Liver Emperor Ball King

Are you writing a basketball novel or a basketball game? There are so many words to describe mt. Not everyone plays 2k, and not everyone who plays 2k plays mt. Mt is a card collection mode, and it would make cheats too complicated if you use it. In the early stage, I kept running accounts, and also wrote some content that had nothing to do with basketball, which is awesome. There is also the data on junior high school graduates' time of 100 meters and 15 seconds, which is also abstract. Junior high school students can basically run around 14 seconds, and top students can run 12 seconds. You are a good person who has gone through golden finger training for two years. You can run 100 meters in 15 seconds. What about a turtle? It's too troublesome to set vc when you use mt to hang up. The early stage is really confusing.

To be honest, if you write like this, you are basically offended. Eighty or ninety percent of people can't understand it. And it's hard to watch. Reading novels is basically just a fun read. If you are reading it hard, your grades will definitely be poor. And there aren't that many people playing 2K. If the author is a full-time writer, go for it! Let's read more about N novels written by great masters and learn from them. If it's not full time and you just want some extra money, it doesn't matter. Originally, N was a niche article.

It makes everyone's head look big, and people who don't play games are really confused 😵

I don't understand the so-called mess of personal attributes, and the protagonist talks too much about his heart. Almost every chapter has real water. Also, he is a coward. He is so soft that he cannot be hardened. Only when he meets someone softer than the protagonist can he become a little tougher.

I look so tired, stuck here and there. Those who have never played 2k are simply confused.

I don't understand the setting. I'd say it's a cool novel. The main character is a coward. I can only call it a YY novel.

At present, I see the protagonist going to find his little flower, so I don't plan to continue watching it. I'll leave you with my thoughts after watching it. First of all, I'm sorry, I don't understand the setting at all. As someone who doesn't play that game, I can't understand the purpose of those cards. It feels completely separated from the reality of the protagonist. It has no use except to show strength. Secondly, let's call it a sports article. The content of the sports article squeezes out the water, and there is really not much left. Many details are not paid attention to, like it is written by a pure basketball enthusiast; it is said to be a cool article, but the coolness is not obvious in it. What about the routine? I didn't see much of it, but what I saw was just the author's own self-pleasure, how he always stinked fish and rotten shrimps, how the referee said a lot of things after he made a fuss about the penalty and said he wasn't cool enough, which lowered other people's IQs and so on. Also, since he is said to be the Liver Emperor, where is the Liver? It is hard to tell what the protagonist is doing when the Liver is most needed in the early stage.

What's the use of your player card pack? . . . , The system is too messy and complicated. I saw you open the card pack and write a chapter. I don't feel like there is anything interesting to read, so I am confused. What is the use of this card pack?

Data persuasion😥

After reading the first chapter, first of all, do you feel that you should be so careful when writing a sports novel? Curry country, Chinese country, parallel world, and such a 🐮 background. I have no idea of ​​reading it for a moment. I suggest the author to read other sports competition novels about China and India. It's not a big deal 😅😅. The structure and vision are issues.

I don't have enough brain capacity, the data is too complicated and I can't understand it.

It gives me a headache to see those data! If there are too many, you won't be able to understand!