Driving Marvel

I have just read a few chapters, and I like the setting very much. His abilities are a bit like an upgraded version of Gundaruf, the protagonist of Zero: The Familiar. I must keep writing. Nowadays, there are fewer and fewer Qidian Marvel novels that can coordinate good ideas with writing and plot. After reading the beginning, although it is a little immature, it has the potential to become a source of food with a little polishing. Regarding the content I just read, I summarized something that I hope can help the author... The first point is the issue of paragraph writing. The author can ask some senior writers for paragraphing techniques, which can improve the reader's reading experience; The second point is to make a complete character setting, including but not limited to the character's personality, character, ability, experience, etc. It must be logical and the plot should be completed according to the logical setting. In other words, the plot can be set boldly, but the reaction of the character and the interaction between people (dialogue, interaction, etc.) Must conform to the character design, so that the character can be "live" and avoid being stereotyped (of course, the specific extent depends on the writing ability and experience, but it must not be criticized by others); The third point is to pay attention to the background and culture of the time. These will also affect the character setting and plot foreshadowing. For example, the dialogue and interaction between the protagonist and Gwen at the police station for the first time have the problems I mentioned. You must know that the ancestors of Americans are British. No matter how they flaunt American liberal culture now, there are still some "rules" in it, such as lady First, therefore, when introducing others, women are generally introduced first. When shaking hands, the woman extends her hand first and introduces herself, and then the man gently holds the fingertips and introduces himself. I hope the author can look up the details in this cultural background and integrate them into the article, so that the written things will be more flavorful (of course, the damn translation accent is not necessary). That's about it. I will continue to read the article. I hope the author can write a good work. Come on＾0＾~

Why does it have to be replaced with new elements? Spider abilities, right? If Tony succeeds in researching them, maybe there will be a few more other abilities. Of course, the premise is that the Tony written by the author is the kind of simple person in the novel. If it is a real version, let alone using spider powers, it will not work with new elements. In the movie, Tony only shows the upright side. A man who controls an arms company in his twenties. Killing people and seizing treasures is a very small thing. Of course, some gangsters say that Tony does not know, it is all done by the bald Stan. Come on, he is not a three-year-old child and doesn't know anything. It's just that the bald head didn't deal with him and he didn't want to care about it.

Don't write about arc ballistics because the wrist exerts force, okay? Either you don't explain it, it's just that the special ability is useless. You want your explanation to be at least logical, right? You might say it's because of telekinesis. A shake of the wrist can only make the bullet travel in a diagonal direction. If it wants to travel in an arc, it must continue to bear force.

Are you sure mutants can join the government? Physical examination can detect X gene

The protagonist's ability is a bit like Gundaruf, the left hand of God in Zero: Familiar

It's not like you're asked to write a movie script. You have to suddenly drop in and impose a heroine, and she also knows everything. How many people can be persuaded to quit at once, and those who quit can sign up.

Emmm. How can I put it this way? Reading this novel always gives me the feeling of a running account. The author's writing style still needs to be polished.

Starting from Chapter 2, we talk about "control" rather than "driving". Does the author understand what "drive" means? The tool can be driving. I can bear it. Is it really good to use driving for things like cells and energy?

Why did you run away to another world while writing? I don't even want to watch it. ⅰ

Author, I think it's a bit far-fetched to set your ability as driving. In my personal opinion, this ability can be called "Royal"

The ability name was changed to "driving". Driving refers more to transportation vehicles and large machinery.

To be honest, I really don't like the setting of the heroine. The hero gives everything to the heroine and tells the heroine everything. There is no logic at all.

To be honest with this book, apart from the novel setting at the beginning, the later stages are really too poisonous! The author's writing style is not very good, but the setting is OK. I hope the author can improve his writing skills!

Go ahead, you're so awesome, brother, come on, come on ↖(^ω^)↗, I didn't expect him to be a great god, I thought he was bronze, hey

Put a steering wheel on the earth and drive it away 🙂

To be honest, the word "driving" really drove me to death. I couldn't watch it! ! ! ! ! !

Marvel, you can't write well. Why are you going to the infinite space? Are you looking for abuse?

Chapter 8 I was worried about the author's IQ. When he went to Parker's house, he said I wanted to see your father's belongings and walked in without any questions.

The author makes the plot progress too fast, Spider-Man, Iron Man, the copy goes by very fast, some parts are too vague, and he has no idea about his own confidentiality. I recommend the author to read the author's book that also writes about Marvel fans. I recommend the author to read "Being a Police Detective in the Film and Television World". The protagonist's rationality is very purposeful. Finally, I gave the author a book list. I hope the author can revise the previous chapters more smoothly.

I read this book and skipped through it. To be honest, the plot at the beginning was a bit unremarkable, but when I saw the plot at the back, it felt very interesting. Come on, I will give you all the monthly tickets. I hope it can be updated soon. The update is a bit slow!

I hope the author will update quickly. I have already subscribed to 🥺. The more I read, the better it will be. I am not satisfied with updating quickly.