Since the Return of the Clown

If you feel that something is not flowing smoothly, please tell me immediately, because the system will block some content, and if you are looking for trouble, I will ban you directly. My grades in this book are so bad, and yet, his mother, a colleague came to look for trouble, and she was speechless.

The building that gets scolded... If you have any opinions about the author, please come here. Don't scold the author elsewhere. This is a place specifically for scolding the author. Scolding the author here will not be banned, but scolding the author elsewhere will be banned.

Horror Movie Tower………… You can write down your favorite horror movies below, and I will pick out some and adapt them based on what you wrote, but basically it will completely disrupt the plot. I was not very proficient in the first volume, but starting from the second volume, the plot was completely disrupted by me.

The old rule is that the update time is uncertain, but it will be constant, one to three updates, depending on the mood.

I just rewarded a disciple. The student party doesn't have much money, so don't mind! There are recommendation votes for you too! Hope to cum!

The starfish I wrote is neither an invincible article nor an abusive article. But the feeling is not enough. The return of the clown is a bit confusing. The protagonist is not a virgin but not dark either. It is recommended not to write about domestic horror movies. Domestic horror movies are basically pornographic, of course, the power system is relatively high, and they basically involve the level of fairy tales. You write horror and supernatural novels, not spiritual novels. Make this clear. In addition, you must have a certain degree of exploration into the world of horror movies. The level of exploration or the integration of world views and original content (characters that do not exist in the original movie, the strength of the enemies is different from the movie, etc.) Since the protagonist is half human and half ghost, I recommend a way to get to the dark side. Ordinary monsters and monsters are too low-level. It is recommended to arrange the protagonist to go to a horror movie with a world view of the Cthulhu god system. From easy to deep! From sacrifice to great evil god! All in one step! Use the protagonist to let those great beings corrode the real world and other horror movie worlds! Let's have a carnival of evil gods! Big carnival! !

I feel that the author could reconsider using paragraphs to introduce the uses of some props and characters, because in the future, if there are more readers, there may be many paragraphs. Later readers will need to click on each paragraph to see if it is posted by the author, which is very unfriendly to subsequent readers. If you don't want to mention props and settings in the main text, you can open a separate chapter or write them in the words of the author of this chapter. And I feel like there are a lot of things that I don't need to explain, so I have to click in to take a look because I don't know if it's the pictures of the characters that I'm not interested in or the introduction to the setting of this article... (And many people don't have the habit of opening this chapter)

Set a few goals 1. Collect two thousand before it goes on the shelves 2. Get over fifty first orders 3. Order two hundred after finishing the book 4. Collect five thousand after finishing the book 5. Get more than five thousand recommendation votes after finishing the book

I think the author never reads what he writes. Not junk, but not fine either.

Just asking you if it smells good?

Is it okay to update twice a day? Who still updates every day these days? I tell you, you will lose readers if you update.

After reading the first two chapters, the writing is not very clear and the writing skills are relatively jerky, but there should be room for improvement. I will mention a few problems I saw. 1: Is there too much introduction to the movie? It's because your novel is about traveling through the heavens and will involve some movies. However, when you introduce the general plot, you will actually lose a lot of expectations. Those who have seen the movie don't care, and those who have not seen it don't need to introduce it in such detail. 2. I took a look at the ghost level setting, and it doesn't quite fit the current rhythm, but I'm not that old. 3. Strength setting. The cat demon in The Fierce Cat was one of the rare upright and Taoist characters of that era who could still win a great victory. Is the level too low?

I finally signed the contract today. I estimate that I will wait another two or three days to test the waters and make recommendations, but I don't know what the recommendations will be. Category recommendation? New book picks? A new suspenseful book? Supernatural cover? Popular serial? Popular categories? I hope it's not the latter two, if it is, it'll be cool...

I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs this time. Last time you were a eunuch.

Overall it's okay, I just feel like it's missing something, you taste it, you taste it carefully. Just a little bit different.

When will you come back? Can wait. It doesn't matter if you are a eunuch. When you come back and you open a new book, I will still support you. Academics are the most important thing, I will continue to update in the future.

Come on, author, I have been waiting for this type of book for a long time. Many of them have either been banned or eunuchs.

Drugs, just give money or work for free. In fact, as long as the money is available, everyone can enter except for a few state secrets.

Why is this? Why has it been taken off the shelves?

When I become cruel, I even scold myself.

It doesn't feel refreshing, and it's also watery, but other aspects are pretty good.

Why not? I really can't send the original outline.

The introduction is pretty good, but I don't know what's going on inside.

The author is poisonous🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭

I wanted to watch this movie from the beginning, but it was a pity.