My Fox Is Shy of the Moon

I read Ye Ling's book. Generally speaking, the writing is pretty good (why do I feel like I have said this to many people), but I also encountered a lot of confusion during the reading process. The first is about the worldview structure. The book does not seem to give a detailed or rough introduction to what kind of world it is, so it is sometimes confusing when reading. It is best to introduce the world in a small way. In terms of character design, foxes are said to be skinny, but the content does not highlight how foxes are skinny; I read the story of the Eyeless Fox, and the setting of the villain Fu Shao was not good enough. You did not highlight his disguise and cunning. The chopstick throwing was too angry and frustrated, not like a scheming man at all, and even going to the rich boy's house cannot be used to adapt to the plot. This will make the heroine look too naive, and the reason is a bit far-fetched. It's not enough to pave the way for the eyeless fox to go to the rich young man's house. You have to leave enough clues to let people know that the fox is hostile to the rich young man instead of just raising it like this. Because I haven't finished reading it yet, let's just say this first. I hope it will be helpful to Ye Ling. This is a comment from a certain gangster.

I jumped into reading it. I think the plot is good. In the early stage, it was obvious that the overall world view was too jumpy and tiring to read. But it got better later on. It shows that you need to rethink the first ten chapters and how to write them to make it easier to get involved.

About the model knowledge in the book★ The plot of the model in My Fox is based on professional knowledge as much as possible, but some details are made up by Norei himself, please let the professionals laugh it off! Thank you!

Already collected, when does the author plan to put it on the shelves?

Already collected for investment, cheers up💪

Wen Wenya, let us read the book while giving the tickets in our hands to Da Da! 😁

The writing is very good, the writing style is delicate, please support me 🙂. Collect and follow 😁

I signed the contract very early, awesome (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on. Read the opening chapter. Received, stay tuned!

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The work has been collected ~ please visit me

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The writing is beautiful and the descriptions are delicate. It is a good book. It has been collected. Come on, beauty.

The trumpet has been collected and voted in. Welcome to return and collect it, please do your best.

Bubble. It's been a long time since it bubbled.

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(⊙O⊙)Wow, I think it's so cute when I read the introduction.

Foxes are so cute. Chef Niu is here to visit.

What to eat for lunch? Recommended!