The Legend Begins at the Top

The number of words is so tm, it's like having a disease. It is acceptable if the language is gorgeous, but the problem is that the writing skills are too poor.

Suggestions 1. Pace issue. The author's writing skills are good, but the plot is too slow. In fact, reading the novel is not just about the battle descriptions in the battle. What more people like is the pace of the book. The first 91 chapters all describe one night. This is too uncomfortable. The procrastination gave me a headache. 2 The author almost defeats all the opponents in the lane, which results in similar plots and makes readers want to skip reading. 3 The author is a little less enthusiastic about the fullness of the characters, mainly due to confusion about the protagonist, especially his characteristics when licking the heroine in the first few chapters. Today's book friends especially don't like to lick dogs and pigs' feet. I really don't lie to you 4 Your setting is quite good. The protagonist travels through a big boss in the era of spiritual recovery. This setting can also be more prominent. In addition, the background of the world where the protagonist is located is not summarized I hope the author will get better and better

What I feel is particularly annoying is that the equipment used in the game has to be discovered by the commentator after the fight 🙂, so all the viewers and commentators are really blind.

Tell the truth, tell me one thing! If we go forward four to five years, your book might become popular! Even if it's not popular, it's still better than it is now! I used to look down and then look up when reading novels, and two or three hours passed! When I looked at your book, I lowered my head and looked up. It only had more than 20 chapters. It was really unreadable. You can write operations and saos, but are we playing games or adventuring in Valoran? It is acceptable for you to write about the inner activities of summoners. You have to write about the inner activities of the hero. Even if you write it, you have also portrayed it. All that is left is for the summoner to interact with the hero! I'm so embarrassed that I feel like I have cancer. I saw some people say that you have suffered from the second disease. In fact, you are not as good as the second disease! I'm reading novels and playing games, not watching the hero's journey and dubbing!

I think it's well written, but it's a little more detailed. Why do I see so few people?

When you're in lane, you're always talking rubbish. If one thing is clear, it's going to be at least 10 chapters. Who can stand it if you write 5 or 6 chapters in one game?

It's so annoying, why are there always some lol texts licking pdd, just like watching Douluo fans licking the master.

I can't stand it anymore after reading more than 40 chapters. I wrote so much in one positioning match. I estimate that it will take about 200 chapters to finish positioning.

The most annoying thing is the pdd game, the word count seems too annoying. After reading Chapter 80, the positioning match has only reached the seventh game. According to this pace, if there are no supervisors, this book may not have 10,000 chapters by the end. Speed ​​up the game quickly, it's too slow.

590,000 Words, only 2,000 less than recommended, terrible

Can you remove your emotional line? I really can't stand it.

Those who are truly capable don't have to be licking dogs

I was shocked, even e-sports articles have licking dogs? ? ? What the hell is it writing about?

This book just feels too slow. I wrote 50 chapters for 5 hours during a live broadcast one night, and 10 chapters for a game. I guess not many people like to read it like this.

Chapter 90 of Just Entered the Trap (ŐдŐ๑) only describes one night, which is described as delicately written at best, but is just a slur at worst. I gave up. Isn't it good to learn skills and watch live broadcasts and read novels? The writing style is really 'profound'! 😅😅😅

Quan Ding can understand it (crazy hint 😏😏)

It is indeed a book with only 35 comments in the comment section. When I read the introduction, I wanted to read the emotional drama, but I just couldn't bear it in the first two chapters. This is too much.

The author's writing is very good, why no one reads it 🤔 and there are few recommendation votes. I prefer this type (except some plots are a bit awkward)

Boss, I wrote dozens of pictures for a game, and the water god went to sea? ? .

Do you even need to master the skills of the stone man? Do you know anyone who would go check it out?

The three golden chapters failed to attract readers to stay, and now the licking dog cannot attract readers' hearts.

Oh ~ this is disgustingly gorgeous

As far as the author is concerned, you must read it. Nowadays most Qidian lol esports novels look the same as bronze and silver

No wonder it can't become popular 🙂

A slap in the face, don't say that tes is a fool to buy Casa, the champions from s3 to s9 were hammered all over