The Fools Hanging Around in Marvel

Can you please stop switching back and forth between first person and third person? And if you use first person, I will withdraw it.

A lot of poison! The writing is average! The Holy Mother's heart is overflowing! Not recommended for consumption! ! !

Author, are you doing this to please yourself? Switching back and forth between first person and third person really affects the reading experience.

I would like to make some suggestions, I suggest the author to clarify the third person and first person, and don't always use "what's wrong, what's wrong" that affects the senses! Besides, your book is not very suitable for the first-person perspective. Also, I read it very well. You just say "I am doing it" and then "Ward is doing it". It is easy for people to confuse which one is which!

Haha, I guess you are the leader of the Five Poison Sect

Sofa, please improve it. Come on, it's ok.

Looking at the introduction, you are too lazy and still have the energy to get up and go to other worlds to do tasks? Slipping away.

No more chapter names? Don't always switch between the first vision and the third vision. It will feel like reading a pirated book without distraction.

The poisoning is too deep, being a dog in a dog bureau is too disgusting

Also, if you want to start in the first person, I suggest you read the Experiment Diary of the Mad Lich.

Those who are reckless are called Hanhan, and those who are not foolhardy are called ××××. If you are a little brat, you go to pick up other people's ace agents. You act mentally retarded. You think you are gold and everyone wants it. All I can say is that the protagonist is mentally retarded and the author is a ××××. A bright pearl shines for three thousand miles, It remains hidden for thousands of years. Wan Tao is extremely poor in making money, Hui Lang Youyou can't afford it.

Also, I invested in another eunuch! At least sign a contract with me so I can get my money back.

I said, author, you can pester the editor to sign a contract.

The first and third persons will change after a while, and it will never end. Where is the convulsion?

In a word, the first chapter at the beginning is extremely cheap.

Please make a suggestion and keep the text as concise as possible.

The protagonist is too weak. Not to mention how powerful the attack is, the defense is not very high. I feel like it only has magic resistance but not physical resistance.

Why did it change to first person after reading a few chapters? I got goosebumps watching it. Did someone change the writing? Still having convulsions from time to time.

After ten years of reading, this is the first time I've seen the first three pages used to lay out settings. . . And this writing style. . .

If you pull it apart in sections, it will look like a big lump if it is densely packed.