Tianxing

I was overjoyed when I suddenly discovered this Lost Leaves book. I wanted to click on it and read the author's trilogy and other online game classics that I had followed before, but the network was abnormal? ? ?

Shanyou Fusu is dead! ! ! The blade is on the way! ! ! wnm... It's so uncomfortable! ! !

Trilogy✌️Eternal God

In order to become a dragon knight and work as a cow and horse in the dragon domain, the protagonist went crazy and did daily tasks before becoming the guardian of the dragon abyss (the dragon knight's subordinate). The supporting character got the dragon knight's job transfer certificate when he entered the main city for the first time. The protagonist did the main quest every day to kill bosses. There is no mage who specializes in spawning mobs. There is also the male protagonist Yang Wei. The enlightenment teacher died and he felt guilty and did not create a guild. Author, you are suitable for writing a tauren novel to be the suffering master.

You have to write about ambiguity and not write about it together. Lost Leaf, you are really getting better and better with each passing day. The routine from more than ten years ago has been used to this day, but the result is that the writing now is not as good as before. It is really bad. If you weren't the only one writing online games, you would have gone to the street a long time ago. I feel like I shouldn't write anymore.

Friendly reminder, if you want to read a cool novel, don't read this book. Why don't you tell me the ending first? It was so depressing, speechless, and disgusting that I don't know how I could bear to see the ending.

Don't look, don't look, don't look! ! ! ! ! It's too poisonous, and it doesn't have the same feeling of pleasure as the previous works. Although the previous online game novels have some poisonous points, their flaws are not concealed. The writing power of the master of data flow can be seen. In addition to being inexplicably frustrated, the data that I am proud of is a mess. There are not many data that should be included. The copies are the same. There is no talk about pictures and treasures in the past. In the later part of the book, you are given a task. Brushing monsters in the wild, killing monsters and beating the boss, the NPC plot is ridiculously stupid. The NPC plot in the previous books is also stupid, but less, and it is not so frustrating. This book makes people feel uncomfortable from the first appearance of Emperor Xia to the end. The male protagonist is from the beginning to the end. They just want to kill your mentor, but they shake hands and make peace the next day. They are famous for taking into account the overall situation. Is it touching yourself? They are holding a meeting during the National War, and they obviously ask you to wear small shoes, and you don't even dare to lift the table. What else can you say, wait until the black paper turns white, and then write again? In the previous chapter, we will not let the heroes of the National War become dusty again. Good guy, there is not yet another chapter. The country and the Warring States are gone, and the leader is dead. Just like a normal person, he pops up in front of you and disgusts you after a few chapters. Losing one city in China and taking two from others is like the death of your own father. The most outrageous thing is the so-called reporting of bugs. I don't see that the bugs you said need to be fixed are on the same level as the bugs in the previous books. Can you go down to 20 levels and kill the boss with all attributes alone, or can you kill thousands or tens of thousands of people by yourself without dying? The most outrageous thing is that you can change the spirit weapon with the dragon head of the dark dragon. Because I didn't expect you to be able to defeat the boss alone, so you can only get this reward. So you are not allowed to do more. It's so funny. If you can't write people, you don't have to write. If you can't speak, you don't have to speak. You didn't write anything that should be written in Lost Leaf, and you didn't change anything that should be changed. After the transformation failed, it's just a waste of money?

I would like to ask, does the author make any income from this book?

My evaluation is that it is not as good as the romantic knight

Fortunately, I took a look at the comments and quickly removed them. None of the female protagonists that readers like have achieved success. The author has good eyesight and is very lickable. I admire him.

Lost Leaves feels like it hasn't improved over the years. I used to be fascinated by the trilogy when I was in junior high school, but now I can't watch it anymore. . . . 😰😰😰

At the beginning, the male protagonist was punished by the system because he had been in jail, and then the male protagonist scolded the system for being struck by lightning to minus ninety levels. It seemed like this. I have been looking for it for a long time, and I forgot the name when I saw it before.

Tian Xing is actually pretty good, and the fourth one in the Yue Heng trilogy is okay, at least it was written by Lost Leaf himself, but the gap between the next book Zhan Yue and this one is too big, it's hard not to suspect that Lost Leaf hired a gunman to write Zhan Yue

Reading online game novels is just for fun. There can be intrigues and intrigues, but overall there are many plots that are so frustrating that people can't stand it. I feel that the protagonist is not very charming and courageous, and he is too indecisive when it comes to relationships.

The novels written by Lost Leaf can be roughly divided into two parts: in-game plots and real-life plots. I personally think that he is better at writing game plots, and his writing of real-life plots is relatively simple, because he was famous for his previous online game trilogy, which probably includes Dragon Slaying. There are overwhelmingly more game plots than real-life plots, so everyone thinks they are very interesting. Later, he planned to transform, from the realm of refining gods to fighting gods. He wanted to integrate games with modern times. Combining reality with reality to create a "real world like a game", but the strength is limited and it is not successful. I personally think it may be because the plots in the games in his previous novels have some elements of cultivation, but if compared to a real fantasy world, there are many logical loopholes in it, but because after all this is just a game, settings that are unreasonable in reality are reasonable in the game, and games cannot be the same as reality. , So everyone can accept some shortcomings, but the novels he wrote in his transformation are like "writing the real world as a game", which gives me a sense of fragmentation. Even if you tell me in the setting, this is a real world, but in my opinion, it is just a game, and the sense of substitution is very low. In his previous famous works, in addition to the protagonist, there are many, many players. The plot is not driven by the protagonist alone. They also have other players in the game. There are quite a lot of scenes, which are a bit like a group drama. The climax of the plot is mainly in the large-scale dungeons in the game, territorial competition, guild wars, and world competitions, national wars, etc. It mainly describes the cooperation or competition between players, which gives people a sense of cooperation and strategizing. However, the novels written by the author after his transformation are very boring. It feels that except for the protagonist, they are all NPCs and there is no player. It is a one-man show of the protagonist. To sum up, the author wanted to write real fantasy novels, but because he had too little experience in writing real-world plots, he could only draw on his previous experience in writing game-world plots. As a result, the novel he wrote was nondescript. It was set in the real world, but it looked like a game. It made people unable to enter the drama and there was no way to substitute it. But if you treat it as a game Look, because the author's previous writing style was biased toward group dramas, when he concentrated the main plot on the protagonist alone, we would find that the plot was very boring, not exciting, and had no climax. To put it simply, it was boring to watch, and there was no desire to continue watching. It meant that it was not pleasing to both sides, and because of this, the popularity was not as good as before. Later, he returned to write two online game novels, but it can be clearly seen that he was weakening the proportion of the game world plot in the novel and strengthening the proportion of the real world plot. My personal guess is that the popularity of the two novels he transitioned to was too low, and it was no longer enough, so he could only come back to write online games. However, he was not willing to rest on his laurels, and still wanted to innovate, so he continued. I continue to hone my writing skills in the real world and want to develop in an all-round way, but it seems to be more difficult now. I read a few newly written novels, and I feel that they don't have the same flavor as before. I just read the first few hundred chapters, and I really can't stand it anymore. Of course, I am not blaming the author. As a reader, I am still very happy to see that he can continue to make progress. I wish the author here to write better and better.

Why do I not like the heroines written by Ye Zi? Qin Yun, He Yi, and Su Xiran failed to achieve success. Md, you are against me.

The book is quite good, but I'm not used to the first person narrative 😰

The book is a good book. It's just that the first person is a bit awkward

The whole book gives people the feeling that in real life, it is written lightly, and it can be covered by one stroke but never with two strokes, but in the game, the equipment data can be accurate but with decimal points! Pure online game novel✌🙂

The ending was extremely sloppy, and it was obvious that the plot was to be finished early, which resulted in many threads being lost at all. The effect was no less than ending the story with the main character dead. It was very depressing in the later stages, and I had no idea why it was like this. The main character was nothing. The description of the emotional scene is also very uncomfortable. I spent a lot of pen and ink on the second female lead but ended up with a female lead who had no role. She was said to be in a studio but she spent most of her time alone. I no longer had the feeling of having many friends playing games together in the world. After watching it, I was really obsessed with it and I regretted why I watched it. That's it

Disgusting plot, the ambiguity will kill the whole family

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The book doesn't say anything, the first person is just unbearable, ugh

Why does it keep showing that the network is unstable?

I came from "I Am the Sword Immortal" and couldn't stand it until halfway through. I feel that the author's brain circuit is very strange. The subject matter was originally very good and novel, but the writing ruined it and I have no desire to continue reading.

Turtle, Tianxing! Leaf! When will the trilogy be scheduled?

Well, switching back and forth between third person and first person makes me feel so uncomfortable!

Just write a game novel? I think this is just rubbish among the rubbish.

I didn't read the content, but when I saw the introduction, why did I feel like Ye Qiu, a full-time master?

Before the Chinese Civil War, it was because of a weak brain, but after the Chinese War, it was due to scratching.