The Force of Valoran Is with You

After reading sixty chapters, forcefully torture the master? I was fed up with sending everything out, I was seriously injured when I just traveled through time, my life was overdrawn when I went to the battlefield, I fell into the scream after resurrecting, and I was captured as a slave when I saved someone. You, the author, have a grudge against the protagonist, right? You didn't show your strength at all, and you were tortured over and over again. I read book reviews that say there are foreshadowings. If you write like this, will readers be able to stick with it?

I think overall it's okay, but I'm fascinated by the two operations of giving away high-end equipment. Author, you adopt a more realistic style. You can't use the value of the game to measure these two pieces of equipment. The rest are more than adequate. Also, the author, please give me some advice. Some typos do not affect reading, but some make me extremely uncomfortable. Anyway, this is my personal opinion. You, the author, can refer to it. It doesn't matter if you don't read it. (￢_￢)

First of all, I couldn't bear to give you that necklace. What did you write before? Yes, the protagonist is an orphan and has a mother. I couldn't tell. Then I saw the clockwork and gave it away directly. You didn't think clearly about what our readers were thinking. You thought it was just a thought and you just gave it to someone you met once. What do you think the readers will think? Anyway, I can't stand it anymore.

It would be very embarrassing if Setaka resurrected the Tsar, and wouldn't the protagonist be an ancestor of the Tsar? Hhhhhhh Speaking of which, when you were born in Zuan, almost everyone could collect (rescue) clockwork, including Feng Nu. There don't seem to be many female police officers among others, which is quite strange.

It's messy and confusing. The author forcibly integrates the protagonist into the story of every game character. It lacks a main line.

Brother, you are really crazy about this operation. The equipment given at the beginning is still amazing. You really think you can buy it if you have money in the game.

. . . . I read in a book review that someone said that Xiang was force-fed. To be honest, the protagonist was beaten all the time and his necklace and armor were given away. I was speechless.

I saw the protagonist directly giving away the crystals of the water of life left behind by the sun disk for thousands of years, and then giving away the armor. I'm sorry, I can't do it anymore. Zu'an's alchemical poison is not as strong as you. It is worthy of being called "Ten Thousand Years of Poison Skills". It gathers ten years of poison attacks into one film. I hope that those who can watch it will walk away consciously, except for those who have watched the darkest part. I believe in their poison resistance.

This time we solicit your opinions, we have only one purpose. That is, do students want to watch a single female protagonist or... You know, two or three?

I hate articles that forcefully torture the protagonist for the sake of plot! Extremely poisonous! Goodbye (ー_ー)!!

I didn't expect that there are still people writing stories about abuse (￣▽￣). The author is really a warrior. After reading chapter 25, I really couldn't stand it anymore. Is the protagonist so sacrificial for himself?

It feels like the protagonist has been forced into the heroic story, and no one knows what his purpose is. A Shurima prince has not returned to Shurima for more than a hundred chapters. . . . I have made more and more friends, but they are like running water. After passing by, there is no news.

This book is the author's first book. As a newcomer here, I really don't know the preferences of readers, and I accidentally touched on some places that should not be stepped on. After all, no one has ever told me about these things before. And when I wrote the previous article, I didn't take it into consideration that much, which made everyone feel uncomfortable. I am very sorry for making everyone feel unhappy about this. I'm sorry for you, readers! But please believe me, I am also learning how to write good articles and avoid those bad things. I am also slowly changing. Please give me more time. To be honest, I don't make money by writing articles, and I don't do it to gain profits. My daily updates are purely based on my love and efforts to generate electricity. I just want to tell everyone the stories in my mind bit by bit. So, thank you all for your support. I understand that whether they like me or criticize me, they are all trying to make me improve. I am also aware of everyone's mood, so I will definitely work hard. It is true that there are many failures and shortcomings in the previous chapters. Please bear with me. I swear that I will not make the mistakes I made again in the future. However, the previous articles have been written and it is not easy to modify them, so I will definitely pay attention to them in the following articles. 🙏🙏🙏🙏 Finally, I would like to thank everyone for their support. If you have any suggestions, please don't hide them. Point them out directly in the comment area. I will slowly correct them, and I promise not to delete any post, whether it is abuse or criticism, no matter how unpleasant the words of others are. If I see your suggestions, I will reply to them one by one. Thank you for your support. If you have any ideas, please reply to me below. I will come over and explain them to you one by one after seeing them. Thank you. Thank you for your support!

As a new writer, people won't give you much time to fill in the gaps because you don't have regular fans willing to wait.

Looking heartbroken, the protagonist gave away all his things and abused the owner in various ways.

Kissed Galen in front of him and stole his sister before inviting him to the wedding.

I was attracted by the setting, and after reading about sixty chapters, there is nothing to keep watching. I feel that there is no main plot, the protagonist has no improvement and no characteristics, he just keeps changing places, and there are no details or foreshadowing. I recommend watching "My Hex Heart" more.

In addition, is there any book friend in the comment area who can teach me how to add a character section? I have seen this function in other books. I can see the main character, supporting characters, heroine and so on. Is this function enabled only after it is put on the shelves?