This Young Hero Is a Bit Weak

It's really good. As a new writer, he is already very good, especially the characters and emotions are very delicate. I haven't seen such fairy grass in a long time. Of course, there must be some shortcomings, but everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. I hope everyone will be more tolerant and support the author. On behalf of the author, I would like to thank you all very much.

It feels good, but the update feels a bit slow. It would be better if the updates were faster. One chapter updated in one day feels a bit too little to read.

I think the author pays more attention to the description of the psychological and emotional relationship between the protagonist and other female friends (referred to as girlfriends). The author's writing is really good and suits my taste. There are very few such authors in the past few years, but other places are a bit rough. I think if the author writes specifically about the two-dimensional area (youth daily life), it will be very popular. The relationship between the woman who is befriended by the protagonist in the book should also be what the author longs for. This idea ( •̀∀•́ ) is the same as mine. It's just that except for the protagonist and the woman who has a good relationship with the protagonist, the other parts are really a bit rough. Shivering ( •̀∀•́ ) I hope to turn over the brand

I like the author's books very much. I used to read them for free on the QQ browser, but I stopped updating them some time ago without talking. I was afraid that the author wouldn't be able to persevere, so I made a special trip to Qidian to register an account, subscribe to all the chapters, and contribute a little bit of my strength. The author's writing style is very good, and the characters' emotions are very delicate. It is the love that I have also longed for (although I am only 18 this year 😁) I think it is not that the protagonist's character is not handled well, it is for the needs of the plot. The protagonist's character is like Jin Yong Just like the old gentleman's Guo Jing, I also wanted to be a writer 😌, write down my other life in a book, and live in another world that I longed for But my writing is not good, I have read a lot of books, and the human relationships I have seen are cold and warm... I may also write a book when I have more experience in the future This book is a small spiritual sustenance for me. Everyone in the author's works lives in it, together with my dreams Maybe other book friends will laugh at me if they are bored after reading it, but I can spend half an hour reading a little bit. Typing so many words can express how much I really like this book Maybe the author will never notice this corner But I sincerely wish that the author's book and family can have a perfect and harmonious ending🙂

I just feel like my feet are not handsome enough and I don't have a sense of reality.

I really love this writing style. It is very delicate and the emotional drama is very well described. It is literary and youthful yet bold and unrestrained. It is not literate. It makes people feel comfortable to read. The author is said to be a newbie? All I can say here is work hard! There are not many harem novels nowadays, and even fewer that are good and non-studious. Although the plot is a bit nonsensical, I understand the newcomer's vest. Take your time, I believe it will get better and better. The plot and writing will improve in the later period, and it will definitely be regarded as a masterpiece.

Well written, thank you to the author! (•̀⌄•́)

The plot of "Nineteen" is really extremely poisonous. The author has such writing skills. It is really a waste to write sweeter stories. If you don't arrange these disgusting plots and make them sweeter, you won't worry that no one will read them. To be honest, if you haven't read them yet, I suggest you don't read them. It's disgusting.

Wow, author, don't do this. You've been completely out of it in the last few chapters. This male protagonist is also a real virgin. He washed someone's first night veil, and then he came every night and thought it was a dream. These recent chapters make me feel that Nineteen's character has changed. Please, author, tell me when did the male protagonist know that Nineteen's first night was his. Also, low EQ does not mean low IQ! !

It feels a bit scary, how many women are there in chapter 70? . . I feel like I can't continue writing without writing new stories about women. Those with high martial arts skills, those with unparalleled talents, those in business, those with very different statuses, and those who were childhood sweethearts were all dizzy. There are too many confidantes and I don't know how to balance it later, or should I really force them all into the harem?

Come on, write, don't stop, eunuch! I think it's well written. I just like harem stories, where women all over the world fight over the protagonist 😃

The protagonist is really disgusting to me. The red plum and white handkerchief are also (washed). He attacks every night (as a spring dream) and doubles as a meridian. Can this character go to death far away? I can also misunderstand Nineteen. The author's arrangement is really hard to bear. Can't I write the sweetness of Nineteen well? I have to add some disgusting plots.

I have only read Chapter 110 of this book so far. As far as I am concerned, it is overall good, but I suggest skipping Chapter 84 to 105. The Xiangyun section is too poisonous. The male protagonist is written as if he is mentally retarded. He thinks that he cannot give her happiness by living out and sleeping in the street, but can she be happy by marrying that Lu Ren? Others don't know what Luzhin is, but the hero doesn't know? In this case, I think it is better to choose the former. I understand Xiangyun's intentions and still do it. Although the male protagonist also comes later when they get married, the previous chapters are really disturbing. It is recommended to skip these chapters. Of course, if you are not afraid of poison, you can try it.

If you have the ability to take in men, what is your ability if you can only take in women?

Seeing the competition, I suddenly felt that Yu Niang was far better than the previous one. 19. Qiancheng is even worse than Xiangyun Among the protagonist and the people, she chose the people. Just like the protagonist said, she chose a very important thing, at least more important than herself (Kindness is very good, I also think the kind-hearted Yu Niang is very good, but in the end, emotionally After all, there is a comparison, and she also made her choice Look at Nineteen. As soon as the protagonist was injured, he rushed to Qiancheng to compete. When the protagonist said that if he destroyed the world, he said it was okay. This was an unhesitating choice between the world and the protagonist. It goes without saying that Qiancheng, for The protagonist plans to kill everyone in the extreme realm, and kills anyone who stands in front of the protagonist Xiangyun plans to regret the marriage by cutting off half of his tongue, and then plans to become the richest woman to give the protagonist the capital to stand by Yu Niang, and then ask Yu Niang to be his concubine Yu Niang has not done anything, and is still protected by the protagonist Now I don't think that Yu Niang is qualified to be the eldest wife. Yu Niang is a bit unworthy of being a eldest wife (she is often jealous, even the protagonist and Shijiu Wan interrupt, and now that I think about it, she is not qualified to accept Xiang Yun's status as a eldest wife, but it does not violate the converse)

A good mindless white stallion novel. Don't take it for granted, the plot is self-righteous and inconsistent in places.

The writing is too smooth and the story turns too hard. The story is very good.

I usually don't comment on books, but this plot is really unbearable. Thousands of words can be summed up in two points. First, the character of the protagonist is unstable, and his IQ and EQ are only needed by the plot. Second, the writing and plot are mostly good, but they are inexplicable in some places. For example, after kissing and touching you for nineteen months and then saying, "I treat you as my sister" 🙂, are you afraid of misunderstanding? ? Come on, it's ancient times. Is this scum or cheapness? In order to hide his identity, Nineteen even hid the gift that was given to the protagonist for the first time. Did he kill the protagonist's whole family? What a nonsense. These two points really make me sick. I don't know if it's for self-pleasure or for more plot. It's like finding a bug in a sweet apple when you're eating it. You eat it but you're afraid of catching bugs, and you don't eat it because it's so sweet that you can't let it go. I really can't stand it. To be honest, it would be a good book if the plot of the literary youth was removed. Otherwise, I would not bother to comment. I hope the author will have a smoother plot in the next book and stop writing these poisonous points. See you soon.

The protagonist is true. He was attacked so many times by Nineteen Nights and he still didn't react and his brain didn't turn around. He became numb and complained about Nineteen Nights. It was really unpleasant to see this kind of scumbag behavior. I crawled

Disgusting, I feel disgusted Is this the protagonist? It's nice to be silly, but it's ugly to say it's S. The Tao family part I gave you my first kiss and you thought it was a joke, Everyone said it clearly, but you still thought it was a joke This is completely The cerebellum is not fully developed, the brain is not developed at all The supporting characters are also forced to lower their intelligence A landlord's son and the princess are hard-steel The writing of the book is okay, but the plot is stupid b It doesn't work even if I lose my brain. Sorry!

What the hell kind of plot are you talking about? The protagonist thinks Nineteen is a dirty woman and becomes sympathetic. Nineteen suddenly changes her character in these ten chapters. Nineteen's character design is all bad.

I just read a few chapters and found that the author's writing is good, but the plot is not reasonable. In many places, conflicts are forcibly created to promote the plot. Take the uncle selling steamed buns in Chapter 5 as an example. The protagonist said that he paid, but the store said that the protagonist stole it, and then there was no more. It was inexplicable. I didn't read whether the male protagonist stole it or not. I understand. , Then the two friends said that the male protagonist was a fool and the store immediately believed it. In the next chapter, the male protagonist became normal again and talked and laughed with the store. This kind of plot is completely unreasonable. Write whatever comes to mind. I still give some suggestions. The author should be more rigorous in his conception. The reasonable party may not be able to survive a chapter I just couldn't sleep in the middle of the night and I wrote so much.

The poison is all on Nineteen. Stop abusing Nineteen, okay? I am a member of the Nineteenth Party.

The character of the protagonist is not likeable. He is like a gangster who cheats and cheats. He has a lustful heart but no courage. I don't know if it will change in the future. If you are not a fan of many female protagonists, try not to read it.

After reading dozens of chapters, here's a summary: The male protagonist is a reckless man with low quotient and his so-called past life experience is approximately zero. The story line often inserts a plot involving unimportant characters, which seriously skips the plot. The main line of the story is very coherent, as coherent as a mission master. The characters have serious and frequent conflicts in their plots, and they often do things that are inconsistent with their identities. There are too many people with cerebral palsy, which is disgusting. The description of martial arts strength is very vague, and the positioning of organizational power is unclear. The emotional description is very good, but the flaws are not covered up. I recommend reopening it.

Are you stupid? It's also well written. It's like a ghost. It's wrong. I've read four or five chapters and I don't know what I'm reading. The fighter among the garbage is feeding me poison.

The author's emotional line and daily life are well written, but I always feel that the relationships and behaviors of the characters in the article should be sorted out, otherwise it will make people feel that their IQ is not online. To sum up, Pigfoot's father is the emperor, his grandfather is the leader of the southern martial arts world, his best friend is the leader of the northern martial arts world, the other is the heir to the governor who has all the power in the world and can compete with the royal family, and there is a magic catcher who oversees the martial arts world. There are various forces that can help him, but it is a pity that Pig's Feet is weak and ignorant, and his relatives and friends are self-righteous, and it is obvious that they have made a fool of themselves, but everything collapsed. Especially the emperor, as if he was seriously ill, left his son outside, not knowing where he was or how he was doing. He didn't even know about it after meeting him, and he even planned for him to come back and inherit the treasure, which was also a failure. There is no news. Arrange this, arrange that, arrange it for ghosts? I hope the author can work harder and write better 🙂

Damn it, resurrected

It's been on the top of my bookshelf for a long time, and I was a little touched when I suddenly updated three chapters 😭

Now I hope I can write more and speed up the plot. It's really heartbreaking. It's rare that the character descriptions are so good. Come on bro, I hope everything goes well