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There is an entire planet of mortals who have just recovered their aura and begun to practice. The protagonist has classified the realm into a warrior. What if the government issues a notice the next day to cultivate the realm of qi, build foundations and gold elixirs? ?

Author, you turned ancient treasures into systems, I don't care, but you *** in Chapter 5, the spiritual energy will be revived, and there is no official or private level classification, pig's feet have divided the student warrior level, etc., The key is ten yuan, is he worthy? How was he sure?

So say it! Accepting memories is equivalent to accepting being soul-fused! The soul of the original owner + the soul of the traveler + the accepted memory = the protagonist! ! It's also the earth🌍How can one successfully travel through time with just one piece of silk?

It's awesome, it's copied directly from the book Devouring Begins, and the plot name remains intact!

Blood Rain Piaoxiang Tower,, Mengdie? ? ? Isn't this the book that started with Devouring? Isn't it so awesome? I just copied it and at least changed the name. I said, why does it look more familiar the more I read it?

Basically, you can default to reading the so-called editor's book, which is a bad book. It's my fault that I still have harbored doubts about it.

When I saw this book, I suddenly remembered that another book "The Legacy of Styx" also received the same inheritance, but that book was written in a very realistic and practical way, without too many poisonous points, no family strife, no protagonist to attract hatred, etc. It is worth reading. Hope this one does the same.

Some suggestions for the author: 1. It's too watery. I know you are afraid that many people will not be able to understand the data. Tell the truth. No one will take this kind of cool article seriously. Just do the math yourself. I never count anyway. Just feel good and that's it. 2. Devouring the World is too big and its status is a bit high. If you're going to start just devour. Then what you write later will be easy to jump to. Give me a chestnut. If you change Luo Feng's final achievement to the prehistoric era, it will be either Taozu or Pangu. 3. The narrative is bland and has no passion at all. The author's writing style is a little lacking, and what you wrote is just like us keeping a running account. 4. Human nature is unpredictable. People's hearts are strange. How can you win someone over just by saying a few words? Friends I have known for twenty years would still give me a knife. You are not a tyrant, Jack Su. There are still some small problems. For example, if your outline is not ready, I won't talk about it. I've only seen chapter 16. I hope you can improve it next time you recommend it.

I want to say that this technique cannot be practiced by oneself, it must be system upgraded. It feels like a puppet. It relies entirely on magic weapons to absorb energy, and then uses the energy to upgrade, but you can't even practice it yourself. It feels like the protagonist is a tool man, finding things with energy and then using the system. Absorb and then improve the main cultivation level. I guess this protagonist may be the puppet used by the ancestor of Styx to resurrect.

After reading novels for so many years, I have found that whatever has the most protagonists in the novel is the most rubbish. The protagonist is extremely talented, so resources are the most important. The protagonist's talent is mediocre, so resources are the most important. The protagonist is rich in gold and silver, so even mountains of gold and silver can hardly be exchanged for spiritual stones. The protagonist was born a beggar, and he could exchange mere gold and silver for spiritual stones. The protagonist has a huge backing. Backers rarely help. The protagonist is alone. Don't dare to openly offend those who have backers. Take this book for example. The main character is so rich. The result is that if the protagonist doesn't remind him, then the big group controlled by the protagonist's parents will be someone else's meal. In Global Gaowu, the protagonist is a daosi. No money. It turns out that all the rich people, big and small, are masters.

If Chen Ya knew that her grandson had given her murderer and love rival a chance to practice, she would have to jump out of the coffin and strangle him to death. Wouldn't the protagonist even give up his position in order to show off? If I were Mrs. Yang, I would die of joy, kill my love rival, and sit in a high position for so many years. Not only would I not have to pay the price, but I could also get training opportunities from my enemies for my descendants, I would laugh to death in my dreams!

It feels like playing house! Everyone around the protagonist has lowered their IQ! The first time I went to the military headquarters, I threatened a senior officer! The officer was frightened even though this was before the great changes in the world! People still don't know how powerful warriors are! At that time, the military was supposed to be the most powerful party, at least everyone except the protagonist thought so. A young boy in his 10s or 20s threatened a senior officer like this. It would have been better if he had not shot him on the spot.

NB! It has been dead for a month, but it is still being dug out for promotion...

Didn't Ancestor Styx use a sword? How come the martial arts in terms of martial arts are sword skills 🤫

The pace is too chaotic, one world comes to another, and it's a bit dizzying to see. After the protagonist's strength became faster, he never went back. He was either traveling through time or on the way to prepare to go back. After reading so many chapters, the protagonist is not ready to go back, so what else should I write? Earth, let's just get the status of having both parents deceased. What's the difference between his situation and the death of both parents? If you want to write about Earth, write it well. It's not a big deal to be in the third year of high school in the Wanxiang Realm, but after being out for so long, you don't take the college entrance examination? Now you have reached the ninth level of the magic skill. Hey, is there any realm behind this? . It's a hell of an improvement🙄🙄. I think I can go back if I get more resources in these worlds. I can go back to college and get into college and live my daily life. I'm in a world where I can't do anything except having children. The protagonist is so capable and should be forced to get married 🙂🙂🙂

The bookkeeping novel reads like running water, with no ups and downs, no twists and turns, and you can try the whole book with just one expression. The author should be a novice, or else he is a loser.

The main character is actually still in school, which immediately poisoned me. What's the point of not going to school in his situation? What can it teach him?

It deserves its fate. Among the first ten chapters, the system panel appears once on average in one chapter. The most egregious thing is that the system panel appears three times in one chapter. The total chapter is 11/12 pages of t. M. The system panel takes up 3/4 of the page. Excluding the name and introduction of the exercises, 50% of the words are nonsense. It is a waste of money.

I don't want to use Qidian anymore. What the hell are the recommendations?

I have just read about ten chapters. My personal suggestion is not to display all the attributes of the protagonist every time. It is very stupid. Learn how other masters write and only write out the changes each time (of course the author should have a small notebook to record the progress of his writing at all times and do not confuse the data). Then, after dozens or hundreds of chapters, display it in detail again, so that no one will say that you are stupid. Of course, you can also display all of them when there are major changes or improvements! ! ! Also, it's impossible for the protagonist to get all his improvements from experience points, right? If the protagonist cultivates on his own, or swallows some heavenly and earthly treasures, can't he improve? If the protagonist swallows some kind of heavenly material and earthly treasure and obtains some kind of divine body, will the cultivation remain the same? . . . . . . In fact, judging from my personal experience in novels for more than ten years, although many books by great masters follow various routines, their books are always written with better details and reduce some unnecessary poisonous points, so they can be recognized by a considerable number of people. Although they cannot become masterpieces, this is how fine works come to be! ! The above are just personal opinions. If the author feels that he does not agree with it, he can delete it.