Immortal Blood

After writing one hundred chapters, the main character is almost all a supporting character, and there is no distinction between the primary and secondary roles.

The last few chapters are a bit unclear. After all, I had already prepared to leave Kyoto before, so why did I throw myself into a trap?

It's really hard to swallow. I'm crying even though I have a big weapon in my hand. I'm crying. I'm just traveling through time. It's so embarrassing. Didn't Dihuangwen have that spell? It directly cursed the second prince of the Northern Kingdom to death. The protagonist, the Holy Mother, doesn't need to read.

Seriously, the protagonist wants to go to Snake Island, why not wait until the protagonist becomes stronger before going? The protagonist goes on adventures when he is in a period of rapid development, instead of cultivating until the progress slows down and then takes risks. I feel that the protagonist is a bit stupid.

It's almost time to enter the immortal world

Why don't you write a palace fight scene? It's a mess.

Author, are you writing comics or TV series? I recall it at every turn, recalling how wonderful it was. You wrote the supporting characters very well, but there is no need to waste so much saliva on each supporting character. A cook is irrelevant. Even TV dramas don't give the cook too much perspective.

Is the realm of the third realm wrong?

No comments, even a bad review, let me know that I am not just entertaining myself.

It feels good. Come on, invest in it.

It's well written⊙▽⊙. This is what new writers and new books are like. There is no other way but to do more publicity, join more Q groups, go to forums, post bars and other places to promote the work. I remember there was a Q group similar to mutual recommendation, and new books still need to be recommended. Come on.

Come on, keep it first, there's no limit to your investment.

Let me just say one thing: the indigenous protagonist is basically a loser.

Why not update

What did you write? Since he has extraordinary powers, the identity of the protagonist is actually obtained through adventure. The spotlight is unbearable.

Is this book written too plainly? No ** that makes people read? If there are any shortcomings, can you please point out the book friends?

Writing alternate history. It's just not all the history of this world. Why do familiar things from real history always appear in it? At best it sounds like an illusion, but in reality it's just selling it like a sheep's head. It's been renamed, but it's actually still real history, it's just the mortal world that's become stronger. It's just a world of immortal martial arts. Kong Laoer is everywhere, this is awesome. See these structures are the same as real history. If you are not interested, read the first few chapters, then read it to the end, and then throw it into the unsightly file name.

It looks good, I hope the author will stick to it, come on, and encourage each other!

It's too long-winded and procrastinating. I've written so many chapters going back and forth about everything from going to the island. There are too many psychological activities of the protagonist. The atmosphere that should be tense is broken by the psychological activities of the protagonist Luoli Basuo. The protagonist always looks like he has wisdom in his hand. When he is not very clear about his own strength and the strength of others, I don't know where his courage comes from.

When can I enter China and join the sect?

If you have enough Qi and blood, you will have a strong spirit. If you are in good health, you will have enough energy. The book is good, but the name is not good. Qi and Blood are Immortal. I thought it was about cultivating Qi and blood. After reading it, it is not my favorite style. The writing is very good. I will read it in my spare time.