Proving the Dao, Starting with Shrouding the Heavens

I have been reading this book for a while, so I would like to share my thoughts on it. The first is the writing style. There are many people who write about Zhe Tian fan, but few authors can write well. This book is really good in describing the training scenes and battle scenes, and it has a bit of Zhe Tian flavor. The second is the author's thinking. I think the author is really a very spiritual writer. Almost all the writers I have read will normally choose to practice the Zhetian method when writing about the beginning of Zhetian or the Zhetian fan. It is really interesting that the author uses the chaotic ancient method to start the game. In other novels, even if the protagonist creates his own magic, it still belongs to the category of "Shading the Sky" in other novels. It is only said that the protagonist is more capable of fighting to show how powerful the magic created by the protagonist is. But this book really comes up with new ideas in this aspect of cultivation. It combines the chaos ancient method, the immortal ancient method and the heaven-shading method, so that people can really feel that the protagonist is carving out a path of his own (and the combination of the two still makes sense in my opinion). You can feel that the protagonist is as talented as Wu Shi and ruthless, instead of the author simply bragging about the protagonist. There is also the author's intention. Whether it is a description of cultivation or a long post explaining readers' questions, I can tell that the author really treats this book with great care. And it can be seen that the author has conducted in-depth research on Chen Dong's novels. On the one hand, the plot is as close as possible to the original work, and on the other hand, it also has its own reasonable deduction. What impressed me the most was actually the description of Jiang Taixu. Most readers who have read the original work will have a great impression of this magnificent divine king in white. Often other writers will let the protagonist save the divine king and let him live in his second life. The author is different. He deduce that after the God King was saved, he chose to spend the last years of his life with his former lover. I was very sorry to see this at the time, but without the despair of his lover dying in front of him, how could he fight to the death and let go of everything to live a second life? This is indeed the most reasonable ending. Finally, let's talk about the flaws of this book. First of all, there is a problem with the tone used by the protagonist to describe Ye Fan and the others. This makes some people think that the protagonist is trying to trick Ye Fan and even claims that he is helping him. The protagonist is being hypocritical. In fact, the author has also specifically explained that Ye Fan got far more things at the same time than what he got in the original work, and except for things related to ruthless people, everything else is an unowned opportunity. Why can't the protagonist take it? So the protagonist is actually helping Ye Fan by giving him benefits. It's just that the author always likes to use descriptions such as "glancing" and "faint" to make readers feel that he and Ye Fan are just using the relationship instead of brotherhood. This is indeed a flaw of the author, and I hope the author can improve it. There are also some shortcomings in the communication between the protagonists. Sometimes conflicts with people make people feel childish, which are also some minor flaws. Generally speaking, this is a very spiritual Zhetian fanfic. Although there are many flaws, they are generally minor problems. The previous free chapters are temporarily blocked and the chapters are said to have a better edible effect. I hope that the author can correct his shortcomings and write better in the future. I also hope that book friends who like Zhetian Fanren will not miss such a good book just because of some readers' comments.

No, I can't take it anymore. I paid 100 points just to start trolling. I can't bear not to troll. Author, congratulations on inventing a new money-making model. Black fans are also fans. 1. Your protagonist, like Deadpool, can break dimensions and interact with the author, right? Knowing that you have a first-class physique, but then you feel difficulty due to the sea of ​​suffering described in the original book? So, when people were covering the sky, they immediately decided to practice chaos and ancient methods? Brother, you have a first-class physique. The difficulty refers to those who have no special physique. And don't you think it's even more outrageous for people to cover up the sky and mess with ancient laws? The most outrageous thing is that this author forced a reasonable arrangement and gave it to a person from the ancient times. After his death, he reincarnated on the earth. He was caught by the protagonist and obtained the ancient laws in a very reasonable way. 2. The majestic Cangtian Overlord Body, entered the 99 Dragon Mountain, holds the Emperor Sutra, and has the King of Medicine. Looking at the experience of predecessors in cultivation, you told me that I can't open the wheel sea, the Holy Body is cursed, and your Overlord Body is a waste, right? The cultivation of the Overlord Body requires elixir-level divine objects. How did the Overlord Body in the original work flourish? 3. Mud throws the quasi-emperor's weapon to revive the quasi-emperor's blood? No one can get close to you, why do you think mud can get close? Even if the mud in Kunlun is extraordinary, the original stuff weighs millions of kilograms. Did you throw the mud at the speed of light? Can you break it? Whose intelligence are you insulting? Ye Fan is so stupid. I can handle things that he can't even handle in his powerful state. Your protagonist is really a dick. 4. The tiger's body trembled, and the elixir immediately recognized its owner? I can't resist it anymore. Ye Fan, who is in the powerful realm, has the White Tiger Divine Medicine. You, the protagonist of the Cave Heaven Realm, the White Tiger Divine Medicine, followed him directly. I am so stupid. The tiger's body is really shaken, and the bastard's energy is scattered in all directions? Summary, have you seen the 100-point speaking requirement? This is the kind of money this author makes. Are you angry? Want to spray me? Then spend the money! You can't spray me without spending money!

First, there is the Divine Mark Purple Gold Pagoda. The tower is just a material, and the quasi-emperor has not imprinted the Taoist pattern on it. It's also my fault that I didn't write it clearly in detail. It has been changed and I added the sentence "qiu embryo". Don't seize on this point to criticize again. Second, regarding the soil breaking the quasi-emperor's blood, don't rant if you are reading at a glance. The drop of blood was obviously destroyed by the emperor's formation. The soil only brought an impact, impacting the drop of quasi-emperor's blood onto the great emperor's formation. I also wrote in detail that when the soil came close to the quasi-emperor's blood, it was destroyed by the quasi-emperor's murderous intention. In fact, the power of that drop of quasi-emperor's blood has long been reduced. After all, the quasi-emperor has been dead for who knows how many years. It is estimated that there is still 1% or 1‰ of the power left. After all, Ye Fan, who was just a fairy in the original work, could directly refine that drop of blood. I think it's not too much for the protagonist to use the right time and place to destroy this drop of blood. Thirdly, regarding the issue of practicing the ancient chaos method, it has never been said that the chaos ancient method cannot be practiced. Zhang Bairen practices the chaos ancient method, and he demonstrated it to Ye Fan once in the original article. When Zhang Bairen first came out, he was not at the pinnacle of quasi-emperor. He was also just a monk equivalent to a great saint. Fourthly, there is the issue of the protagonist's combat power. Whether it is a battle with Ji Haoyue or a one-on-three battle with Taixuan Sect, the protagonist's goal is not to kill the opponent. The purpose of the battle with Ji Haoyue is to hone the Qilin treasure technique; the one-on-three battle with Taixuanmen is to practice the Qilin divine form. Please don't ignore the main character's purpose. Fifth, some people say that the protagonist licks Ye Fan. Do you know what "licking" is? The protagonist has been exchanging things with Ye Fan. The Hengyu Jing is exchanged for Ye Fan's Tao Jing. The source Ye Fan needs in the secret realm of Tao Palace is exchanged for a small piece of the root of the mother energy of all things. As for the scriptures in the secret realm of Tao Palace, Ye Fan exchanges it for something like "favor". If normal exchange is considered licking, then everyone in the world is a licker. Sixth, about the ruthless emperor and Ye Fan. The ruthless emperor is actually Ye Fan's secret protector. It's just that the original text doesn't say it clearly, but the hint is already obvious. The Ancient Forbidden Land has stood for tens of thousands of years. Who has ever eaten the fruit on it? Even a peak sage like Victory Buddha who entered with two imperial weapons did not get any benefit. Ye Fan ate it three times in a row. Is this good luck? In the Ten Thousand Dragons' Nest, how many thousands of years has the ruthless emperor's coffin been placed there? Who gets any benefit? But as soon as Ye Fan entered, a picture of immortal treasures flew out. Is this a coincidence? Original text After Ye Fan cut off the Tao, he returned to Beidou from the earth. The Bronze Immortal Palace was born, and countless saints and saint kings from ancient tribes coveted the Xuanhuang Qi. Then the ruthless emperor came out directly from the ancient forbidden land! She came out and killed all the people of the ancient tribe. In the end, Ye Fan took advantage and collected all the Xuanhuang in the entire Bronze Immortal Palace. Is this Ye Fan's good luck? I won't say much about the dark ***. Anyone with a discerning eye can see that the ruthless emperor fought with the Dark Supreme to save Ye Fan. There is also the fight against the Immortal Heavenly Sword later. Do you think it was just Ye Fan who was lucky enough to resurrect the Sky-Swallowing Jar? There are also Hedao flowers, which the ruthless emperor had prepared long ago. There is no doubt that the hidden support behind Ye Fan is the ruthless emperor! Seventh, it is still a matter of cultivation. Why are there still people saying things like how long it took Emperor Huangtian to practice something so difficult, why are you so fast or how can you achieve it? The answer is still the same. The difficulty of cultivation is different. One is the one who opens the way, and the other is the one who walks. Moreover, the protagonist's training resources and training conditions far exceed those of Huangtian Emperor. The ancient law of chaos is just a minor training. The protagonist does not need to spend so much time thinking about every step like Emperor Huang Tian. He can just refer to other people's paths and achieve similar combat power. Eighth, the problem of the environment of heaven and earth. Some people always say that the environment of Zhetian World is not as good as that of the chaotic ancient times. I don't know where the evidence for this statement is. Personally, I feel that the cultivation environment in Zhetian World is better than that of the ancient times. During the Ancient Times, it was clearly mentioned that the battle at the end of the Immortal Ancient era had crippled the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths. That kind of disability was the incompleteness of the laws of heaven and earth. Therefore, when cultivating here in the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths, the incomplete laws led to an unstable foundation, so Shi Hao went to other worlds to complete the laws. But later, Emperor Huang Tian killed a group of immortals from the Immortal Realm and immortals from other worlds, and used their Tao to complete the laws of heaven and earth. It was also at that time that the laws of the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths were perfected again, and the World Tree appeared. The Nine Heavens and Ten Earths at this time were far beyond what Shi Hao was practicing. After that, during the hundreds of thousands of years when the Emperor of Desolate Heaven was sleeping, the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths were crippled by one battle after another. But it is hard to say whether it was due to the incompleteness of the laws. In short, most of the origins of the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths were taken away by the Immortal Realm. In the end, it was the period when Emperor Huangtian became the supreme immortal king. At that time, Emperor Huangtian returned to the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths again, and was feeding back this world. Regardless of whether the laws of heaven and earth in this world are once again incomplete, Emperor Huangtian's feedback can solve all problems. It is impossible for Emperor Huangtian to deliberately allow his hometown to be ruined! The above is the process of changes in the Nine Heavens and Ten Earths. The current world of Zhetian was actually completed by Emperor Huangtian. So I think that in today's Zhetian world, the laws are perfect, but the origin of the world is weaker than in the chaotic ancient times. The specific manifestation is that the world of Zhetian has periodic "difficult times". In the era of difficult Dao, it is not that the Dao is damaged, but that it is difficult to practice the Dao. The manifestation of difficult Dao is that the essence of heaven and earth and the spiritual energy of heaven and earth are insufficient, so it is difficult for monks to move forward. To sum up, I think that the cultivation environment in the Zhetian era must surpass that of Shi Hao's cultivation era. After all, when Shi Hao was practicing, the laws of their world were incomplete, but now the laws of the world are perfect. Finally, tell me about your feelings about writing a book! Because I like the book Zhe Tian, ​​I have this fanfic. I can say responsibly that I have read the original text of Zhe Tian several times. If you criticize me for writing nonsense, please come up with some useful information from the original work to refute. As a fan of Zhetian, I am happy to discuss the original work with readers. However, I don't accept the kind of people who just open their mouths, and I don't accept the kind of people who use other fan's misconceptions to criticize me. This book of mine is a fanfic, and the fanfic will definitely have its own ideas. Otherwise, why not just read the original work? What kind of fanfic should I write? But some of my unique ideas will be limited to the world view and some restrictions of the original text. There will not be the kind of protagonist who is awesome and will fight at level 10 or 12. Also try not to include anything that conflicts with the original work. For example, the original work clearly has some restrictions, but then they disappear when it comes to the protagonist. Of course, I will make some choices when it comes to some contradictions in the original work. For example, there are inconsistencies in the original text regarding the types of materials used by the ruthless emperor's fairy gold chains. Then, some things from the prequel to Perfection and the sequel to Shengxu of Zhetian will also be referenced, and some people who have not read these two books will lightly comment.

Sorry, there were some bugs in the description of the protagonist's instrument of enlightenment, which have now been corrected. The original article mentioned more than once that a piece of fairy gold the size of a fist weighs 10,000 kilograms. I roughly estimated it using my fist. The volume of a fist is about 0.4 Cubic decimeters. Logically speaking, a piece of fairy gold cannot grow exactly like a human fist. Let's consider it as a sphere and expand it roughly. Here we take 0.5 Cubic decimeters. Finally, we estimate that the density of fairy gold is about 20 million kilograms per cubic meter. Then there is the shape of the Ba Zhong. The style of this bell is based on the Yongle Bell. According to online data, the Yongle Bell weighs 46 tons and is 6.75 Meters high. Its material composition is: 80.54% Copper, 16.40% Tin, and 1.12% Lead. It is roughly calculated that the volume of the Yongle Bell is approximately 5.4 Cubic meters. Then the initial volume of the protagonist's clock is 0.075 Cubic meters. Based on comparison with the Yongle Bell, it can be roughly estimated that the real height of the Ba Zhong should be 1.6 Meters. When I wrote it before, I hadn't calculated this yet. I just roughly used the data from the Purple Gold Pagoda of the God's Mark in Kunlun Mountain, so there was a bug. I'm sorry. Original text about Shehenhen Purple Gold Pagoda: There is a half-meter-high purple tower on the road ahead, quietly standing there. My initial understanding was that the tower was half a meter high, but now that I think about it, I must have misunderstood. The tower should be half a meter high when it is down, and the half-meter height should be the diameter of the tower's base. The tower may be one to two meters high when it stands. As mentioned later in the article, after the tower is erected, the small pine tree is covered inside. Kosatsu is a squirrel. The original text mentioned Kosatsu's body shape. Kosatsu's body is one foot long, not including its tail, and its tail is two feet long. The tower that can cover it inside should obviously have a base diameter of half a meter to match the original work. Otherwise, the base of a tower that is half a meter high may be less than half a foot, making it obviously impossible to fit Komatsu inside. There is a huge error in this data, I'm sorry. The data has now been corrected and does not affect reading. As of now in the volume of Ziwei Star Territory, Ba Zhong's real height has reached 1.9 Meters.

The protagonist is miserable. If he takes the Kowloon La Coffin spaceship and arrives in the ancient forbidden land, the Overlord Body and the Sacred Body have enmity, as well as the ruthless man and the Feathered Man. The protagonist has both, so he should rush to the street.

Whether it's eating the little medicine king alive, refining the quasi-emperor's weapons, or breaking the emperor's blood from the soil, it's all ridiculous. I would rather the author put the reasons for completing these things on the external mirror than to see these crazy scenes of eating the original work.

I feel that the biggest poisonous point is that in the early stage, the main world and the time-traveling world kept seizing the protagonist's opportunities, and pretended to be the protagonist's friend to create a character that was both real and independent. Later, he became a traditional righteous character to protect the world, and then pretended to be an expert to pretend to be the protagonist of the time-traveling world. The personality was seriously separated from the front and back.

This book was originally written very well, but I really couldn't stand the character of the protagonist. All the characters in it wanted to kill the protagonist. As a result, except for killing some minions, none of the others died. And the protagonist later became stronger. After others couldn't kill him, he treated these people as his relatives. He treated them as much as he wanted, and he gave them scriptures from the Great Emperor and otherworldly techniques. I really can't stand it anymore, so I can only watch some by skipping.

The protagonist possesses the Overlord Body, the Ten Evil Techniques, the Immortal Sutra, the Immortal Ancient Technique, the Chaos Ancient Technique, and many Imperial Sutras and Imperial Sutra forbidden techniques. When meeting someone of the same realm and with the same ban, he still has to fight for a long time. The protagonist possesses treasures in the realm of Immortality and can still compete with those who possess the Great Emperor's Technique in the human realm. Doesn't the protagonist know how to use the Sanshou Jujutsu of the Ten Ominous Treasures? The protagonist only regards the Ten Evil Dharma as a blessing for himself, and does not use the Ten Evil Sparse Hands. The body of the Overlord is already imposed with the Immortal Sutra, which is not to strengthen it. If the great emperor had two or three kinds of Ten Evil Dharma when he first became enlightened, then this great emperor would have half-step of the Heavenly Emperor level combat power. The protagonist possesses the Ten Evil Techniques of the Quasi-Immortal King. He beat a person with the Quasi-Emperor's Great Technique for a long time, and the protagonist was injured. This is such nonsense. If the author had written that the protagonist could not fully exert the full power of the Ten Evil Treasures in this Zhetian, A Kunpeng treasure technique The Kunpeng clan's unique treasure technique can evolve into two types: Kun and Peng. It controls the subtle evolution of yin and yang. It also contains the boundless power of the sea and the power of the lunar sun, and can exert Kunpeng's extreme speed. Known unique Sanshou skills (Sun Fist, Taiyin Palm, Hundred Thousand Divine Feathered Sword Furnace, The Only True Feather Sword, Jinxuan Ripple Technique, Qingtian Peng Technique, Illusion Peng Technique, Divine Peng Gangfeng, Golden Peng Wings, Kunpeng's Speed, Yang-Yin Balance Technique, Boundless Sea, etc.). 2. True Dragon Treasure Technique True Dragon Tribe Treasure Technique is almost unobtainable in its entirety. He can master at most a few Sanshou styles. Known Sanshou unique skills (Dragon-Drawing Hand, Dragon Control Technique, Dragon Song Technique, True Dragon Claw, Dragon Fist, Dragon Swing Tail, Dragon Moves Nine Heavens, True Dragon Entrapment Technique, Black Dragon Breaks the Sky, etc.), The attack power is extremely strong. 3. True Phoenix Treasure Techniques The true phoenix clan treasure techniques, the complete power is unknown, the Sanshou unique skills (True Phoenix Immortality, Ten Phoenix Nirvana Technique in a Hundred Days, Phoenix Crying Sound, Flying Phoenix Claws, Heavenly Phoenix Power, etc.) Are known, and they are important immortal characteristics. 4. The Treasure of the Thunder Emperor The treasure of the Thunder Emperor, one of the ten evils. It is the supreme secret of Thunder. Known Sanshou skills (Nine Heavens Tribulation Light, Thunder Punishment, Thunder Transformation into Stars, Thunder Emperor's Finger, etc.). When cultivated to the highest level, it can perform punishments on behalf of the sky... 5. The Treasure of the Sky Horn The treasure skill inherited by the Skyhorn Ant clan. When the power is exhausted, once the power is infinite, the void is ruined, and it is difficult for other races to achieve great success... 6. Qilin Treasure Technique The inherited treasure technique of the Qilin clan, one of the most supreme sacred arts, is only less reflected in the book. Known Sanshou skills (Qilin Step, Qilin Fist, Qilin Foot, Qilin Pattern, etc.). 7. Treasures of the Clan One of the ten evils, the most powerful treasure of the Clan, its secrets are related to time and space. The unique Sanshou skills are known (Void Ripple, Eternal Thought, Void Cage, Eternal Exile, Void Binding, Teleportation, Void Destruction, Great Void Shift, Uniform Void, Void Split Slash, One Yuan Refining Void, etc.). 8. Jiuyou Treasure The inherited treasure technique of Jiuyou Zhan, one of the ten evils, is one of the best. There is no description in the book. It can only be felt from the battle of the old man of destruction. The strongest move of the old man of destruction is to raise waves of black mist, with its own black light, condensed into a dharma form - the appearance of Jiuyou Zhan, huge and boundless, standing in the boundless world sea, with the old man's body Fusion with this law, the law and the true body become one, and the terrifying and ferocious huge claws are overwhelming, and the most terrifying thing is that the nine divine chains of order behind it run through the universe, piercing the world sea to absorb the power of the origin of the world. The terrifying and ferocious huge claws are overwhelming, sweeping down towards the enemy, bursting out the aura of world destruction, the universe collapses, and the remaining world turns into fly ash. I don't know how many remaining realms there are in the realm sea, but now they are all collapsing and disintegrating. 9. "Grass" Extermination Sword Judgment The exclusive magic of the nine-leaf sword grass, one of the ten evils, is one of the three great sword techniques in ancient times. Its power is so powerful that it can cut off time and space and cut apart the universe. "One blade of grass can cut off the sun, moon and stars" is what it says... . 10. The magic of defeating the magic stone The innate magic of beating the magic stone, one of the ten evil ones, is one of the best. It can destroy everything. As long as you identify the target, you will never stop until you attack. "A grain of dust can fill the sea" is what it says,

I'm just curious about how the protagonist can compare to Huangtian Emperor. He has been cultivating for three years in this post-apocalyptic world on Earth, and he is even better than Huangtian Emperor. He can flash 120,000🐮🐮 with one arm. The whole story is full of obscene and poisonous points.