The Duke's Wife Is Very Ill

The story structure is reasonable, the language is witty and humorous, the supporting characters are lively and cute, the article is easy to read, and the pace is not sluggish. This may be because there are fewer chapters published now and the layout is small, mainly in the Duke's Mansion. It is also recommended that the VIP chapters be moved back a little and subscribe early, so that you can do this when the popularity grows in the future. Personal suggestion, overall it is good!

I don't know how many times I have written a book review, but here it is. Let's not discuss books anymore! When I first read the article, I was amazed by Jun Hao's dual personality, as well as Lao Wei and classmate Wei Zixin. It really made me laugh in the early stage, and I didn't notice it~ Relaxing, and these two people and other important supporting characters have their own characteristics and are relaxed and comfortable. By the way, Xiaozhi is so awesome (ง •̀_•́)ง I have written so many words and several books, but it's a pity that I didn't have time to read them all. There will be time in the future ٩( 'ω' )و How can I put it this way? The contrast between the two personalities of Jun Hao is very good. One is funny, the other is cold. Is Lao Wei really an ancient person? I feel like I know a lot! Cola. The first Scrabble game was very enjoyable, haha. I was worried at first that my typing speed would be very slow (//∇//) In the end, I was the first (make me proud, hehe) Well, we got along very easily and it was fun. You are a good person (look, I have given you a good person card!) Are you happy? I have only read more than half of this book now. I have no time. Don't worry. I will make up for it in the future. I just don't know how long it will take! Here are the refills for you (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ I support you, today is the night of the group! Let me see, there will definitely be a place for you in the debut seat ٩( 'ω' )و. A rose by any other name would smell as sweet.

You have written at least a million words in total. As a new writer, I naturally cannot give you suggestions for your book. You must have received a lot of opinions during the long period of writing. Perhaps you can read best-selling books and learn how they write to improve your grades? Subscribing to the latest chapters is considered support. If my book meets the requirements of your column, I also hope you will put it in the column, thank you. I wish you prosperity.

After reading the previous part of the article, the storyline is fascinating. Whether it is the introduction of the dual personality of the male protagonist Qin Junhao at the beginning, or the plot of Qin Junhao's past life hypnotic time travel and awakening the Duke's wife, they all show the novelty of the subject matter. The language after time travel has broken through the limitations of the times, and it has the feeling of combining ancient and modern times. Especially the lively and humorous dialogue between the male and female protagonists attracted me to read on. The entire Guogong Mansion has a serious yet cheerful atmosphere, highlighting the background of the times while incorporating modern elements, and the writing angle is also very clever. Author, keep up the good work and look forward to your wonderful performance

I like Junli and feel sorry for him. Childhood? I always remember that sentence: Unfortunate people spend their whole lives healing their childhood, and lucky people spend their whole lives reminiscing about their childhood. How many shallow turns are there behind endless darkness? Abyss? Afraid of sinking, but also looking forward to sinking. Double personality is very interesting. The story will be very strong, and I have a lot of expectations. Junli surprised me when it first came out. Mental illness, it's very tiring! Dual personality, I often wonder if I am also schizophrenic... I am sometimes happy and sometimes sad, so when I face Jun Li and Jun Hao, I don't feel the same way, but I can resonate with him. How to say it? Xiao Zhi is very powerful, super powerful. After writing so many words, I will be your loyal fan from now on, hehe. Be happy! Everything has its own benefits. If you do well, you will be fine. Thank you for your company. We code together and have fun playing Scrabble Planet. However, I often fall asleep while writing💤(●°u°●)​" It's very sad. When I wake up in the end, I suddenly find out what the hell I wrote. You should have a good rest and write well. This book is my treasure, I will read it carefully. It brings me happiness and sadness. Life has its ups and downs, both gains and losses. Come on, Sister Xiaozhi٩( 'ω' )و I like it because I like it, so don't be shy! By the way, you talk about hydrology every day, but I haven't seen you have any water! You lied to me, so much so that I almost fell in love with you after hearing your words, haha. Well, with classmate Wei Zixin here, I believe Jun Hao Junli will get better, he will, he will. The memory is profound, I have been here before. I recommend you a song "a little braver", I hope you will like this song! NetEase doesn't have it, so I can only listen to it on QQ Music. Go listen to it! If there are sorrows and separations hidden in the corner, if there are stars and fireflies in the corner. Dreams will come again, you will be there, I will be there, we will all be there. Remember, you must remember. No matter what, I will protect you and this book. I hope I can attract more readers to you in the future. I hope I can succeed! (Actually, it's quite difficult... I don't have much time recently, so I still have to piece together these book reviews, squeezing in here and there to finish it.) I hope you like it. I'll draw a few pictures for you later. Come on. Good night, good night every day, good night always, good night forever. The years are full of ups and downs, but I hope you can feel at ease and your dream will come true. I will watch it grow step by step. I am watching you shine little by little. May the beauty of the world be with you... Sweet dreams (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

Great writing! From the beginning to now, I feel like I can't get enough of the same thing, I like it very much

The beginning is very novel. It reminds me of an audio clip, which is Teacher Liao's Past Life Hypnosis. I don't know if you have heard of it. I tried it. It's really amazing. The writing is smooth, and the names are all very nice. There are various foreshadowings at the beginning, making people want to read on. I feel like the male protagonist is a bit cute 🤭, like a middle-aged boy. I look forward to his growth. Come on!

The story is novel and interesting, and the characters are vivid. The protagonist has a very lovable personality, I love it! Love it!

This article combines suspense, amusement, love, protection and healing. If you like it, you can vote, give a reward, cheer up, or collect it (๑✧∀✧๑)☀ The male protagonist entered past life hypnosis because of his poor mental state. He returned to the age of seventeen and came to the Shengming Dynasty, which had been derailed since the Yuan Dynasty. Then the story unfolds with the mistress of the Weiguo Palace. The mysterious elixir that brought the dead back to life, the son with unstable sexual orientation, the gradually weakening body that has returned to youth, and the mystery of his life experience and a series of adventure stories that will soon appear.

1. I haven't read a book of this style myself, ancient style + dual personality + time travel +... It's quite novel. 2. The further I read, the more I feel that the male and female protagonists are portrayed quite fully, and the female protagonist is very bold and open-minded (in previous books, without exception, ancient women were too pretentious. I still rarely see Zixin like this.) 3. The writing style is interesting and smooth. Interspersed between comedy and melancholy, the blend is just right. 4. I can't see the second personality of classmate Jun Hao later... We have to leave for a while, but we will meet again later. 5. This book has subverted my imagination! The effect is quite good, but remember to use appropriate dividing lines and emoticons and use them sparingly. Otherwise... It would be quite abrupt. Either it would change the scene directly, or it would cut it off and write the next chapter directly. Just be simple. 6. Also, I felt that my attention was almost entirely attracted by Jun Hao and Zi Xin. On the contrary, the descriptions of other characters, environments, etc. Were not so prominent. It is recommended that you change it appropriately. Don't put a lot of ink on the main characters. Give appropriate ink to the secondary characters! Otherwise, if you focus too much on the two characters, your thoughts will be exhausted, and maybe you won't be able to think of any better plot after racking your brains. I'm afraid that you'll end up in trouble (I hope my worries are unnecessary) That's all! If there are too many, I guess it won't pass the review.

The concept is novel, the subject matter is original, and the plot is ups and downs and gripping. The author has quick thinking, novel routines and wonderful writing. The day of the fire is just around the corner!

After reading a few chapters, the author's writing style is very good, the plot arrangement is appropriate, and the opening chapter can attract the reader's attention. Well, also, the character setting is good. The background is different and innovative. The characters are likeable, the male protagonist Qin Junhao is a bit funny, and the female protagonist is a bit cute. All in all, it's very good. The two of them are very warm together. Being able to write about ordinary life so interestingly is a testament to the author's writing power. The writing style is relaxed and can relax your mind. After dinner, you can watch something to relieve stress and fatigue. Last point, I hope the author can write better and better, come on^_^

1. The subject matter is relatively new. The introduction can also attract people, but it is recommended to remove the last sentence haha ​​(or put it another way, not so obvious). 2. The writing is smooth, but gradually it feels a bit dull. 3. The writing style is good, and the characterization and language of the characters are relatively accurate and clear. 4. When writing, you can add some highlights or big twists, which will make it better and elevate the plot of the book to a higher level. Encourage each other

Let me honestly tell you my feelings after reading this book 😁 First, the title of the book is actually not very impressive and fits the general style of female videos, but the cover is very nice. Second, the subject matter of this book is actually very novel. It is the kind of book that makes people unable to guess the routine after reading it. It is completely new, very special and has its own characteristics, which makes people want to read it. On this point, I have to praise the author greatly. The third point is that the author's beginning is very good. It starts from the male protagonist (traveling from modern times to ancient times) from the perspective of a boy, which makes it even harder for people to guess the routine! Moreover, he is a little bit funny, and a little bit bitter, and he is always funny inadvertently. This feeling is really good, isn't it! The fourth point is that I really like reading suspense books. Although this book is a romance, it has a sense of suspense unexpectedly! Moreover, the title is very interesting, and it has the kind of light suspense that I like. It's really strong and beneficial! The fifth point is that the author's descriptions are so detailed and delicate. She is not just a pile of words, but more like a white description writing method. It does not require many words, and the character's characteristics can be outlined in a few words. The author's literary skills are really amazing👍🏻 In short, I love this book, haha

I like Qin Junhao the most, a lonely child (^n^), who is obviously unhappy, but still..., Strong and fragile at the same time. The author has also worked hard, and the description (in reading history) is also good, (the scenery in the library), the work is full of human nature and true feelings. All in all, good-looking, good-looking! (Mainly because I am poor, no, click to see the back) But the main credit is to the author, (my little aunt is the best...~) I really don't know how to review books (help me).

Come to visit (´-ω-`) Your writing style is very good, keep it up (ง •̀_•́)ง As expected, you should write more and practice more to excel👀 Hehe

If you are not satisfied with a hundred years in life, you will always worry about a thousand years. Just be as happy as Zi Xin!

It's very interesting, come on＾0＾~ When I first saw it, I guessed that the man was dressed as a woman, but it turned out not to be the case.

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I faked the corpse at the beginning, which was quite interesting. I'll take a look when I have time 😊

Come on! ! ! ! ! It's witty and interesting, and it feels good to watch!

The language is humorous and seems very relaxing. The reading is also very smooth, and I want to know the subsequent development of the plot, and then read on. The pace is fast and the imagination is big. Let me ask you weakly, is this really a female channel? 🤐

1. The writing style is humorous, harmonious and interesting, making it easy to read and stress-free. 2. The plot advances layer by layer, the rhythm is well controlled, and it has a sense of life and an immersive feeling. It has a plot but also a sense of humor, I like it. 3. The character creation is quite good, the personality characteristics are very obvious and distinct, and the dual personality is great. 🤭 4. Da Da Da's dialogue is well written, in line with common sense and real 5. Personal suggestion, Da Da Da's writing is a fusion of ancient and modern times, and the fusion is pretty good. It's okay to use modern vocabulary when speaking, it's just the number. Writing Arabic numerals directly is a bit awkward 😂😂😂 6. I still like the small interaction between the two, making sweets Overall, it's great, come on Da Da ^ω^

Oops, the setting of this book is very interesting. Ever since I watched The Evil Hypnotist, I have been particularly fascinated by the setting of hypnosis. Is the male protagonist hypnotized, or is it related to the previous life? I really like the male protagonist's name. Hehe, the first meeting between the two of them was also very interesting. If I were the female protagonist, I wouldn't like him, aunt? Axiba_(•̀ω•́ ∠)_

The beginning is novel. Makes you want to read on. But starting from the fourth chapter, it felt like it suddenly turned into a novel. I thought for a while that the Duke's wife was the heroine. Is she really the heroine? There are a lot of foreshadowings. When I saw that the young master was wearing short sleeves, I finally knew what happened at the beginning. Well, I was so angry. The plot advances layer by layer and is relatively reasonable. However, I feel that the role of the male protagonist in the early stage was reduced due to the introduction of other supporting characters. I still like him quite a lot, so I have a bad impression of the wet nurses who stole the scene, hahaha. The writing is relatively smooth and the characters are innovative. Come on!

The text of the article is natural and interesting. The author's interaction and description of the characters in life are hand-picked, and the emotional description and plot development are smooth. Overall, what kind of story will be developed by combining modern style with ancient background? It's exciting~~~

[Book Review] Time Travel Strange Love, suitable for both men and women. As a writer of a street-fighting male video, I came to write a book review with tears in my eyes. The author has 2 million words of experience in writing. His writing style is sophisticated and his language is light-hearted, which made me feel inferior. The plot is suspenseful, interesting, and light-hearted and humorous. It is a universal style that is rare in female videos and is extremely bold. The above are my objective comments without any personal feelings, thank you 😌

I like Qin Junhao and look forward to Qin Junli even more. I like the interaction between Qin Junhao and Wei Zixin, and the connection that slowly develops between them. I like Xia Chan and want to see Xia Chan and Qin Junli fall in love and kill each other. Looking forward to the follow-up plot~

I'm not very good at writing book reviews, but this book is really great. The writing is great and the subject matter feels very novel. The past and present lives have always been extremely mysterious. When you use schizophrenia and hypnosis to connect it, it feels mysterious and a bit high-end. Then some people will unconsciously wonder whether the past life was a previous life or whether you were sick, or whether you were really sick when you were sick, or whether you really went to a different world and experienced a different life. But generally speaking, the biggest regret about dual personalities is that one personality disappears, so is Qin Junhao the one who disappears in the end? There is still a better arrangement, let's give some spoilers

The writing style is really great. The beginning is lighthearted and humorous, making it very cheerful to watch, but the parts that should be heavy, touching, and sadistic are just right. There are not many female videos with the male protagonist as the first point of view, but that doesn't mean it's not feasible. Nirvana in Fire is an example. I hope that big stories can be as popular as Nirvana in Fire!