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Have you read some of this book? 😁 (Maybe it's my self-interpretation) When the protagonist picked up Yan Lu's kite, I felt that the heroine was Yan Lu. Why do I say this? Because the author has arranged that the male and female protagonists have similar hobbies, so the male and female protagonists will have the most entanglements. In the following article, I saw that it was like this. The author described many women, but Yan Lu was the most described. The male protagonist will also have some feelings in response to some of the female protagonist's actions. I don't feel that way about other female characters. But I also feel that it is difficult for the male and female protagonists to get together, because life is like this sometimes. It is difficult for the right people to get together (a bit like a romance novel). But someone who is not a good match may take a shortcut and get together with the male protagonist (Su Yuqing), and that is the person most people marry in life. Stories come from life, but life may be far more outrageous than stories! (Maybe Xiaobai has read too much and got bored, so now he will read some pretentious novels that he didn't read before.)

Looking at it from another angle, this is actually a story about a scumbag (male protagonist) hanging on to a group of spare tires (female supporting characters) to have an affair. . . Ps. The author is good at writing a running account like this.

After reading about 100 chapters, I can summarize that this book is not enjoyable at all. It has a lot of poison and is too slow. I don't recommend reading it. It's not enjoyable because it's enjoyable. What kind of awesome article are you writing?

It's embarrassing to watch. It's about to get cancer. The protagonist's emotional intelligence is basically negative. I don't know how he survived before he got the system. He doesn't understand human feelings. He even gets drunk by quarreling with others in all kinds of ways! Can you make the protagonist more normal...

After reading Chapter 13, I really can't stand it anymore! The subject matter of the book is quite interesting, but the author has failed to write it well. The writing style and character creation are so useless that it makes people feel uncomfortable to read it!

This book is really not that good. The only bright spot is that the author has a good avatar.

The following are all my humble opinions. If the author has different opinions, please feel free to ignore them! ! ! It was okay at first, but I felt like he was a bit boring, a guy who is used to having fun in his own world, but needs to be sophisticated but doesn't know how to be sophisticated when he really needs to be. The only uncomfortable thing is that there is obviously a very obvious subtext, but even the description of psychological activities is too deliberate because the male protagonist does not understand the subtext. It wasn't until Su confessed his love that the male protagonist's plot collapsed... All the previous behaviors of understanding or not understanding were suspected of mocking Su's worship of gold, and would appear to be an extraordinarily hypocrite. Personal opinion: Next time you pretend not to understand the subtext, you can use the little boy's inner YY, or just ignore it with a stoic attitude, and tell the readers through psychological activities that the male protagonist does not want to understand. p. S. It is also possible that the author has not thought about the character design at all, or that when the character design is not established, personality conflicts occur due to mood, inspiration and other external factors. p. S.2 Regardless of the type of character (flat character) or three-dimensional character (round), there is always a part of the character that lasts from beginning to end. Moreover, the personality conflicts of three-dimensional characters are not forcibly established. p. S.3 "The test of whether a character is round is whether it can surprise us in a convincing way. If it never surprises us, it is flat. If it surprises us but is not convincing, it is flat and trying to pass off as round." ——Forster, "Aspects of Novel"

After reading Chapter 51, the main plot is unclear, and there is no clear motivation or salty fish. You are either a salty fish, or you are soaring to the top. You are neither salty nor bland. It is not considered daily life, nor is it struggle. This always makes me feel like I want to be something but also like a memorial arch. Seriously, I can watch it if it's plain and simple, but you have to talk about some famous cars and watches. It feels like a nouveau riche showing off. I can't say anything about the emotional aspect. . . To sum up, the main plot is not clear, and the writing is acceptable, but the forced ancient style is a bit embarrassing. In terms of emotions, I feel confused and unreasonably happy. However, I have only read Chapter 51 so far. It can be said that I only read it roughly. If you have any insights, please be gentle.

Express your personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't spray it The author is definitely a girl. The plot is quite bland. It may be that the author himself has influenced the protagonist's character. After all, what is written is the person's own thoughts. Male videos either open a harem stallion, or a hot-blooded young man fights monsters and pretends to upgrade. The addition of the system has turned the world upside down. The concept of this book is quite good, but it is not suitable for long-term reading. After all, the character of the protagonist is not likeable. Then focus on aesthetics. The emotional scenes are not done well, they are either bloody or scumbag. Ambiguity is really unpleasant. Actually, the author is suitable for writing light novels. Women's imagination is really amazing haha😄

I finished reading it in one sitting, but I felt a little uncomfortable. Maybe it's because I've always read interesting articles before, but this article is relatively slow and "covered", and it's a bit too specific. Seeing the exchange between the male protagonist and the two girls was very awkward.

This, this, this... What are they? There are a bunch of women wandering around, and if you have the skills to write out the souls of those women, you can say that, but they are all written about nothing. You might as well just write more about daily life, and I skipped through dozens of chapters. I really can't stand it. The characters in it have no soul at all, and there are a lot of characters. I can't stand it anymore. I would like to give some suggestions. Just write about farming, and maybe read it. If you are a novice author, just take your time first, and don't start with such a difficult level. With that said, farewell!

I think the protagonist may be an unsophisticated **, well, there is no other explanation.

After reading dozens of chapters, the book is perfect for me. After all, I don't really like reading pretense and slap-in-the-face routines. It would be better if the author does not appear in the category of cultivating immortals in the future

I just read Chapter 24. Of the two female characters, I like Su Yuqing better. Although she started to get close to the protagonist because of his financial resources, a beautiful girl who has strong observation, knows how to advance and retreat, pleases you without boring you, and can go to the hall and the kitchen, is the best choice for the other half. It can be said that even if a girl like this is a mistress, she is much better than those who are full of princess diseases and only want money. As for Yan Lu, it can be seen from the chapter comments that many people like her. Personally, he started to get closer after a little observation from the protagonist's rental house. It can be seen that the family is rich, she is a kind of clean, clear, kind and refined girl, and she is independent. But one characteristic of this kind of girl is that she is too idealistic about everything and is the kind of person who can risk everything for love. Just like a scene that often appears in TV dramas, two people are being chased by soldiers. The man decides to stop the pursuers and let the woman go first. Yan Lu is the kind of person who hugs the male protagonist tightly and wants to die together, and then the two of them go to hell together. Su Yuqing will leave first without delaying, and the chance of both of them surviving at the same time will be greater. It's been a long time since I've posted so much text, so I'll give it a try😁😁😁

Another great book weighed down by its title. To be honest, Qidian APP has been recommended to me several times, but once I saw it was Shenhaowen, I was not interested in clicking on it. This time I clicked in because I was really short of books. Looking at the results, it's incredible! This is a book with flesh and blood, a flavor of fireworks, and close to reality. I personally feel that this kind of writing style is really wasted when writing online articles. You, the author, are more suitable for the physical literature world... I don't want to say anything else, otherwise some people will say that I am just a waste of money →_→ In a word, if you can understand and understand the following paragraph of Zhang Ailing, you are suitable to read this book. If you can't understand it, there is no need to click in to read this book, because you will only think that this book is not good-looking, or there are many poisonous points in your opinion. If a woman cannot get the love of the opposite sex, she will not get the respect of the same sex. Women are so mean. That's all, I really don't have enough money, I really like this book. By the way, when the manuscript fee is paid next month, I will give you a reward to the author!

Finished reading! I still like this kind of Shingo-style novel. However, I feel that the author's layout is too small and the page is not very large. Moreover, after more than 50 chapters, I have been traveling around the company villa with two women. It is better to just buy a piece of land than a villa in its own space! Maybe the author will have a foreshadowing of the space in the conference, but I haven't seen any tricks in the small copy tour yet! It was basically just a brushstroke, and it didn't give me any feeling. Maybe it's because of the character of the protagonist! To use an analogy, the protagonist gives me the feeling that he is the kind of naive guy in the village who is lucky enough to be rich but buys a Will-O-Wisp movie. Personal feeling! It's still good. Come on, the author, make the map bigger and create a plot with low-key luxury and connotation. After all, it is from Shenhao style?

It's okay at the beginning, but it's a bit unrealistic at the end, and it becomes a cliche harem urban cool novel, with gold and jade on the outside, but ruins on the inside.

I've read twenty or thirty chapters. If you're a boy, don't read it through substitution. You won't be able to stand it. I don't know about girls. This is the first time I read this kind of book, and I can only say that I felt uncomfortable reading it. The character of the male protagonist is portrayed in a very different way.

I have read more than a dozen divine novels, but only three caught my eye. The first is the book that writes a lot about food. The second is that the single heroine focuses on describing emotions to feed readers dog food. Three is this one. I think there should be a book like this in my bookshelf.

After reading so many chapters, from the very beginning, I didn't want the system to become an adult, but now I really wish she could be a human being! I didn't think it was a heroic novel in a male video, but it was a romance novel. It must have been posted in the wrong place. There are so many love scenes that it makes my brain hurt to watch them. From the beginning of the female characters, almost all of them are women. There are only a few women in total. Except that they are all from the same company. You can meet them everywhere in such a big city. Moreover, the male protagonist is not the male protagonist. His job must be a tool. In the whole world described in this book, the male protagonist is probably the only one with the halo of wisdom.

Shenhao's novels are not very enjoyable, and those who come here for Shenhao will probably be dissuaded from reading them. If you read it as a romance novel, it's actually pretty good.

Is the author a girl? I feel that the charm of the book here is very comfortable and leisurely, but the description of the female protagonist is too delicate. I always feel that the author is a bit girly. Only after reading the comments did I realize that the author may be a girl 😂😂

After reading more than 20 chapters, I feel that the author is quite delicate, especially in the environment, and the details are described very carefully. How can I put it, it just feels like the content is very peaceful. Then I discovered that the author is also a bit boring, hahaha (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia. Personally, I prefer science fiction and micro-horror novels. I'm timid, and I won't watch anything particularly scary, usually the spiritual energy recovery type. But I found that the author's writing was so comfortable and plain that I actually read it. It feels quite incredible, which shows that the author's writing is pretty good, especially in describing the details. You like it too? This is my personal review. Everyone has different preferences. You can compare them, but don't copy them.

Author: This title is too restrictive to the style of your entire book, because most people reading this book like Xiaobai's style. If we read your literary style, it will feel very pretentious. If a person who likes system writing cannot feel the existence of the system even in three or four chapters, he will soon abandon the article and suggest changing the title of the book to downplay the system. The author's supporting characters are all quite well written, and the characters are full of style. Just a little unattractive. It is recommended to add a heroine with a perfect personality. This character can appear rarely, speak very little, and interact very little with the protagonist. But it must be a central character, a character that readers can't stop reading. It makes people feel that she is a real heroine at first glance. Simply put, this is the character readers will expect from her.        ， A maid among common people. Yayoi in the White Album. Kikyo in Inuyasha. These people in Photo Girlfriend's Invisible Girl are not male and female protagonists, not even female supporting characters. It is also a character that the male protagonist cannot defeat, but it can be called the soul character of the work. The popularity exceeds that of the male and female protagonists. Most people may not be able to remember the names of the male and female protagonists, but they can remember these people. The author probably lacks such characters. Simply put, they are too ordinary and boring, and there are no characters that people can remember. Most of the characters appearing now are relatively weak compared to the protagonist. There is no character that the protagonist cannot ask for. Readers have no loyalty and may abandon the article anytime and anywhere. It is recommended that the author let the male and female protagonist drive from time to time, and the brakes must be applied in the end. Design some unexpected interruptions to the interaction between the male and female protagonists.

To be honest, the first chapters were not very smooth to read, but the following chapters were much more comfortable to read, which shows that the author has good intentions. Personal opinion I hope the author will continue to work hard, and I will get an additional 500 reward for monthly tickets.

I can't see anything, I don't feel anything.

I always feel that the author writes a diary rather than a novel. It would be better if the content was more relaxed, warm and joyful.

After additional investment, the author added some energy, read it in one go, and commented for the first time. It is one of the interesting and comfortable works I have watched in the past few years. I like Su Yuqing. After all, it is closer to reality and has a strong sense of immersion. Women today are too cute and happy. I don't lack a little money or talent, but I lack a person to take care of myself. A warm home, just like the protagonist, I like tranquility.

In fact, it is good to have money to find a girlfriend like Su Yuqing, because she is smart, can grasp the details, knows what you like and what you hate, serves you very well, and gives you some material things appropriately, and you will find it very comfortable.

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