Heroic Handsome Boy

The text is elegant and appropriate, the plot is fascinating, and the author's talent can be felt across the screen. I look forward to the author finishing the manuscript as soon as possible and one day being scouted and made into a TV series for everyone to watch.

Good! The concept is novel, the subject matter is original, and the plot has ups and downs and is gripping!

I came back to make up for it after a long time. Is it really over? It's quite a pity, because the young man who worked for everyone had to live for others and ended up alone {"NickName":"Golden Basket","UserId":326581997}

Nowadays, there are very few serious martial arts novels written. If there is no more characters like Jin Yong, I will have no choice but to read Jin Yong again.

After reading two chapters, let me talk about my feelings. It feels pretty good. It has a sense of martial arts, just like Jin Yong's martial arts. It is pure. I don't know what will happen next. I hope I can write slowly. Recently, I rarely see martial arts novels in Qidian, so I have a new feeling! Come on

The writing is good😁

The paragraphs are too long, the dialogue is too dull.

If the author can complete the book with more than one million words, I will definitely order it all and post it as proof.