The Villain Who Started with Douluo

I feel like it's pretty good now, after all, everyone's reading interests are different. I just don't understand how everything is updated. Sometimes it's updated several times a day, but there's still no update until midnight today? ? ? 😰

After reading part of it, here are a few unreasonable things: 1. Qian Xunji's biological son's surname is Cheng. Who named him? When Qian Daoliu does not exist? 2. The protagonist is Qian Xunji's biological son but not Bibi Dong's son. Bibi Dong treats him better than Qian Renxue? It would be fine if you don't kill him. 3. The awakening of martial spirits is based on the inheritance, mutation and fusion of the martial spirits of the parents. For example, Tang San is a complete inheritance, Bibi Dong is both a spider, and the protagonist's two martial arts spirits are not attached to the angel's side? And he doesn't want to be close. How powerful is his mother's martial spirit that can crowd out the angel's martial spirit? Qian Xunji won't force Bibi Dong. In addition to admiration for Bibi Dong, he also means that the offspring can be stronger by joining forces. 4. The martial soul is born at level 20. This is the treatment of a divine martial soul, or the kind with a very high talent, such as Qian Renxue. 5. Timeline issue. After Qianxun Ji died, the Haotian Sect closed the mountain, and Tang Hao has been in the Holy Soul Village. 6. Power issue: Wuhundian started to implement the plan to rule the mainland after Bibi Dong came to power. Before the rearrangement of the Shangsan Sect, it had been developing its forces in a low-key manner. It was considered a very popular religious organization. The two empires and the Shangsan Sect were aristocratic forces. Before Tang San met Ning Fengzhi, the relationship was relatively harmonious and less confrontational. Because at that time Wuhun Palace planned for Qian Renxue to inherit the throne in one fell swoop. This writing means that Sima Zhao's heart is known to everyone. 7. As for whether to kill Yu Xiaogang or not, the protagonist cannot kill Qiandaoliu without guaranteeing his death, nor can he use people from the Wuhun Palace to kill Bibi Dong because he can tell by killing Lan Dian first. Obviously, most of the power should be invested in the Qibao, but there is no need to leave no one behind to destroy the whole family. I think writing fan fiction can be read as long as the basic settings and character settings are not changed. The protagonist setting is too random. The character settings can be changed based on comparison with the original timeline. For example, the original calm character has not happened in the original timeline. Before the incident, my personality was a bit young and frivolous, so I could use some original plots. Most people who read fanfics first look at the protagonist's background, character, etc. The second is the actions of the protagonist in the original plot, and the third is the connection or interaction between the original characters or forces and the protagonist in the non-original timeline. In addition, I wish the author will get better and better in writing fan fiction.

As long as I accept Bibi Dong, no matter how much poison I have, I will swallow it without even belching.

Don't write about raping others. Bibi Dong sent people there. Is it possible? I can accept it if it's torture and murder. Rape, what do you think?

It's good to watch, but it's so miserable. I feel like the protagonist in the original novel didn't have a good ending.

Qian Renxue didn't hate Qian Daoliu after killing him? ? ?

I think Yu Xiaogang died well. Is there anyone who agrees with me?

Before Chapter 40 was released, he only said one sentence about training. The protagonist seemed to have no idea of ​​getting stronger. He only pretended to slap people in the face and went out to cause harm to others. He had no sense of shame or moral bottom line. He was indeed a villain, 10,000 times worse than the original Wuhundian. He was simply doing bad things. It seemed that the author was venting his dark side in the novel. He had a serious disagreement with his three views. If he left, he would not engage in piracy.

This book is very good-looking. The reason is that the dark novel is not good-looking, but that the Madonna's novel is all about dog-licking. Like Tang San, it has the same plot as the original work. This makes the dark novel very good-looking, and the plot of the dark novel makes my blood boil with excitement. As time travellers, we need to understand the following secrets: to seize Tang San's opportunity, Tang San has nowhere to seize it; to woo Tang San's girl, Tang San has nowhere to woo. Come on, author!

Is Bibi Dong a woman here? . . Why do all the novels I read say that Bibi Dong is an old man?

Is your setting of writing the protagonist a way of venting your anger in the online world? What if the protagonist doesn't practice cultivation and goes out to find trouble?

Bibi Dong finally guarded Yu Xiaogang's body in the Wuhun Palace, and never left the Wuhun Palace again. From now on, the world only knew that there was a queen in the Wuhun Palace. (Yu Xiaogang is a coward and a scumbag and is not worthy) I feel that this ending is not much better than the original work. Silently giving to the scumbag, and ultimately becoming a widow for love. Original work: Silently giving to a scumbag, but eventually turning black for love, and all the efforts caused harm to oneself In the end, life is full of despair and hatred. ――Can the author relieve Bibi Dong's knot and give her a new yearning and pursuit of life? For example: Resurrect Yu Xiaogang, erase Bibi Dong's memory after being raped by Qian Xunji, and the lovers finally get married. For example: Let Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue confide in each other and understand each other. In this way, Qian Renxue has maternal love, and Bibi Dong also has someone to care about. You can also help the protagonist take care of the children. There are many good endings, I hope the author will make them happen.

290,000 Words and 4 recommendation votes, you are the worst I have ever seen (๑˙ー˙๑)

Author, I think it is possible for you to become a great author like the Third Young Master of the Tang Family and Tian Can Tu Tu, because I have read both of your books and I think they are both very good. I also recommend people around me to read them. They all said they are very good after reading them. Come on, the author is great.

How about taking away the Ice and Snow Emperor and Yinlongwan? Now that they are emperors, how many harems can be eliminated? Don't pay attention to those words about "eunuchs" at the beginning, they are just eunuchs.

The author may reply to me whether Bibi Dong will accept it or not. Bibi Dong fans will accept it

Let's take a look first. I don't care if I am hostile to the original protagonist, but it's better to give a more convincing reason. If it's the kind of brainless one, forget it because it's an embarrassing reason like reading a novel in a previous life and feeling uncomfortable. One thing to say, the original protagonist group of Douluo is generally good. There is no disgusting performance such as extreme virgins, and they belong to the orderly and kind camp. I hope the author can handle the contact with the protagonist group well. I have read several Douluo fanfics, and they are either licking without brains, being blackheaded without brains, or pretending to be cool in front of the protagonists, which completely ignores the character of the original protagonists. In addition, due to certain events not long ago, many people are disgusted with the third young master of the Tang family and his works. I hope the author can deal with the plot of the original protagonist objectively and not be affected by other aspects. No matter what the third young master of the Tang family has become now, Douluo is part of my youth memories after all. I will never forget the day when I bought the physical book of Douluo with my classmates in the rain. Now I can only read and talk about it to comfort myself. But there are too few Douluo fanfics, and even fewer are well written. I really hope the author can write a fanfic that is outstanding enough. I would like to wish the author great inspiration and write more and more wonderfully!

It doesn't matter who you kill, but Bibi Dong was so miserable in the original work, and now she's even so miserable here, so it's better to let her die. If you're killing someone from the protagonist's camp, you shouldn't write that she's from the Wuhun Palace. Isn't writing about the Wuhun Palace just to give Bibi Dong a better end in the end? It's worse than the original work now. I was dead, but now I'm in pain for a lifetime. Some parts are well written, but the endings of some supporting characters are really hard to explain in one sentence. Farewell

I want to ask how exactly Bone Douluo died? What happened to Ning Fengzhi and Sword Douluo in the end? Who tore the important part of the letter from Ning Fengzhi to the protagonist? What is that pavilion (I forgot its name)?

The results of this book are too bad. I dare not read it.

Those who cannot accept Bibi Dong and join Wuhun Palace are soulless fics.

It looks pretty good, but I feel sick looking at it. It's too cumbersome and the words are too dense. I just want to read cool articles.

I went to Qianxun Ji and was cheated on, and the person's surname was Cheng

This setting has been changed too harshly, and many places are inconsistent with logic.

Are there any fanfics where the Douluo Soul Beast route is not transformed?

It's well written. Please keep updating the author.

Author, why is the back part not as good as the front part? After destroying the Sun and Moon Empire,

I'd like to ask if there are any that don't cheat. It doesn't matter if the main character is almost normal. Well, ordinary improvement. Such a Douluo novel. Please introduce.