My Daily Evolution Game

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It's a purely enjoyable article, it's seriously intellectually depressing, it's funny for the sake of being funny, but it's still good to read without thinking. I couldn't stand it any longer and died of poisoning.

I think the writing is okay, it's quite to my liking. I hope the author can write well and don't mess up the word count.

After reading more than 30 articles, how can I put it? The character of pig's feet seems a bit irritating. The framework and concept of the whole book are good, but the protagonist is a little uncomfortable to read. Let's wait for the author's next book, I hope it will be better. 🙂🙂

1. There are a lot of typos. The protagonist's daily life in the first few chapters is very funny, but later on it becomes a bit exaggerated. It feels like no matter how you look at it, you can't get the author's brain circuits and can't find the point of laughter. 2. The dungeon battle is really awesome. When I see the dungeon of the flour mill, I feel confused. What is the protagonist going to do? Isn't it said that players have a special attraction to ghosts? Only the workshop director can clearly distinguish the ghosts in the dungeon, so forget it. When the two wild players in it were causing trouble, some of the workers said they were ghosts and some said they were humans. Didn't it mean that civilians couldn't enter the dungeon? Moreover, the writing is a bit messy, and I don't even understand what everyone did after entering this dungeon. It's like a deliberate attempt to explain everything in one or two chapters. 3. This is what confuses me the most. In one chapter, I just mentioned how good Shenzhou is, and after about two or three sentences, I said that Shenzhou is not actually a good guy. When the protagonist prostituted Shenzhou resources for free, he said that Shenzhou was very honest. After the prostitution, he said that these people are not good people 😅 Especially at the beginning, after dozens of Shenzhou players sacrificed themselves to prevent the abnormality from spreading, I couldn't stand what the protagonist said. In general, the protagonist is thinking about the things he prostituted for free, and at the same time he is saying bad things about them behind their backs. He just started saying how nice he is, and then immediately changes his mind and says that this person is not good-hearted 😅 The protagonist is not required to be fearless, but at least he should have some basic bottom lines, okay?

Although complaining is good, there are too many, which makes people feel confused. In some places, it is obvious that there is no follow-up. I want to describe the world in a big way, but the writing is obviously not able to do it, which makes it even weirder. It should be grand but is very blank. I feel like I am just a novice practicing my pen. I hope my works will be better in the future, but I really can't stand it now 🙄

The protagonist is still pretty good and has some pretty saucy words. I am really envious that you can read this book review I posted, because as long as you are not affected by the book reviews, you will find that this book is still good. I see many people saying that the protagonist pretends to be poor in the early stage to gain sympathy from others. But did you look carefully? The protagonist never said that his family was poor, it was just that his classmates were just making up their minds. The protagonist's personality is quite xx. He just let things take their own course without any explanation. This is just a popular meme. Your malicious negative comments are really too much.

If you upgrade your rice-carrying skill to the master level, can you carry a bag of rice to several floors? ? ?

How to say it. This is an author who has not been severely beaten by Qidian Orphanage. He naively thought that the protagonist's parents were just a setting. But actually. As of now. The protagonist's parents are a burden to the protagonist and to the entire book. As a result, the plot cannot be developed. Because my parents are here, I can't participate in the dungeon. If you cannot participate in the dungeon, the plot will not advance. Forcing to push the plot will lead to giving the parents a "death constitution", and all kinds of things will happen around their parents. The additional green plum also has this problem. A green plum in a vase is destined not to become a heroine, because she cannot satisfy the protagonist (physical differences), nor can she help the protagonist. Destined to be a burden. And because of the existence of this female protagonist, the description of the female supporting role cannot be too much. If there is too much, the protagonist will be overshadowed, and if there is less, the description will not be enough. If there is a next book where the protagonist enters an orphanage, maybe the results will be better.

It hurts to see you write the plot of the official background. You can't just create a different world and write it however you want. Now it's metaphorical and so on. It's embarrassing to write and it's embarrassing to watch.

Good books shouldn't be buried like this! There are only three or four good books of this type.

I feel aggrieved by what you wrote. How have you ruined the character of the protagonist? He keeps thinking that the sky is falling and he is standing tall, enjoying the country's welfare but doing nothing. I don't understand why you wrote this book to show us that the protagonist is always cowardly and does nothing and lets others support him. What's the use of having this protagonist?

1. Shenhao, what is the use of buying a house and going to school? He has been doing missions on a daily basis unlike Shenhao, he has never lived in so many houses, and his strength level has already exploded before he even went to college. 2. Qingmei is a failure and has no love at all. Her mother's assistance is even more annoying, and accompanying Qingmei on tasks as a nanny is even more annoying. 3. Don't want to expose yourself and pretend to be so long, and then suddenly join the organization to dedicate yourself? Although he obviously has a high IQ during the mission, he shows his lack of common sense when dealing with the leaders of the organization, and he keeps hinting at persuading Qingmei to join. 4. Xia Tong, the person in charge of the first department, is very childish in his interactions with the protagonist. Even though he cannot beat the protagonist in terms of IQ and force, is he still going against the protagonist childishly to attract the protagonist's attention? A girl who looks cute on the outside is really a cat on the inside? 5. The devil's daughter appeared out of nowhere. I thought she would be dealt with or reported by the steady protagonist, but she turned out to be a tutor and a cook. Then she became more and more public. Is it necessary to hide and disguise?

I was really drunk, and it was quite toxic at the beginning. Can you get trending hits just by writing? There are a lot of those things online, I'm afraid you have never used Weibo.

Excluding all the old jokes and jokes, it's just a weak character and a novice writer.

The author is definitely in need of an operations officer. If so, add one 🙂

On the premise that her son is capable, talented, and the family is rich, the pig-footed mother decided that Zeng Erya, who was not particularly outstanding in terms of IQ, appearance, character, and family, would be her daughter-in-law when she was in high school. The only outstanding advantage was that she knew everything. What kind of mentality did this mother have?

I thought it was a bit interesting at first, but then I felt that the protagonist's character was too naughty. Personally, I felt that the description was too naughty. He was always making excuses, teasing, and gossiping. This kind of lip service may be a highlight of this article. But it has no use for the main plot. So I personally can't stand it anymore. It's like someone saying, think about it carefully, this doesn't taste good, think about it carefully, this is wrong, etc. Although you know it's a catchphrase, you always feel disgusted when people say it to you, and you think, everyone else is a fool? Is there anything you need to remind you to think about? It's just like paying lip service. It doesn't matter at first, but if you pay too much attention, you will feel that this person has a really bad character. If there is such a person in reality, he probably has no friends. Fortunately, this is the protagonist of the book.

Actually, apart from being a little watery, it feels generally good, but to be honest, I really don't like Zeng Erya. I think it would be better to have someone who matches each other. Zeng Erya makes me feel a little too white and lotus-like, a little too carefree. I feel like I don't like the main character very much, but then a demon king's daughter comes along, and I suddenly become jealous of him. Then she was made all kinds of jokes and comments by her family, and then she suddenly thought that she was their daughter-in-law.

I was baffled by what I saw. It was clearly labeled as a daily article, but it turned out to be a novice cool article.

The king spared the protagonist's life because he was prudent and for his own benefit I feel that the protagonist of this book is cheap because he is hurting others and not benefiting himself There is no benefit to being cheap to you, but I just don't want to make you feel better Forget it about the enemy, the protagonist is like this to everyone I am confused. It is completely contradictory to my cautious and cautious character, okay?

I just want to know why he bargains with the system? Why is he a pig's foot? Or can so many players around the world bargain with the system?

The protagonist setting is relatively unsuccessful. First of all, the protagonist in the setting is a timid and cautious but very smart person. However, when such a cautious protagonist hides his identity and goes through dungeons with players in China, his biggest characteristic is exposed, which is being mean. As long as he is usually with the protagonist. Anyone who has come into contact with the character will be deeply impressed by the protagonist's mean character. In this way, other players can dig out the real protagonist by just paying a little attention (because the protagonist exposes too many clues), so I don't understand the meaning of the author's setting like this. Is it just a simple imitation (please spare my life)?

I really can't stand it anymore. Humanity here is about to perish. Yet here we are still in the mood to flirt and flirt. Are those who are ignorant as children still ignorant as parents? Is he mentally retarded?

In order to watch it for free and support the original version, I decided to read the chapters from beginning to end and then disconnected from the Internet.

The first 100 chapters are good, but the later transition into the organization is a bit stiff.

Good guy, others say that all trainees in the flat circle are trolling, but even the deacons are trolling in this novel. I'm trembling before I see it.

The rest of this book is okay, except that the struggle between various forces feels like just playing house. The force of China is the main protagonist. It's amazing that it didn't get wiped out.

A system with its own consciousness can cooperate at most. If it cannot cooperate, it will find others. The universe is so big, does it have to be a licking dog? Unless this system is set up so that you will end up worse than dead.

Daily? This is so everyday! ! ! ?