Salted Fish Singer

I've only read Chapter 14 so far, and there are two places where I can't stop complaining. The first is that the song issue is too secretive, which is annoying. It would be better to give a sentence or two of lyrics, or a little story about the song's well-known status. I personally feel much more comfortable this way. The second issue is the segmentation problem. I can understand the change of perspective, and I can also tolerate the change of plot focus. But at least there is a division. It's like saying A in the first sentence and saying W in the next sentence. If you look at it a little faster, it's like force-feeding X.

There are really few people. By the way, I want to ask about the wedding list.

Suddenly so strange. Originally, there are not many transformation stories, and some of the subtle poisonous points in the front can be ignored. For example, the protagonist has a weak personality and is childish in his behavior, and his personality is not suitable for those who were thirty years old before the time travel. There are also a bunch of inexplicable villains who appear inexplicably, and the wonderful scene changes... Forget the above, the writing style becomes very strange around chapter 90. It can be seen that the author wants to cut it off, or wants to change, but aren't you trying to persuade him to quit? The first ninety chapters were all spent on creating the first female supporting character, and then they were given away to others? ! If you think you are unpopular and want to change, what do you think of those who insist on watching? Forget it - the genius author!

I beg the author to change the layout of the novel. The characters and scenes jump too abruptly, which has a slightly dissuasive effect. QAQ

I always thought Akane was the heroine, but it turns out

Don't let go of what you can hold, don't pull what can be hugged Time washes away in a hurry, what is left Forgive the twists and turns, it turns out that what is left is true Even if it is like a dream, I am half awake, laughing and crying, I am happy Who let me, time is something that catches people off guard It can be sunny and windy and rainy, but you can't compete with the day and night. Thinking about the past again I stole the green silk but kept you, the years are a journey that never comes back The good and the bad are all scenery, don't blame me for being greedy, I just don't want to wake up Because you are only willing to be with me, watching the clouds and winds are light Don't let go of what you can hold, don't pull on what you can hug Time is urgent Washed away, what is left? Forgive the twists and turns, it turns out that what is left is true Even though it is like a dream, I am half awake, smiling and crying, I am happy Who let me, time is something that catches people off guard It can be sunny and windy and sometimes rainy, but there is no competition between day and night. Thinking about the past again I stole Qingsi but kept you, the years are a journey that never comes back The good and the bad are all scenery, don't blame me for being greedy, I just don't want to wake up Because you are only willing to be with me, watching the clouds and winds are light Time is something that catches people off guard, sometimes it is sunny, it is windy and sometimes it rains You can't compete for the day and night Thinking about the past again, I stole the black hair but kept you Time is a journey that never comes back, the good and the bad are all scenery Don't blame me for being greedy, I just don't want to wake up, because you are only willing to be with me for you Look at the light clouds and the gentle breeze

The author can sing Great Days, which is quite nice.

The main character's name makes me complain. I have a house of horror 😊

I watched why Mao started skipping to the chapter where her father didn't protect her, and planned to keep her after it was over?

I always thought Akane was the heroine, but a justice appeared later. I panicked for a moment, wondering what happened to the main character's girlfriend, so I continued reading. It was very touching, but there was nothing to say, it just felt weird and a pity. The author also writes very well

Come on, big brother who writes books!

Don't give up, I just invested today😂😂

Chen said to the assistant. Those who cannot get it are always in turmoil, and those who are favored are confident. If Bai sees this. Isn't it heart bleeding? My favorite girl is submissive to you.

I just watched it and found a bug. My brother was called Chen Shaohua at first and then Chen Hua.

Why did some virus or antidote suddenly appear in the middle of the movie? It's too mysterious to mix this kind of thing into a good daily novel. You said it's because the protagonist has a distinguished status and someone wants to carry out a business conspiracy against her. What's the purpose of doing this kind of thing😳

In that chapter, Li Ziqian successfully persuaded her to quit. She felt like the wife she was trying to conquer had been robbed. She was so angry at the beginning, but suddenly she went to live with someone else. The success of wc disgusted me. I was so bored in the early stage, and suddenly I found a partner.

I always thought Li Ziqian was the heroine, but it suddenly changed, ugh😔

After reading so much, I have the impression that you are a genius at naming names😅

Does the author have an outline for his article? Why do I always feel like I'm going to write exactly where I want to? In the previous chapter, I wrote a lot about the somewhat ambiguous Li who said she was running away from a man. She finally had a weak sense of existence and didn't have to watch her show off her awkward love with a man. Then she suddenly broke up and came back. I didn't dare to pay attention to her. Who knows, the author was stimulated one day and made her run away with a second man. What is the purpose of these plots? It was originally an urban copywriting style, but suddenly a super virus and mutated superpowers appeared, so it didn't take up much of the role. Fortunately, recently, a princess from an ancient country was suddenly added to the secretary, and she wanted to follow her to seize power. Where has this style been changed? Is it necessary to go to an ancient country to start a copywriting business? It's okay to have more elements in the text, but don't mess up the main tone too much.

The author writes entertainment articles well, and he also plays behind the scenes when writing entertainment articles. Entertainment articles prefer to see all kinds of praise on the stage, and behind-the-scenes entertainment articles are boring. But you just write, why do you go to play games halfway through writing? So poisonous!

Well! I originally thought it was a light show, but then a Pandora virus popped up, and the style instantly changed to a sci-fi one! It's so hard to find books!

Are you planning to make a Saga Idol Legend?

The last few chapters have been so cruel...

I haven't seen the VIP chapter yet, so let's make a fuss first and get a sense of presence. . Well, is the salty fish diva really a salty fish? Instead of holding a concert, how about a fan meeting or something? How can you achieve the status of a diva if you don't show your face and no one is following you? If you rely solely on the quality of your songs to win, just go to sleep! You are in Gaoyang. Who knows who you are? Anyway, I will never pay attention to this kind of singer. There are so many good songs, just listen to them. I don't know what you look like, and no one cares about you. You are a fool who dare not show your face. Everyone is very busy.

Does anyone know where to go in Chapter 58?

Female channel persuades people to quit 🙂🙂

1. The biggest problem is that the city has turned into fantasy 2. Why use old songs? It doesn't matter if you use some classics, basically all of them are old songs, such as "You Take Care of Me" "Actors" do not fit the text better than old songs? 3. It's too easy to win international awards. It seems like you're just competing with yourself. Let's have a few competitors. Most of them write casually. 4. Why do you use bad songs in the electronic music part? The songs of leader A Shen Yangui are not good? There are no such people in the other world. Why not use them? Can't you use Chinese electronic music Lao Mian's songs