Wish Solver

Short review: The taste is average, and it could be written more brilliantly. I personally give it about 80 points Book title: "The Wish Solver" Author: An Baba Commentator: If not a little bit glamorous Introduction: This is a story about the protagonist completing a system task to renew his life. The first task is to help women from home b get divorced. And because of the woman's mysterious death, there is an emotional entanglement between the protagonist and a criminal who can read the protagonist's thoughts. (The fate is determined by the author) The second task is to help the father and son reconcile, and by the way, he is concerned about the issue of campus violence. Feel it—— The plot is very rich, not procrastinating, and does not waste too much pen and ink in a certain link. Except for the supernatural power, every paragraph has a reasonable explanation, and the early reading experience is excellent. Logically it's okay. Because the protagonist has a golden finger and others do not, the protagonist tries to make every paragraph as thorough as possible when rebutting other people's doubts, with complete thoughts and positive energy that most online articles do not have. The plot is also very lifelike. Moreover, the author is now on his third book, and the updates are also very good. This is a sentimental novel. Writing Suggestions 1. The title of the book is a bit difficult to pronounce. You can refer to the names of the same theme, such as Master of Regret. 2. The introduction is plain and keeps readers away from thousands of miles away. The interesting and innovative advantages of the article are not shown. As an author who writes books using female porn techniques, don't forget that there is also a love affair in your novel. How to fill in the candy step by step, how to fully describe the character's personality, and how to support the plot. Let the characters allow readers to observe and feel as much as possible to achieve empathy, rather than giving direct conclusions. For example, Jiang Wei's behavior when she feels guilty can be written in more depth to reveal the characteristics of her white lotus. You can write her excuse, "I added that person's WeChat just because I thought his intentions were evil. I'll check it for you. He and I really have nothing to do with each other." What I wrote was that on the one hand, she and Han J Guan chatted about vx from time to time, and when talking about the protagonist's hobbies, she also revealed some of the protagonist's pet interests; on the other hand, she talked about the protagonist's wide range of sexual interests and so on. After all, she "revealed to the protagonist's parents that she was dating Han J Guan" in the protagonist's life, so I think she should be Duo Bailian🤔. But I think why the protagonist wants to be friends with such a person instead of opening her mind needs to be explored in depth. 3. The protagonist's complaints are too rude, and it's okay to be tongue-tied with those who have dirty intentions and evil intentions, but to address a strange male protagonist as a "g man"? ? ? This is a small problem with character design. (An Di Baby has great opinions on this) Although it is already the third book, it seems that the fan group is not big enough. So while the author can think about how to write a good book and sort out his own life, he can also consider making friends with people in the author's circle and Qidian Book Friends? After all, if more people take a look and give their opinions, you can see the points that you can't see. 🤔But don't be too persistent. After all, there are thousands of articles on the Internet, so don't make yourself too uncomfortable. Sorry for taking so long to comment.

The ability that this male protagonist has is a bit foul. The female protagonist should be a little sad in the future.

Short review: The taste is average, and it could be written more brilliantly Book title: "The Wish Solver" Author: An Ba Commentator: If there is no trace of beauty Introduction: This book is about the protagonist completing a system task to renew his life. The first task is to help women with domestic violence get divorced. And because of the woman's mysterious death, there is an emotional entanglement between the protagonist and a detective who can read the protagonist's thoughts. (The fate is decided by the author) The second task is to help the father and son reconcile, and by the way, he is concerned about the wave of school violence. Feel it—— The plot is very rich, not procrastinating, and does not waste too much pen and ink in a certain link. Except for the supernatural power, every paragraph has a reasonable explanation, and the early reading experience is excellent. Logically it's okay. Because the protagonist has a golden finger and others do not, the protagonist tries to make every paragraph as thorough as possible when rebutting other people's doubts, with complete thoughts and positive energy that most online articles do not have. The plot is also very lifelike. Moreover, the author is now on his third book, and the updates are also very good. This is a sentimental novel. Writing Suggestions 1. The title of the book is a bit difficult to pronounce. You can refer to the names of the same theme, such as Master of Regret. 2. The introduction is plain and keeps readers away from thousands of miles away. The interesting and innovative advantages of the article are not shown. As an author who writes books using female porn techniques, don't forget that there is also a love affair in your novel. How to fill in the candy step by step, how to fully describe the character's personality, and how to support the plot. Let the characters allow readers to observe and feel as much as possible to achieve empathy, rather than giving direct conclusions. For example, Jiang Wei's behavior when she feels guilty can be written in more depth to reveal the characteristics of her white lotus. You can write her quibble: "I added that person's WeChat account just because I thought he had evil intentions. I'll check it for you. He and I really have nothing to do with each other." What I write is that she and Officer Han chat on WeChat from time to time, and she also reveals some of the protagonist's little quirks when talking about the protagonist's hobbies; on the other hand, she has a wide range of sexual interests and so on. After all, she "revealed to the protagonist's parents that she was dating Officer Han" in the protagonist's life, so I think she should be Duo Bailian🤔. But I think why the protagonist wants to be friends with such a person instead of opening her mind needs to be explored in depth. 3. The protagonist's complaints are too rude. It's okay to be venomous towards criminal suspects with evil intentions, but to call a strange male protagonist a "dog man"? ? ? This is a small problem with character design. (An Di Baby has great opinions on this) Although it is already the third book, it seems that the fan group is not big enough. So while the author can think about how to write a good book and sort out his own life, he can also consider making friends with people in the author's circle and Qidian Book Friends? After all, if more people take a look and give their opinions, you can see the points that you can't see. 🤔But don't be too persistent. After all, there are thousands of articles on the Internet, so don't make yourself too uncomfortable. Sorry for taking so long to comment.

I feel like the heroine is a bit silly 🤭

I was really angry when I saw the second story. Why does this kind of father need to fulfill his wish to see his son?

This setting is extremely horrifying and personal privacy is completely lost. How can you endure this and still be together?

I feel like this system is useless and the heroine is so pitiful.

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Oh, by the way, I forgot to tell the author that I actually wrote a review, but because it was a long post, it was under review at 7 o'clock and it didn't come out. I'll see if I can post it on my own self-media platform in the next two days🌚.