The Rise of the Family Reborn in Xiangjiang

​ Personally, I think that if you are reborn through time travel, you can have a space and some treasures in the space. There is really no need to come up with a bunch of mysterious pills with various medicinal effects. The protagonist really cannot keep his current abilities and connections! ! And if you look at this kind of Hong Kong writing, you can just write about making a fortune, reaching the pinnacle of life, or having some feelings, changing the world, changing humanity, etc., That's fine too! ! ! There is such a cheat in the space, as well as the protagonist's rebirth memory and the data in the space. It is already very unbelievable. If this continues, there are so many cheats in the space. Does the protagonist intend to become invincible from the beginning, defeat the whole world in a hundred chapters, and start to build a country and move towards the sea of ​​stars in two hundred chapters? ! The most taboo thing about rebirth novels is to start with a high starting point and develop quickly, otherwise there will be nothing to write about in the middle and later stages, unless you plan to turn the city into fantasy

Personal suggestion is that the first three or four chapters, which introduce the past and present life of the protagonist, can be condensed into one or two chapters. If there is anything that is not explained clearly, you can write a little bit later from time to time. It is very boring to write down several consecutive chapters like now.

The plot design is quite good, but the reading is not smooth. The writing is average.

Is the author Hewen?

Too shaky, not crisp at all

This treasure hunt is not a copy of the antique dealer's treasure hunt, and the names have not been changed.

A hammer in the east and a stick in the west, I can't understand

Come on, don't give up. If you give up, you will lose⊙⊙It's come to this point, keep going!

What's going on in Chapter 9? You're wrong. Please repost Chapter 9.