You Murdered Him

After reading the third case under various distractions, I can clearly feel the progress. The occurrence and description of this case are more mature than the previous two. There are no narrative tricks or special coincidences. It is just a very honest criminal investigation step: evidence, reasoning, locking the suspect, further evidence, further reasoning, expanding the suspect, further evidence, and further reasoning... It feels like a detective drama. And the police's IQ has improved a lot! It's more reasonable than the first part, and more complete than the second part. During the whole process, at least for me, the clues can always lead the reader's thinking. The police's IQ is at least not lower than that of the readers. The readers' various doubts and guesses are given immediate feedback, and there is no deliberate attempt to increase the difficulty by hiding clues. It is just right for me and it is very enjoyable to watch! The realization after the case is the sublimation of connotation, and I hope it can become the norm. I would also like to make a special mention of the characters and interactions between the male and female protagonists, especially the interactions. I was very happy to see them. Finally, I am no longer just a tool. I am looking forward to their next development! If I have any regrets, it is that the personalities of the two henchmen in the criminal police team have become so vague that they have no personality at all. Since it is a novel, it would also be nice to have some interesting supporting characters besides the male and female protagonists. The above are some of my immature thoughts and feelings. Of course, my progress is relatively slow. The author has already written two or three more cases, and my suggestions are always lagging behind. I can only represent myself, and my preferences and enjoyment may be very different from those of the public (I'm sorry, if you want to be popular on the Internet, you may not listen to me), please consider the author! No matter what your data is, I like it very much anyway! Will definitely continue to pursue it! Please come on!

I just finished reading the second case and it was quite interesting. In criminal investigation novels, the conception of the case is fundamental, and there must always be reversals and conspiracies. In this, it depends on the rigor and rationality, and then the process of unraveling the cocoon. It's not that the bigger the idea, the better, or the more twists and turns the case has, the better. The author has good control over this aspect, including reversals and paying attention to details. The most important thing is to focus on evidence and reality, which many people will ignore. The case reads quite dramatic, akin to Ace Attorney. The flaw in the second case, as the first author said, was that the ending was too hasty and was literally delivered to the door, which greatly affected the reading experience; secondly, the police were a bit weak. In fact, they should have found out the itinerary and social relations of the victim's stakeholders as soon as possible, including the two sons, as well as senior executives of the company and competing companies, and would not have started the investigation after there were obvious suspicions. Neighbor inquiries should be routine and wall clock traps should be discovered early. If you want to be more attractive, I would like to suggest that you put a little more effort into your character design. Ace Attorney's characters each have very distinct characteristics, and even if they only appear for a few minutes, they will be unforgettable. Not having cheats is one thing (this is an advantage), but as a novel, the characters are distinctive and distinctive, which is another thing. (Personal suggestion, no reference, because I can't attract readers myself) In addition, I hope to pay more attention to details and try not to have bugs that are inconsistent with reality (of course, I am a bit fussy, and some details may not be known to most people, and they are not the key to whether the Internet article is popular or not, so just treat it as I say casually). Also update more criminal investigation methods and criminal investigation ideas. Recommend a domestic criminal investigation drama "A Thousand Thousand Tribulations of Love". I like it very much. It has more twists and turns than the plot of "Senior Crime Group Six". But it's very old, and some of the things in it may be outdated, but the ideas are very good. If the author has read it, just pretend I didn't say it. Come on, I will keep chasing.

Some time ago, I was tired and had little time, so I didn't write a book review. Here is a brief review of the fourth case (times have changed and I can only post a brief review, sorry) The fourth case is very long and complicated. The complexity is not in the case itself, but in the human world. As the case progressed, the initial stance of considering other possibilities and trying to be as neutral and objective as possible gradually shifted to confirming the behind-the-scenes status and just waiting for evidence. However, evidence was dug up one by one and disappeared one after another, and the whole thing turned into a confrontation game between the police and the behind-the-scenes. The writing style and core of this case have undergone great changes since then. From suspense criminal investigation to realism. Whether this change is good or bad for the data itself, I can't comment. But I would like to applaud an effort to break through and shape a larger context. If there is any problem, maybe it's because I felt too uncomfortable while watching it, right? The police have been suppressed and beaten behind the scenes, which makes them feel frustrated. It makes people question: Is this still a legal society? The second half is the male protagonist's personal show. Although they are two cases, I would like to treat them as one. This part returns to the previous writing style, focusing on suspense and techniques. The writing method of "impossible crime in the secret room" is very consistent with the idea of ​​​​traditional suspense novels. The portrayal of the male protagonist is rich and colorful, and there are also deep foreshadowings. Finally, a foreshadowing of the heroine's life experience was added, which seems to be building momentum for the upcoming big movie. If I think there is anything that is not good enough, it is that the male protagonist is too wise and powerful, and the police are once again weakened. In addition, zisha is a bit too deliberate.

This type of novel is the only one I still want to read after finishing it

It's pretty good, I don't often read this type of book. But it feels like you wrote it very seriously. Already collected, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Is there anyone...😭😅🥵😒😎😴😌😢😰😰

I'm not a murderer, I didn't kill anyone

Isn't it enough to identify whether the little girl and Reservoir are parents? Could it be that the little girl picked it up?

After writing so many words, I only have so few comments 😥 Oh, it's not easy.

I really like the author very much! ! ! ! In order to let the author know that your writing is great, I specially downloaded this app to comment 😌😌😌 Your reasoning is the most rigorous and unexpected among the online novels I have read! ! ! ! I have posted a lot of posts on Xiaohongshu recommending your novel 😭😭😭😭😭😭 Please don't give up on mystery novels 5555555 How can such an excellent author be so popular? ! I really can't believe it 😭 The low popularity is definitely because mystery novels are not mainstream nowadays, and most people don't like reasoning plots that are too brain-burning 😢😢 In short, the author's writing is superb! ! Looking forward to your new mystery novels in the future! ! 😁😁

To be honest, the part where the police led the team to Yu Chenghai's home was a bit poisonous and unreasonable. Even if Yu Chenghai was a famous businessman, he would not be able to despise the national law enforcement agency. If he was a sensible person, he should politely invite people in, and It's not about letting bodyguards form a human wall to block him outside. This is a matter of attitude. The Yu Chenghai you wrote about is obviously a shrewd person, so why would he let people block him outside like a fool, and invite a few people in as if it were a gift? If law enforcement agencies are fully capable of arresting these people when necessary, they will be treated as obstructing law enforcement! I hope the author will revise that chapter.

[Thank you for your encouragement]... In fact, what newcomers need most is reviews to know where they are lacking. In a few words, I feel bad at the beginning. All these comments are welcome. Now I am hesitant to change the beginning, for example, to pave the way for the protagonist to appear, and to set up a dramatic conflict for the male and female protagonists. Readers, please point out the flaws in the beginning, I would be very grateful 🙏

Super logical thinking👍! Nice! Collected, study and learn, welcome to visit and give advice!

What are the names of the author's other books? Could you please tell me? I only read one case, and it was a bit convoluted. I'll take a closer look when I have time!

This is a rare good book that I have come across in recent years! There are fewer and fewer good mystery novels! Either it's mixed with superpowers, or it's a body system! They don't pay much attention to the conception and logic of a case! Although the author has buried a pit about the captain's father and the male protagonist's father, I guess he won't fill it in later! A book is not enough to write about the proper style of transnational organizations, so it must be forced to end with Amao committing suicide!

Come and see! Great author! Come on!

I just can't stand it anymore so I'm complaining. The title of your chapter is too random. Sometimes when reading a book, I like to read the chapter title to infer the plot below. What are you writing? Can you write the next book well? 🔨🔨[fn =22]🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨[f n=22]🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨 🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨[fn=22 ]🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨[fn= 22]🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨[fn =22]🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨[ fn=22]🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨

Ah, it's over. I feel quite disappointed after chasing it for so long. Maybe society is changing too fast. Some of the concise and smooth writing techniques and the logical and rigorous plot layout that I like have become rare things nowadays, and my favorite themes have also become a niche. Reading is a very private experience, best suited to being alone without being disturbed. If you can relate to the author, you are lucky enough to know him in a sea of ​​people. It is a kind of mutual attraction between like-minded people. Sometimes, the purer you are, the more you can enjoy it, giving you a sense of niche superiority. However, writing has both private and public attributes. The published works must be hoped to spread as widely as possible and be liked by as many people as possible. From this point on, readers are not qualified to ask the author to insist on generating electricity for love. Especially in business writing that has developed to the extreme, catering to readers and even fans has become a normal operation. In this case, if the words are pretentious and even the sentences don't make sense, as long as you are mindlessly pretending to slap people in the face and chase the hot spots, the popularity may not be low. I write about fandom to generate electricity for love, and I have deep feelings about the popularity. At this time, how to operate really depends on the author's intention. Commercialization is not wrong, profit is a legitimate requirement of the business society. Our hard mental work also has value. However, because it also has a private attribute, when selling, in many cases you still hope that what you sell will really have long-term value. I hope I will be lucky enough to see your works again and find the best balance between business and literature.