Immortal

I skipped through the first four chapters, briefly read the fifth chapter, and read the beginning of the sixth chapter. I felt that the writing was too obscure, and I always felt it was not fluent, and I had no patience to read it. Especially at the beginning of Chapter 6, names appeared too frequently, and the unnecessary psychological activities looked awkward. The three of them were shocked. Feng Ruyu was in a complicated mood and felt inexplicable. Maybe he wanted to continue reading about why he was shocked or complicated. There was no further explanation, and he felt that it was being mysterious. Maybe it has something to do with me skipping reading. I have been a bookworm for more than ten years and especially like Xianxia. I would like to give you some suggestions. The writing is fine and the settings are okay, but I feel like there are some things that you can't grasp or control. It's recommended to skip them, such as psychological activities. Another point is the number of characters appearing in each chapter and the frequency of names.

Well written, good luck to the author! I am a prostitute for free🙂

The author's writing style is excellent, and all kinds of whimsical and wonderful ideas emerge one after another. The only regret is that there are a few updates, which is not enough to read. It has been bookmarked. Please give it a boost, and I am waiting for the update.

"Taoyuan Suppression of Bandits" The soldier passed by to read a book and stayed behind👣

"Taoyuan Suppression of Bandits" The soldier passed by to read a book and stayed behind👣

"Taoyuan Suppression of Bandits" The soldier passed by to read a book and stayed behind👣

Great book! Come on, author, I am a free prostitute 🙂

Already invested, please give the author a boost 💪The writing is very good, I feel that Xianxia is a slow-burning type, and the signing of contracts is relatively slow. Persistence✊Persistence✊

Why did the title change its style? I'm a bit uncomfortable with the sudden change 😁

It's well written and has been collected. Let's work together! The author is also welcome to support "Taoyuan Bandit Suppression"! Shake hands.

I feel like this book will be signed after the New Year.

Very good grades, well written, and a lot of words. Why didn't you sign it?

Such a good work should be signed

If you have any suggestions for this book, please feel free to leave a message. Only by brainstorming can we present better works. Because I really want to finish it well. 😁

I have always liked Xianxia novels. Compared with fantasy Xianxia novels, they remind me more of the many film and television works I watched when I was a child. I also think of my dream of Xianxia when I was in the second grade of middle school 😁

It's really good, but it's a pity that like me, I didn't sign it. Let's work hard together and persevere together. I wish you all to sign and become a god soon. It has been accepted. Please return to comment and collect it

Great efforts to update 😄

Looking forward to the new story starting soon, come on

I have no education, so I can only say to this book: Damn it! Awesome! Sharp! 666! Awesome!

Just gone? 🔨🔨🔨🔨

Wait, how can I finish this book? This is wrong! ! ! ! This is obviously not finished yet! ! ! ! 😭😭😭😭😫😫😫😫💔💔💔💔💔🔪🔪Author, what's going on! ?

Keep it first, author, come on, give me more

I'll cast some recommendation votes tomorrow. I've used up all of today's votes.