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I am doing a book review (the first time I write a long book) The biggest highlight of this book is the setting, which is novel and logical, and the setting is not ruined. The biggest shortcoming is the setting of the characters. Although the characters are distinctive, it feels that there are still flaws in the details, and there is no natural and excessive feeling. Maybe because the plot of the book has not been developed yet, I feel it lacks high quality. It's trendy, but I haven't gotten it yet. There are a lot of plots that can be discussed in detail, but the nature of the novel is not highlighted. Also, the character design of the protagonist feels a bit skinny, but after two hundred years of experience, it feels a bit strange emmm. Let's talk about the advantages. . . 1. Be sure of the setting. The entire setting has not collapsed and there is a certain logic. 2. The character setting is relatively complete. Although the portrayal is not profound, there are all kinds of people. 3. The writing style is relatively good, without deliberately procrastinating the plot, and the word count is low. In general, it may be because the author is a newcomer and does not grasp the points of refreshing writing well enough, and lacks an exciting plot. However, the flaws outweigh the advantages. If you are tired of seeing other settings, this one is worth having.

This idea is interesting. Has the author signed it?

. . . I knew it as soon as I saw the title

Should the author try to use group portraits in the book?

The book is quite good 😍😍 but there are too few words 😭😭 so I can't read it.

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Forehead. . A laughing squid? Looking at this name, could it be a relative of the squid that loves diving?

I saw the recommendation and felt a little sad that it was unfinished.

Eunuch, eunuch, you are so kind. You never grow old despite all the wind and rain. Eunuch, eunuch, you are so kind, you will never get dark in the sun or rain. Eunuch, eunuch, you are so kind, you have a white face like a kid. Eunuch, eunuch, you are so kind, your voice is like a ghost's scream.