American Comic Lord of Demons

It's a good subject. There is a problem with the writing style. The protagonist has two lives and behaves like a funny male protagonist in a Japanese comic. There is also a plot where the protagonist plays tricks on the senior sister and serves him with a knife. It is really youthful and gives people the feeling of watching anime in junior high school. Why can't the writing style be more mature? Except for those dialogues where the protagonist can't stand up when he plays tricks?

To be honest, the subject matter is pretty good, but the writing style is too bad. Many places are not very rigorous in conception, and the system settings are a bit confusing. It would be too poisonous to force the summoned ones to suppress their strength. Or don't summon powerful ones in the early stage. This is Marvel. In addition, your plot in the early stage is like a running account. Many chapters of the plot are difficult to integrate.

Cheers to the author~

Hmm... After reading more than ten chapters, I feel a little overwhelmed. The description is not delicate, and the daily life that should be briefly mentioned is a lot of psychological changes and cliché complaints. The exciting parts are briefly mentioned again, and the battle scenes are over in a few sentences. Let's focus on daily life, this daily portrayal is really..., And the combat power classification is not clearly explained. It feels like the outline was taken directly and added with the protagonist's cliche rants. There's nothing wrong with the subject matter, but the writing style is too rough. There is a way of writing whatever comes to mind without building a framework first. For readers who often watch anime, these daily descriptions and complaints are really too cliched and childish, brother.

Wow, you calculated the calamity of death, and then you saw what it was, why didn't you run away and stay to show off your strength? Is this my destiny? And then successfully hit the street? Are you so naive?

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American comics add a monster, so different

How to say it? The Allies defeated Germany, but the Nazis occupied North America.

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All I can say is, this is different from what I imagined.

The Golden Elixir Yuan Ying in this book is probably the weakest I have ever read.

It's a very good idea. It's better at understanding the power system and star civilization of Asgard than 99% of Marvel fans. There's no licking or deliberate belittling. But trying to construct a bigger new story has led to various contradictions ~ I can't continue reading

The author has made too big a turn. The new setting is unacceptable and the only option is to abandon the book.

The system is a virus that suddenly invades a person's body. The protagonist has been invaded by the system without knowing it. It's really pie-in-the-sky.