Locust Street Chronicle

Type: reality, modern romance, protagonist is blind Author: Yueban Rongrong Word count: 9w/9w 🐣Plot summary: Liang Yumo was blinded due to a car accident in high school. Relatives arranged a blind date for her because they were worried about her life. Little did she know that Liang Yumo met the person she loved in a school for the blind. The blind date was vulgar and greasy. Due to her own shortcomings, Yu Mo decided to marry him. After discovering that her fiancé had cheated on her before marriage, she finally couldn't bear it anymore and took this opportunity to express her feelings to Xiao Donghai. But the marriage of two blind people has been obstructed and questioned by many parties... 🐣Story Audience: I saw this book for review before. At that time, I saw that there were few words and few recommendation votes, so I didn't click on it. Secondly, the title of the book was too bland and made people uninterested. Until I saw the request for a review under my own review booth, I clicked in and found that the writing was fresh and delicate. Although I didn't see anything in the plot, at least it made people believe that the story was not too bad. The author's writing style is very concrete, often focusing on details that readers cannot expect, with a strong sense of substitution. The cold spring, the sound of rain, the dilapidated teaching building, the sound of lectures, lemon-flavored biscuits, the whole world rushes towards the reader with all its colors, fragrances, sounds, and no need to worry about drama; this delicacy continues completely after the scene changes, from the simplicity of Huaishu Street to the grape trellis in the courtyard, everything is very vivid and beautiful. The narrative tone is like an elegant and sophisticated sister in the old street, full of love and tolerance for all things in the world, and has the power to make people settle down and listen to the story quietly. However, this style of writing is more suitable for columns in literary magazines, and may not be suitable for the audience of online articles. 🐣Advantages: 1. The supporting characters are worldly and vivid. The blind date of a tacky straight man, a naive colleague, an insatiable aunt and a sweet mother... At first glance, the characters seem to be extremely facial, but the author grasps the facial features of the characters and does not superficially or briefly mention them. Instead, he uses vivid details and plot arrangements to make the characters more relevant. For example, introducing an older second-marriage blind date to the cute protagonist, and calling him afterwards to ask if he was satisfied or not. This detail makes the character of the aunt real and very close to life. Tong Daguo is even more familiar. A self-righteous straight male can often hear what he says and what he does can often be seen. The author's characterization is very delicate, almost all of which reflect the character's characteristics in a positive way without being exaggerated. This just shows his skill. I almost wanted to jump in and slap his ears. 2. The description of the situation of the blind is very detailed. I watched "Massage" a long time ago, which tells the story of a massage parlor for blind people. The world of blind people is really not as colorful as that of ordinary people, but more of confusion, struggle and trivial life. When I see a beautiful and well-educated girl like Liang Yumo being raped by a greasy uncle in a movie theater, I don't feel that the book is greasy and disgusting, but I feel distressed. I don't know what the author's motivation was for writing such a novel, but it's really amazing. 3. The emotional drama is very contagious. Liang Yumo and Donghai knocked off their books and hairpins from the first meeting, to the second time they met, they even handed out cards and chatted, to the third time they went to Huaihua Street together and met gangsters on the road to grab a bag, and the hero saved the beauty, and the fourth time they sang together, they gradually got to know each other, got in touch, and confessed to each other from the beginning of their good feelings, which was very layered and natural. And through the dialogue of the characters and the creation of the atmosphere, the emotional changes of the protagonist are completely portrayed, which not only makes the story flow smoothly, but also makes the readers excited. 4. Although the male protagonist is blind, he can join this year's wall team in advance. He is really good at it! ! 🐣Improvement suggestions: Generally speaking, the author's techniques are very mature. What disappoints me about the work is that it is too stingy. Singing, blind dates, and blind massage parlors are like being trapped in the world without spiritual salvation. Maybe there can be some spiritual breakthroughs, like Paul Korchagin? Secondly, the line design can be optimized to be more natural, and areas with little information can be simplified. Finally, it must not be a tragedy, otherwise I won't watch it.

I have been reading this book. It should be said that the text has a good grasp of the text, and it is full of aura. It is really a good work for the appetite! The author's ordinary thoughts come to life, the plot is smooth and not impetuous, and the audience may be divided, but I believe that the trend of online literature must have a healthy and positive path. Unknowingly, I have become a monthly ticket sponsor of this book. Please support me, readers!

In July, the locust trees bloom and the wind and rain come. The cool summer is here, and my only thought is waiting.

Guazi's words: Rong Rong's pen is like a carving knife, carving out vivid emotions, anger, sorrow and joy. When reading, it seems as if the vicissitudes of life experienced for decades are surrounded by curtains, just like what happened in a nearby alley. There are bright spring days, flowers left behind by heavy rain, the feeling of licking a calf, the glory and gloom of human nature, and so on. Although the story written by Rong Rong is not as generous as a rushing river, it is also the gurgling stream that passes through rugged mountains and forests, through peaks and ridges. It flows through the heart of every reader, awakening the sluggish spirituality and nourishing the sprouting of kindness. Rong Rong carefully told us a seemingly ordinary love story, but I still felt that Rong Rong didn't just want to tell a story. She reminded me of a lot of ordinary strength and magnanimity. Rong Rong's writings contain her interpretation of the meaning of life, self-respect, self-love, self-improvement and the giving of love. She is not opposed to asking, asking is to love more, asking is to make those who love her happy, because this is the true meaning of love! In recent years, I have rarely had the opportunity to read such wonderful novels. It reminds me of the Yi Shu novels I read when I was young. The perspective is unique, the writing is really sophisticated, and it has that style of presentation. I really like it!

Class A seedlings. I plan to catch up on updates, but due to the author's fate... They usually update every half a month or even a few months, so I doubt I will have the patience. This is a pseudo-fairy tale in reality, the trivial details in the lives of visually impaired people. The most important reason why I want to follow up is probably because I have many contradictory expectations for the subsequent discovery of the story. The beginning of the story is very realistic. The protagonist is a visually impaired person. After a car accident when he was a child, he was not treated in time, leaving him with visual disability. My life after that was a very ordinary reality. I had a job in a copy shop with a small workload, went to a school for the blind and fished daily, and then... Went on a blind date and planned to get married. The other party is a divorced career man who is very young and is rushing to get the certificate. They both took wedding photos to plan the wedding. As a result, when the man was on a business trip, the protagonist heard a phone call and heard that he and his female boss were in the same room. There was some confusion before... The protagonist, who was originally not satisfied with this hasty marriage, decided to leave. Then she fell headlong into the fairy tale. That is a gentle and gentle boy, who is always patient and sincere towards her, and is willing to love her and take care of her with everything he has. They have not experienced many things together, but miraculously they fall in love with each other; they have experienced the harsh criticism of the woman's mother together, and after some "making things difficult", they chose to kill first and play later; they also accepted the blessings of the man's brother and sister-in-law together, and they are a harmonious and beautiful family. They finally walked together smoothly and peacefully. He took care of his shop and she took care of their child. Her mother moved to live with them under "coercion and inducement". The child went to kindergarten. He contacted the hospital for treating her eyes. Everything seemed to be getting better. However, the fairy tale eventually shattered. She regained her sight, but found that he suddenly became busy. They lost their daily beautiful interactions, their tenderness for each other, and almost lost contact. He goes out early every day and comes home late every day, bringing back a shirt with lip prints; she dresses up and goes to his massage parlor, only to find a girl feeding him preserved fruits, while he smiles gently at the girl. So, the two of them finally broke up, and he would still take care of her, but only because he felt that he was sorry for her. The girl had a child, and he asked for a divorce and took the initiative to leave the house... She finally agreed to his request, but she hoped to have a year's buffer for the sake of their son. My expectations for the subsequent plot are very contradictory. On the one hand, I hope that this is all an illusion, because the man's drastic change in personality is really suspicious, and people who eat melons are also speculating that there is something hidden, and I personally have my own obsession with a happy ending. On the other hand, I vaguely hope that he is just a passer-by in her life. Because of the coolness in the introduction, and because all this only happened at the beginning of the story, it is still only the "first volume", and there is still a long story to tell before the end... So I am very conflicted, and also want to see the rest of the story, so the author is too slow to update! Anyway, this is a good story. Except for the author's update speed, I don't have anything to suggest or complain about. I simply want to see the subsequent development of the story, to see whether the foreshadowing laid by the author will bloom one day, and to see whether the subsequent plot will surprise me again. As for recommendation, I can't say that I strongly recommend it. If I were cheated, I would be a bad person. So author, please write quickly, okay?

I like it very much. I don't know why it's not updated anymore. I look forward to the author's return.

The world is so glitzy and desolate, with fallen flowers everywhere and no one around.

Happy New Year to sister Rong Rong! 😆🎉 Although we haven't spoken much this year, I always remember sister Rong Rong's gentleness and carefulness✨ I wish my sister peace and joy in the new year, and success in everything. What you get is what you want, and everything you meet is what you ask for! !

Great support from the author, looking forward to continued updates

There has been no update for a month. The author will update it soon.

The update speed is really bad, hurry up and code

Very quick update, I haven't updated it for a month.

It's so touching and beautiful.

I can't get enough of it. The author will update it soon.

It is indeed well written, and it is rare to find a good book! Support!

Night view of Huaishu Street

Yumo is my neighbor's little girl, she is so cute.

Donghai and Yumo are my good friends. I watched them step by step until today, and I couldn't help feeling sad.

Send off

Beautiful

Sophora japonica flowers are fragrant

Locust Tree Street Scene

Beautiful view of Huaishu Street

Yu Mo goes home

Flowers under the window

Rong Rong writes with care, fans read with emotion, and those who tell the story are heartbroken and shed tears.

You can be sure that this is a good book. The author's writing style is superb, the emotions are real, the descriptions are delicate, and you can follow it! ! !

Good looking

Life is not easy

Yu Mo's skillful hands and ingenuity, the beautiful lady boss of Momo Flower Shop