I Can Become a Kamen Rider

To be fair, I think your writing style, author, is more suitable for dialogue novels about pineapple buns.

To be honest, the content of this book is too dull. Whether it is character portrayal, plot logic, or fighting description, it is not up to par. First of all, the content between the male protagonist and the rich girl and the dude is very sudden. There was no foreshadowing of the relationship between the rich girl and the dude until the party suddenly discovered that there was a dude who had a strong relationship with the male protagonist, and then the male protagonist got angry and left? There is no interaction with the dandy, and there is no other description of the dandy. The dude kidnapped the heroine after a while? ~? There is no motive! It is made clear that this dude is just a tool that appears out of thin air to highlight the heroine, but then there is basically no description of the scene, and the sense of substitution is insufficient. Then the biggest problem is the fighting scene. The whole fight feels like the male protagonist A, then the opponent A, then the male protagonist activates skills and the opponent is GG, this kind of turn-based feeling. Although fighting description is more difficult to deal with, the turn-based system must be avoided! And if I guess correctly, this book should be the author's first work. Of course, it doesn't mean I didn't say it. Lack of experience is normal, but considering that it is best to change the current situation before putting it on the shelves, you can plan the direction of the plot, sort out the outline and intersperse foreshadowing, and save more manuscripts instead of temporary codes to better ensure the quality. Scene descriptions and fight descriptions can be accumulated by reading more about what other seniors have written. You should also put some effort into characterization and determine the character's experience, personality, and action style in the outline. Finally, cut out some trash talk and intersperse it with songs, but not too often! It can be arranged to be carried out at key points in the character's journey in order to better shape the character. Of course, these suggestions are just personal opinions. I hope the author can write better and better 👍

An ordinary boy gets a Kamen Rider system and can transform into all Kamen Riders. In a world without Kamen Riders, and weirdos keep coming, what will happen?

I am a 7-year-old bookworm, and even a late-stage Daluo Jinxian, a powerful person, cannot withstand the poison of this book. It is extremely poisonous 😏😏

The setting of Armor Warrior is not weak. Similarly, Armor Warrior can become stronger through cheating. Why do we have to belittle Armor Warrior?

If you don't like Armor Warrior, don't write it in Kamen Rider. Both are part of your childhood. Whoever watched Kamen Rider as a child hasn't seen Armor Warrior. Either don't write them together, or write them together carefully. Although Armor Warrior is indeed a reference, don't think that you can win everyone's popularity by belittling the book. Both are childhoods.

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Mysterious operation, self-destruction soldiers go well all the way 🤫🤫

Let's put it this way, poison, very poisonous, I was already dead in the second chapter. I have been reading books for almost eight years and very few people can poison me to death in the first three chapters.

Wouldn't you just write a summoner that can transform into all Kamen Riders? . . , My head hurts when I look at the summoners one by one. You don't call this the power of all Kamen Riders. You should say the power of all Kamen Riders belts.

The author talks about why Emperor Xia is not strong enough. Emperor Xia's speaking ability should be above that of Enma Tokio. Emperor Man's strength, speed and defense are infinite.

I don't think this writing is particularly good, because it's very awkward where you should be embarrassed, and it's awkward where you shouldn't be.

In fact, I don't think Kamen Rider is suitable for writing more. One belt for the protagonist is enough. For those with good compatibility, such as Little Doctor and Build, Wang Xiaoming and Shi Wang are simply cancerous novels, and it's hard to keep them from falling apart as soon as they are written. After all, these two works themselves are broken, and even Toshiki Shirakura can't help but lose control. Besides, it's better to just say that the protagonist's genius created it himself. The changed system looks even more poisonous

This guy named Mulan is a failure, extremely poisonous, and then he meets a woman when he goes out? It was also directly **. Practice your writing, really

I have re-summarized this article written by a fan of Cloud Knights who has only seen excerpts from the P station. There are so many common sense mistakes that I can't read it at all.

I feel like this book is so stupidly written that I feel very embarrassed even if I skip reading it.

Kamen Rider has a system, is it speechless? Let's just say that the protagonist picked up a transformer from the black hole. It's very doubtful to write a system. You want to know the word count. Generally, the system is a fucking joke. It looks like there are black lines all over the body.

I just want to ask Mulan what this person is used for

It has been confirmed that he is indeed a die-hard fan of Kamen Rider

I feel like the protagonist's journey up to this point has been too smooth, without any ups and downs.

Finally updated on August 19th😭😭😭

If Mu Xueer were a Zerg, would the plot effect be better?

I feel like the author's writing is very vicious. The protagonist is a high school student. Who would believe that he is a Kamen Rider? As long as he insists that it is not him, who will believe it? Moreover, the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist develops so quickly, which is awesome! What's wrong with this heroine's brain? Don't you think it's abnormal?

I looked back and saw that I was as embarrassed as ever. I couldn't bear it any more, so I pulled away.

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I really can't stand the constant swearing.

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So many people died, why didn't the official investigate?

The main thing is spirit. The setting of the enemy and ourselves are of the same origin. A knight without spirit is just a weirdo. Who do you expect to protect?