Online Game: My Lord Is a Reborn Person

The author's choice of subject matter is very good. It is rare to see novels where NPCs interact with players. As long as it doesn't collapse in the later stages, it is basically very stable. However, I still hope that the authority of NPCs can be gradually relaxed. The operability will also be enhanced. If you have the ability, you can also start a dual-line plot.

It's a good idea to see this, at least I feel good about it. But after reading dozens of chapters, I felt that it was not very enjoyable. Suggestion: Just talk about the aspects that feel a bit problematic. 1. I feel that the heroine's layout is a bit small, and she cares about everything the same and takes various precautions. (In fact, this is also a kind of character creation, but probably due to the level of writing, the content of the novel is very bland, that is, it is not attractive to readers. Many small details are mentioned here and there, but the big aspects are not dealt with well, and the priorities are not clear?) In this case, the heroine's character is very low. (Although in reality, asking anyone to manage hundreds or even thousands of employees is a lot of work...) But after all, the main character must be a tycoon. In general, the creativity is pretty good and the framework is pretty good (trying to make the game world real, with NPCs treated as real people), but the biggest problem is that I feel that the author cannot handle the writing requirements of such a description. Lead to conflicts. . . . It is recommended that you first write down the creative ideas and concepts to deal with. In fact, it is quite difficult to write short white text well. . .

Now that I have read Chapter 30, I have summarized the problems that I feel are there 1. The characters are not obvious in personality 2. The plots of the male and female protagonists are insufficient 3. The background of the game world is lacking I hope it will be helpful to the author.

I hope the author can check it after he finishes writing a chapter. Some of the sentences are not smooth and some sentences are not broken properly, which makes it uncomfortable to read. Well, the content is very interesting. I hope the author can work hard to write it down.

I love this gender setting so much! ! ! Finally, there is a serious online game novel with a female protagonist (female online game novels are all about romance in a shell). Finally, I hope Cheng Wenkong and Qingcheng develop a relationship line! Whee

In fact, I quite like it, because in other NPC novels, they clearly rely on the system as a backer, but their performance is not as good as the players, and they even still put themselves in the player's position, which I don't like. However, you are an NPC, and he is also an NPC. Why can he have tens of thousands of troops a day without any restrictions, but you can only endure restrictions such as maintenance fees, weapons and equipment, etc. In a few years, you will not be able to raise thousands of troops. Not to mention fighting for hegemony, even self-protection is a problem. But the same goes for the previous books. After all, due to the limitations of the times, the games back then did not have such a large open world as now. However, I like this kind of book very much.... Finally, I hope the author will work hard and update it!

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I always feel that the protagonist's response to Gu Qingcheng sometimes doesn't fit the character. He usually behaves like a seasoned veteran with a measured advance and retreat, but when Gu Qingcheng shows off his temper, he immediately becomes confused and confused. It feels like the author wants to portray him as someone who is not good at dealing with women. This kind of character is usually more common among male protagonists who are new to the game and have never seen women before. The problem is that the character of the protagonist is a century-old goblin who has been a general and has n descendants. It is a bit wrong to have a character who looks confused when meeting a woman.

This book might be better if it was published on a female channel. It always feels a bit petty. Intrigues and intrigues appear in a small village. Especially when it comes to cultivating goodwill, apart from the one you have when you first enter the village, I don't know where the rest has gone. In my impression , the female patron Gu Qingcheng was reborn 20 years ago. She did things with a head full of political ideas. To put it bluntly, she started to operate with magic even though she was not very capable. Her impression of the male protagonist was that of a combination of a century-old veteran and a commoner. He was a coward and wanted to live a stable life.​ ​ ​The author's introduction says that it is an invincible article. It is indeed an invincible article, but I don't feel at all happy because I can't get into it. I have read 5 or 60 chapters, but I really can't stand it anymore. This is the first time I write this kind of review. Although some people may say that if you can do it, you can do it, but I really can't, but I just came to see it, so why can't I just say it.

Yes, even though the introduction says "Invincible King", it doesn't feel exciting at all. The main character is just a salted fish. I am completely indifferent to the world and can't write sad at all. No matter how powerful he is, he will still be like this unless he changes his personality.

This is a mindless novel written by a primary school student. It shows that the lord has insufficient intelligence and no experience. The male protagonist is portrayed as a fool. He doesn't look like a man who has lived for twenty more years. He doesn't look like a general who has experienced hundreds of battles.

A general of the empire and a village chief said that they were afraid that their great achievements would shake their master. The village still didn't know what kind of development it could develop into. Also, if there is no place for the master, there will be a place for the master. You really have a lot to think about.

I was torn apart when I read the beginning of this book, let's not complain about the author's punctuation. But there is a bit of a problem from a description perspective. Judging from the title of the book, the protagonist of this article should be the male protagonist. However, the male protagonist's role is really pitiful. Most of the words are narrating the story from the female protagonist's perspective. Is this really good? Why not just tell the story of the changes in the village, daily military training, etc. From the perspective of the male protagonist? The male protagonist had remained silent when asked before, so he was really just in a daze without doing anything? Secondly, the part about fighting the bandits was even more uncomfortable for me. The heroine had shown her face before. How could she defeat the bandit leader without skills or profession? Not only that, the author also pointed out in the previous article that NPCs have emotions, so who would fight 10 people against 100 people? If you want to say that kind of heavy infantry, forget it, but a group of newly trained militiamen? The wooden gun you got? Just kill 100 bandits? It simply shocked my young mind. In addition, the part about finding the wild horses was a bit abrupt, so why did I find it all of a sudden? Author, please give me a detailed description of the terrain. Now I only know two things about this game, the village, the bandits in the middle of the mountain, and the valley. Since you described the exploration of the surrounding terrain, why not tell us about the terrain you conceived. There is also the horse-rejecting pit. This thing was basically dug around the camp during ancient marching battles to prevent cavalry. Are you sure these wild horses will not break bones if they fall in? Finally, I have a little suggestion. It is really a suggestion. As someone who has played the game Rebirth for many years, I should at least be comfortable with searching for resources and exploring the map in the early stages of the game. After all, if farmers farm, they must have a harvest cycle, but continuing to accommodate refugees will definitely lead to insufficient food reserves. Secondly, why not let the militia team go find trouble with wild monsters instead of fighting bandits first? At the end, the cunning operation that the militiamen must have generals to train makes me feel that this is the heroine forcing the male protagonist to add drama. Finally, I still hope that when writing, I can first conceive a relatively complete world view, whether it is a war like the Three Kingdoms, or a war between heroes. Are there any NPC forces near Qingchengcun? What is the specific terrain like? Okay, that's all I have to say. If there is anything I said that is incorrect or missing, please help me correct it or add something. Thank you.

It is obviously an invincible article, but why did I not feel happy at all after reading it, but instead felt frustrated and panicked? !

The idea is good, and the plot arrangement is also the same. I feel that the arrangement of the gender of the reborn person is also very accurate. If the reborn person is also a male, then there will really be no room for two tigers in one mountain, especially for a capable person like the protagonist.

First of all, I have read more than 140 chapters. So far, the heroine's IQ is still online. At present, I feel that Gu Qingcheng is first of all ruthless enough. From the beginning of his fight against the village to his fight against the refugees to the destruction of Li Village, and finally because he discovered that the nomads gave all military and political power to the male protagonist, he is at least ruthless enough to dare to make a decision. Then because of Zhang Orion's incident, many book friends scolded him, but if you think about it carefully, it's actually quite normal. First of all, the male protagonist's favor has never been improved and he can only be regarded as a high-level wage earner. He may one day be more ruthless and take away the soldiers because he has enough repayment. So it's actually quite normal to have an armed force that only listens to her own words, and she didn't treat the male protagonist harshly. She still gave him military pay and food, and also gave him rewards after beating the refugees. So I can't figure out where the poisonous point is. I can't think of it as the poisonous point if I don't follow the male protagonist unconditionally. In addition, Gu Qingcheng's shortcomings are also quite obvious. For example, the way she handles certain things is very childish, she has no sense of security, and she always thinks that someone is going to harm her, which may be related to the incident of her best friend in her previous life. To sum up, Gu Qingcheng can be ruthless and shameless. He makes decisions at critical moments but has a weak view of the overall situation and an immature way of handling things.

I said I was invincible, but after reading so many pictures, I still don't feel invincible. And shouldn't the main storyline of this story be about the feuding of lords? I only saw the female protagonist's various calculations, while the male protagonist was weak and useless.

Can the author change the character of the heroine? This kind of petty and arrogant character that is always centered on herself is really discouraging. Can reborn people do whatever they want? She is not the real protagonist, so why is she more powerful and has more scenes than the protagonist! Really, without the heroine, I would give this work 85 points, but with the heroine, I can only give you 65 points! Finally, I sincerely hope that the author can write a good heroine, and I also hope that the performance of this work can reach a higher level.

Mary Sue legend. . I didn't react until I saw over forty. .

After reading Chapter 60, the protagonist's performance was mediocre and too little exciting. And it has been describing conflicts, the intrigues between time-travelers and reborn people, which seem to be in harmony but are completely different from each other. It was frustrating to watch.

If this book reaches about one million words, and if it can still maintain its current high energy and excitement, it will definitely become a hit, and even one book will not necessarily make it a god. ζClick on the header to see the introduction of λ, and you will be pleasantly surprised.

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I feel that it is too extreme for the male protagonist to be able to carry out war and farming at the same time. The development speed of the Reborn Lord is really too slow. In other books, the Reborn Lord has caught up with the national team by a block, but in this book, the Lord is ten blocks behind the national team. Moreover, such an extreme male protagonist could serve as a military marshal before, so how militaristic is this country? The characteristics of the title of the book were not brought out. When I read the introduction, I thought that a reborn lord could bring out the male protagonist's talents to the fullest. However, I saw that this lord was really poor 😢.

That's all I've changed. If I can have detailed memories for hundreds of years, it's more than just a dream. It's crazy that the protagonist can be a god general with his personality.

With this kind of character, I think the one who wrote this book is Kamikado.

Have a good time together and good separation. I wish the author can overcome all obstacles and reach the top bravely. I mentioned the shortcomings in the comments. To summarize here, the heroine's role is conflicting, her thoughts are important and her behavior is cold, and the hero's allegiance is too abrupt, and the powerful enemy has not yet arrived. Why is this! It's too abrupt! Secondly, it can't be seen from the behavior that she is a reborn person. The advantages of being a reborn are not highlighted at all, at least not in the front, but you are emphasizing that the heroine is a reborn. What an embarrassment to the reborn...

I really like watching it, but unfortunately I don't have much money, so I can only vote and sometimes order a little. I would like to recommend it again. I hope more wealthy people will read it.

I'm commenting after reading the first chapter and haven't read the rest. It's really good at the beginning, but I don't know if it will fall apart at the end. I'll still criticize the article if it falls apart at the end. But with the way it starts, it's hard to judge whether the article is good or not, but I guess it's not bad.

Sorry, we are not suitable. I can only say that your mentality is not good, so I left.

After more than a hundred years of experience, since a general will only stick to his character rather than being casual, a casual person can become a good general and become a general from scratch.