please write a work of ten million words to make me laugh every day!

How can I put it this way? The first part of this book does look like a fake fairy (the opening chapter), but I am really happy when I read it later (it is a series that gets better and better the more I read it). I was often amused, and the twist at the end was completely unexpected (it is a bit rushed for some reasons, but it's okay)... After all, this is the author's debut novel, and the writing (writing style and content) is already very good. There may be some places where I feel a little embarrassed while reading it, but overall it is still very good. It is one of the few novels that I have been able to finish (although there are some tasks that made me embarrassed to the point of almost telling me to quit). I recommend reading (friends who like sand sculptures and read novels to relax and have fun. If you are more picky, there is nothing you can do about it, just give it up). I look forward to the author's trilogy. Come on, author! Come on! Come on! Ignore those people's comments

Ah, I don't even know when the book will be finished.