I Extracted the Personality from the Novel

The book is a good book, but the author did not handle it well in some places. You can try to change it. First, the characters in this book are too uneducated. Neither the male partner nor the female partner's IQ is online. Since you are writing a mystery novel or a comedy novel, the characters must be focused. The key female characters and the male characters need to spend a certain amount of energy to describe them. Those that are not important can be reduced from the factory. Second, procrastination. I can see what the author wanted to write, but the rhythm is not well grasped, and the highlights and dull periods cannot be evoked and passed. Third, characters. Characters must have characteristics. It depends on how the author understands this. Don't comment on your own opinions. If the author thinks it affects you, you can delete the ones I don't recommend. To sum up, the subject matter is good. This category is not niche, but it requires high writing skills. If the author is careful, this book can have good results.

Hello readers, I am Dr. Zhang from the Second Affiliated Psychiatric Hospital of XX Medical College. For the privacy of the author, it is inconvenient to disclose. In order to provide better treatment, our hospital adopts the method of allowing patients to use their hobbies on the Internet to gain recognition from more people and obtain better treatment. I believe that no one is immune to this. When you are attacked by a disease, it will sometimes torture you to the point of exhaustion, but we must always have such confidence: our will is stronger than it, and it is not worth mentioning in front of us. With the care of your family, the concern of readers, and your own efforts, you will soon be able to defeat the disease and win. So I am here to thank you all for your consideration and support for my patients. I also look forward to future works, thank you all. 🐶Save your life Hahahahahaha (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia (seriously you will lose)

It's pretty good-looking, and it's quite interesting so far, but there's just no main plot? Personally, I think it's really not suitable to have a harem or a female protagonist. Also, the policewoman is a bit too self-centered. When the murderer is not identified, even the impossible person is worthy of suspicion.

The author is great. The development of the story is obviously very strange, but it makes people feel fascinated and has a very high feeling. I am inexplicably excited by reading it... I hope the author sticks to his unique style and updates more. I still want to read it!

What haven't you thought of with the name Zhu Jue?

Zhu Jue, male, 21 years old, unmarried. We are looking for a girlfriend with all the brackets in the brackets. He currently lives in Ward 1201, Building A, Qinshan Second People's Hospital. He is a senior mental patient. He has been in the industry for two years and has been selected as one of the top ten outstanding young mental patients in Qinshan City for two consecutive years. He is dedicated to his job and devoted to his job. He has been committed to training himself into a mentally ill young man with ideals, ethics, culture, and discipline! ! ! Also, he is the first person to roast kidneys. Note: his own kidneys.

The idea is good, I just want to see when the protagonist realizes that he is not a murderer, and the author doesn't want to write about a harem, that's all 😔

Going further and further on the road of brainstorming

When can I update again? I've been waiting for a long time.

Finally we've reached this point 😏

When will the new book be released? 😥

Has the reconstruction been completed? It's been a month!

When I think of Zhu Zhujue, I think of Qincheng Second Psychiatric Hospital

Zhujue. . . . Is it the one who eats kidneys?

Come on, author😁

Very interesting book, keep it up, author

Friends who have collected it, don't click in every day to read it. I'm sorry. The author wrote a few chapters a few days ago and I'm not very satisfied with it. I decided to retreat and make major changes. There won't be any updates this week. . . [Funny. Jpg]

School is about to start, is there still a chance to see this book again?

I'm afraid this book is not about eunuchs. I don't want it. (≧Д≦)ノ, Eunuchs have no future.

Sigh:-(What a pity. This book is so beautiful, but it still has a very novel subject matter.

I like this writing style very much😁

It feels so confusing when I watch it, and I feel like I'm watching a brain-burning movie where the main character is mentally ill.

Is the author cool? A good book is rare

Why are there no interesting novels anymore?

Tsk, do you dare to resume the update?

It's been over a month. Why are you there? The eunuch should say something. I check every day to see if there are any updates.

It's been 2 months and the author hasn't finished revising it yet?

Come on in the car! It's really fascinating, thank you for letting me read this novel