This MC Is Different

Thank you for the suggestions you gave me. I will consider them one by one and learn from each other's strengths. Also, thank you for your recommendation votes. I have been lazy recently and have not updated a lot. I will cheer up and work hard to update.

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A similar author came over to take a look... It didn't feel too great, just plain, not exciting or poisonous. It is recommended that the author use comprehensive descriptions of psychology, environment, etc. To exaggerate the atmosphere and create excitement.

Suddenly I remembered that this author is an old acquaintance, but my memory is not very good these days😂

Personally, I think that although I have only read the first two chapters, I feel that the plot you wrote is a bit too abrupt. For example, you said at the beginning that the protagonist is a person with superpowers, but you did not accept where the superpowers came from, whether he was born by chance or something else. In addition, to put it harshly, your novel is only for junior high school level. There is almost no description of the environment to exaggerate the atmosphere, and there is no description of the heart. If a good novel wants to attract people, it must use a lot of descriptions instead of straightforward narratives. Only in this way can it create tension and a sense of involvement for the readers. I will read the remaining chapters. I hope it will not be so abrupt. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง