Big Fishermen

It took me ten minutes to read a hundred chapters, and it was too boring. Nothing useful.

Chapter 0 in the series, what the hell?

Author, the subject matter of your book is very good and the content is good, but the main reason why it is not popular is that there are too many family dialogues in the article, which is too wordy. It looks very tiring, like writing a running account, and there is no practical information, just like watering down numbers. I hope it will be corrected later!

Hai Nong: I looked at the catalog and couldn't find anything about Hai Nong! The table of contents is not written well. With so many books in Qidian, readers will not read every one. I just read the title and table of contents first and then read the contents of the book.

I just read five chapters, and there are two main problems. One is that there is too much nonsense, and it is too verbose. The other protagonists resign and go home and take it all away. Even if there is a bloody plot, it only takes a few chapters. But this protagonist has nothing to do, and it takes five chapters to resign and go home. It is still the first five chapters! The second thing is the dialogue, it's so embarrassing, it's so plain and simple even if you don't talk about it, it's also very embarrassing!

The whole thing is just a running account. If you have plug-ins, you don't have to rush to the sea every day. You can cover a fishing ground, put the fry, shrimps, and crabs in the heart of the ocean to strengthen them and raise them in the fishing ground. The money will come without any hesitation. When you have money, wouldn't it be better to build the village properly?

I have read twenty chapters. Except that I live by the sea, it has nothing to do with the sea. It is all about daily routines!

The current updates are once in the morning and once in the evening. Because I have work, I can only update twice a day now. I will update more when I have time. The author basically works during the day and takes time to code at night. He is not a full-time author, so please understand the slow update. Because I spend two to three hours drawing and writing two chapters every day. Please understand each other~ I also ask for your support to ensure that this book will be completed. It is almost the middle and late stages of the first volume now, and there are more exciting contents in the second and third volumes waiting for you. Thank you for your support^_^

The sea! You are all water! Less water! Give readers a way to survive!

How should I put it? The opening chapter is too long and meaningless... And then the real story comes. Goldfinger raises the fish and puts them back into the sea to increase the harvest of the villagers. Let the villagers catch them... I really have no appetite. If it's not the villagers, even if they catch 100 million catties per net, what does it have to do with you? ? ? I won't thank you at all, I don't understand your thinking, and the public content is useless, so you just let everyone buy your VIP? ? What courage?

Go to bed and stop writing. You have committed too many taboos in writing. People cannot read it and you are still tired. Let's talk about the most fatal part: the first article is too long and does not distinguish between the main and secondary plots. The diagonal descriptions that should be written in detail are not in place and the summary should be summed up in one stroke. The article is long-winded, the plot is repetitive, and it is full of errors. Secondly, the literary quality is not enough. Although the white text does not require too much rigor, it is not a verbal essay. It is written in a pale and feeble way.

Boss, you have a lot of daily conversations. I feel like there is no need to say it. It doesn't need to be too much. It seems a bit embarrassing and verbose.

Don't call them big fishermen. Seeing that there is no way to catch fish or raise fish now, just call them big fishermen, because the sea is all water 🙂

Let's take a look after you've done the segmentation. . . It is best to divide the paragraph into 3 to 5 lines.

The subject matter is okay, but the writing is too weak. It feels more reasonable to compress the 100 chapters into a dozen chapters. It's the same as the running account, regardless of priority. No desire to read.

It feels like watching chat history😥😥😥

This book should be renamed Ordinary Days of Fishermen and Farmers

It's totally boring, unlike fishermen and farmers!

This golden finger actually helps others increase their fishing income. He is really a good person...

It is indeed a novel for children, the sea is full of water.

Is it a composition written by a primary school student? He is still a verbose person.

By the way, please add that brand of paper for the postures you use in the toilet every day, the time you spend drying up, and the time you use it. It's really not bad. I can nail a piece of rotten wood to the ground better than your Ocean Heart. At least it can hang things 😰😰😰

I've seen similar themes before and I'll catch up later, but this is the only one I really like! Not to mention that I am an old bookworm, but I have read it for at least eight years, and I have read no less than twenty books with similar themes. Your success made me stop at Chapter 29, and I couldn't stand it anymore. The sea is full of water! One or two sentences can sum up the past that was suddenly broken into a chapter by you. Each chapter review has comments or suggestions. By the twenty-nineth chapter, nothing has changed. I really don't have any rice at home, so I just need a pot of water to cook!

Why haven't there been updates for five days? What happened? Is it unfinished?

The content of this book really has nothing to do with the name. But it's true that it's written about the sea, it's all water. Even if you have a meal, you can drink a few chapters. It's too streamlined. Doesn't it take more than 10 million words in one year?

A thousand words are written, and a thousand digressions are made li

I only read a few chapters and it made me frustrated. Is it so long-winded?