Zhenlong Hall

Did the author come from another website? The writing is very visual

The plot is very interesting and not cliché at all. Come on, author, I will support you for a long time.

Very good work! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

Come on, come and pay attention, for such good writing. Writing is not easy, so work hard.

Finally read it and commented. First of all, I would like to give a thumbs up to the opening chapter. The brief introduction is very good. I hope that next time the opening chapter will have fewer words and be more concise. Then let's talk about the main text. Are there a few sentences in a certain local dialect? I feel like I haven't heard of it much, but fortunately I still have a rough idea of ​​what it means. Then I feel that the pace of this plot may be a bit slow. Some things can be introduced later, and then get to the exciting part as soon as possible. Generally, I like to see the exciting parts soon. Other than that, I think it's pretty good, and there's no problem with the writing. Come on⊙▽⊙

The writing is good, the third chapter suddenly becomes exciting, and the fourth chapter is even more awesome. I've read too many routines, gimmicks, and system stories. It's rare to see someone who polishes the story with such care. I give it a thumbs up. It feels like there is infinite development behind, and there are enough foreshadowings.

I've read a few chapters. The writing is not bad. It's quite attractive. The writing style is okay. I've invested in it. I hope to write it as well as possible.

Come on author, yes, you are writing a book seriously!

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