Manchurian River

I have read Chapter 107! Just a feeling haha. How deep is the obsession of a person who has lived in one or two lifetimes to find his father? (After reading the table of contents of the chapters below, I haven't looked deeply and carefully yet) You know how to make money, can't it be reasonable! ! ! It is also unreasonable and the remuneration for a novice writer in the 1980s was not very high. It is not the case now that the reader base is large and the publication surface is wide. If you are not criticized, you are considered lucky. Mark Six Lottery is a private lottery with too much pressure! Pay attention to regional discrimination! The subject matter is good, the ideas are acceptable, but the self-pleasure is too serious. (Novel means everyone should be more careful when having fun together)

The name is too off-putting. It's hard to be interested. Can you change it to something a little more chic? Wang Daman, the richest man in the world. The love killer Wang Daman. What do you hear about this?

Why is mine 382? 385

After I finish this one, I'll take a few days off and start two more books. I am serious. There are two sets at the beginning. A piece of calm writing style is based on mainland China and Hong Kong as a supplement. A relaxed stallion flow is mainly based on Hong Kong and supplemented by mainland China. Then we take these two factors into account, one is the nostalgia of the era, and talk about the past events of that year. One is the era of entertainment, let's talk about the fantasy of that year. Extracted from Manxiangjiang, copying it does not count as copying. I have finished reading the questions in your book, there are three main parts. I suddenly stopped looking for my father. The setting of the golden finger for the fight was not clear, and I completely disappeared from behind. Stallion Entertainment Articles A heroine can ignore reality. The key is that you have arranged all the prerequisites for happiness, and you are a heroine. You are single-minded and infatuated. Have you ever considered the readers who can accept your easy-going stud stories? The most poisonous thing later is to abandon the route of finding dad, and then suddenly say that he has found it. It's that kind of family again, it's annoying just looking at it. It's okay to make a TV series with a low-level plot. Isn't this novel just for people to criticize? The turning point is too sudden. The setting of finding dad at the beginning is the beginning of a masterpiece. From a literary youth to Doudou, the article is spicy, the protagonist is legendary, from a sophisticated person to a brainless novice and a cool article, the protagonist is transferred to Hong Kong, and he is cheating. To be honest, a single female protagonist can handle it. The key is that all the conditions for riding a horse are in place. What do you mean by hiding it and pretending to be innocent? I think his elements here can go both ways. All are welcomed by readers. But I am not strong-willed and I am still afraid of something. With all due respect, you are just a loser. What are you afraid of? You have really been banned and eunuched. Readers will be curious about what awesome things you wrote, but you were actually banned and corrected. Maybe you will become famous among a certain group of readers. You are now a novice, and the author is half popular but not black. What are you afraid of? Ask. You can do both. That was a thing of the past, and it was still the entertainment trend in Hong Kong. What a pity, I feel sorry for you.

The main characters are all worth billions. They are already considered tycoons. In his previous life, he was a man in his fifties and sixties who had been involved in business for decades, and he was still like a child. The things inside are too expensive. Just move the villa for 50 to 60 million. At least it's equivalent to today's five or six billion. As a reborn person who has been in the shopping mall for half his life, if you want money, people, information, and information, there is really no way to invest your precious funds in real estate. If the layout is a little bigger, it is necessary to engage in industrial layout. Unless you just want to be a salted fish, then real estate is the most stable.

Come on, the writing is quite good, but the author still changed the name of the protagonist a little or changed one word. He is originally an intellectual and cultural person, but the protagonist has such a rustic name, which is a bit inappropriate and inappropriate. This makes the readers feel less immersed. I would like some suggestions.

The protagonist was almost 50 in his previous life! He is still a small boss who runs a factory! Hong Kong is a money society! The protagonist's behavior is so inconsistent with the setting! !

After reading it, overall it's very good. I just want to mention one thing for reference. I and my girlfriend are still renting a house, taking taxis and taking buses when going out. When buying a house, the agency fee is 1%, but you actively give 5%. That's several million. In reality, there can't be such second-rate goods?

Isn't the protagonist's character a bit shaky? Especially when it comes to Zhou Huimin, it has gone beyond the normal scope of coaxing a girlfriend. I am over 50 years old, and I am still in Hong Kong in the 1980s.

I hope it doesn't have a single female protagonist. In those beautiful times, it would be a pity if there was a single female protagonist. There were many other rich women.

I feel that pig's feet are simply retarded to women, and I can't stand them anymore. . . It is necessary for a man to respect and care for his wife, but as a super warrior who can reach a speed of 50 kilometers per hour and has 1V300 young and Dangerous, he can actually be made weak by a woman and kneel down when he touches a beautiful woman. What the hell is this? ? ? . . . The author, can you think carefully, those are pig's feet, not you, don't show your own sexual abilities. . . A grown man was written down by the author as a coward

It's nerve-wracking! It seems that we have to find other lines!

I feel that the protagonist is naive, unlike someone who was born again in his fifties or sixties. He tells others that he is a fat sheep wherever he goes. I am afraid he does not know the underworld and gangsters in Hong Kong at that time, and the housing prices and salary data in Hong Kong at that time are too inaccurate.

I saw that I could continue reading the novel, but I signed the contract without getting my ID card, and then the newspaper company took the initiative to pay a super high price. I didn't know that the boss of the newspaper company, Ma, was a gangster? I haven't been able to watch it since then! Retired! ! ! !

Let's not talk about the protagonist's licking of dogs. He doesn't act like a mature businessman at all. He raises a thug to ask people to do good things and has his butt checked. I don't know why I raise him. Wouldn't it be better to raise a dozen bodyguards?

The protagonist is in serious trouble. A small boss in his fifties is reborn. After that, he loses his sophistication, does things in a mess, licks dogs, and feels like a loser. He forces a stable character, but you can't see it at all 😅

The heartless and unjust father, the pitiful experience, why he was 50 years old and burst into tears, and worked hard all the way to find his father. . . . The bloody scene at the beginning is depressing. Wouldn't it be nice to just sacrifice your parents to the heavens and be happy all over the world? A tycoon who has assets worth over 100 million in his previous life, but has never been able to enter the top circles. Wouldn't it be better to become a top tycoon after being reborn? With your current character design, wouldn't it be against the rules to show women enjoying happiness in just a few chapters? You went to find your father and then questioned him, but your eyes immediately went straight when you saw Zhou Huimin. To put it simply, the character has collapsed!

It's superfluous. It's 2020 and you're still looking for your father?

I voted, can I have more? If you act like this, I'm afraid the emperor will recruit you into the palace.

After reading for dozens of minutes, I feel that the protagonists, supporting characters, and historical celebrities in the book have average IQs at the level of students. Then this trading game is like a market aunt. The employer can't give orders for a long time, and the stock market changes rapidly. The protagonist earns money and is rewarded with millions of dollars every minute. Grads are raised and grudges are pitted against enemies. People's hearts cannot stand the test. In reality, such a person will go bankrupt every minute as a boss.

Is it okay for the author to play with high technology, or maybe write about the commercial department, supermarket chains, catering, etc. If I always write about entertainment, I feel tired of it. I have read too many Hong Kong entertainment novels, which are basically the same.

The old man values ​​family ties so much, so it would be great if you could help him and send them all down to wait for him. Then the whole family can be together again.

I only got 20 shares for 50 million, and it was more than a pig's feet without spending 30 cents. It's not that I look down on the fat man, he is not worth the price. Hong Kong dollars were still very valuable in the 1980s.

One person beats more than 300 people, that's awesome

Why are you always staring at Hong Kong? Isn't it great to be in the electronics industry, games, computers, and chips? Isn't it okay to seize the high-tech market of Japan and the United States? It's just fighting among each other, just to fight for those three melons and two dates, and beat them into pig brains!

I really can't stand it when I see that a novel costs 2,000 yuan per thousand words. It's so profitable to write novels, and 99.9% Of newspapers will not go bankrupt.

This is the first book I have written seriously. I didn't want to get lost in writing, so I thought about coming up with a main line, so I came up with a clue to find my father. However, as I write it now, I find that this clue is too thin to support a novel.

The first few chapters are a bit interesting. From the moment we buy a villa, everyone becomes wise!

When I saw the name of the protagonist, I couldn't stand it anymore

Are there any novels with a heroine named Vivian Chow? Please recommend some books