Order of Super Seminary

The story is interesting, but the writing is not fluent enough

I think the portrayal of the character Jiang Zike was relatively unsuccessful. The following is my personal opinion: First, why did Ivan choose to reincarnate at the time when the earth plot is about to begin? If the reincarnation seal memory starts from scratch, how can he compete with Uvel? Secondly, the character description is not rich enough, and it is a bit stiff to force it into the plot. Without Ivan's rigorous and meticulous, there is no such A cautious, impulsive character can be felt everywhere. Thirdly, the handling of the emotional line with Qilin is not detailed enough, which makes people feel that I am forcing the scene just to arrange Qilin. Fourthly, I think the addition of Aili makes the contrast between the characters more obvious. Although he is Aiwen's son, it gives people the feeling that Aili is fighting against Uvel The above is purely my personal opinion

By the way, are there any wild readers? Can I have a bubble? Always in stand-alone mode, it's so scary.

I really don't like harems. I used to read too many harem novels from the Super Seminary.

The protagonist is about to die, so hurry up and save a seed 😏! I'm particularly annoyed by those novels where they're already together at the beginning, but don't have a baby until the finale. The reason for such people is definitely because the protagonist's reproductive function is wrong. Hurry up and get He Xi and Kesha pregnant and give birth to a baby. How can you say that you have to give birth to a baby even before you die? After all, the protagonist is a time traveler. There are three ways to be unfilial, the worst of which is not having an heir. You can create a double protagonist, for example, He Xi and Kesha are pregnant and give birth to a baby. After Kesha overthrows the old angel rule under the leadership of Kesha, the next generation of protagonist will be the son of the current protagonist. You can also let his son have sex with Angel Yan and Qilin, Reina and Qiangwei. Maybe be bolder and let Kesha's son pick up his own aunt Liang Bing😏. You can have more sons, so that if one son has a beautiful woman, it will not be considered a harem 😏. Then you can explain to your book friends that this is a multi-protagonist, but each protagonist only picks up one girl, and the one who is dead at the beginning is not the protagonist 😏. This way, people who don't like to read harem stories will come to read it. Those who like to read harem stories will also watch it, because no matter what, all the girls are picked up 🤭, so everyone is happy. Finally, how about resurrecting the current protagonist and having a happy reunion ending 🤓? Is this operation perfect? The author quickly adopts my opinion and I will not sue you for infringement 🤭. After all, I am crowdfunding to write a book.

According to the angel's mate selection standards, it is impossible to have a harem. They basically yearn for that kind of very romantic and loyal love and will only have one partner in their life.

Emmmm, amnesia is a failure, having an extramarital affair after amnesia is a failure, and having an extramarital affair after having an extramarital affair is even more of a failure because the mistress dare not restore her memory and identity! ! Therefore, Angel Ivan's ideas and pursuits are not rooted in his true heart. As long as a memory is sealed, his true nature will be revealed. Okay, I want to ask, the author, why did you want to open up Qilin's emotional line? Is it that the three kings are not fragrant, or that the son and daughter are not cute? Airi and Irene are both thirty thousand years old, and their two wives are going into a black hole for you (although it is deliberately set so that the protagonist does not know it), but the author forced the protagonist to use amnesia as a cover to cheat! Does this reveal the author's true nature? Finally, it's been tens of thousands of years, and the protagonist has been the king of angels for hundreds of years? But he doesn't have the demeanor of the first-generation Emperor of the Universe. He has amnesia even if he takes a concubine. As expected, he is still a bitch.

There is no novel that can be read even if you write about Super Theological Seminary.

It's so uncomfortable to watch. The protagonist behaves like a mother-in-law. If you want to be a king on your own, why don't you be more ruthless in doing things? You are too soft-hearted. If you didn't have the halo of the protagonist, you would have died a long time ago. The protagonist wants to create a universe and create a basic morality, right? In essence, it is to save the weak, but there is something wrong with the way you do things and your character.

Without reading the content, or even the chapter table of contents, I can guess what is written in it after reading three or four comments and introductions. It's nothing more than Pig's Feet gaining favorability with one, two or three of the Three Kings tens of thousands of years ago and helping them get through the difficulties. After that, the protagonist disappeared and was seriously injured for various reasons. Suddenly, tens of thousands of years passed and we arrived at the beginning of the plot of the Company of Heroes. The plot of 30,000 years ago was purely for the purpose of acquiring girls.        ，，，*

Let Aiwen go online as soon as possible. Jiang Ziwen doesn't feel good about it, and I don't think we should write about Aiwen and Jiang Ziwen's emotional activities later. Otherwise, I want to know whether using Jiang Ziwen's body to live with Aiwen's two wives is considered green. Ivan will look very different. Twist, and Liu Chuang should not be considered a member of the Kamigawa Civilization. After all, you said before that the right to use Wuchen War God (Nuoxing War God) belongs to the Angels. Since it belongs to the Angels, the Deno Galaxy should be considered a subordinate civilization or ally of the Angel Civilization...

Are you sure Kesha's character would allow you to have a harem? Can you understand it first before writing?

The writing is similar, but the plot setting is not that great.

Wait, I suddenly discovered a very shocking thing. If Xi Ze and Yu Tong have that kind of relationship, will there be Angel Yan in the future?

It seems that the protagonist is going further and further on the road of studying soul, life and death, and self. ...... How about just building an "underworld" or something? How can there be no underworld if there is heaven? Just paired with Merlot Heaven, it can also become the source of those myths on Earth.

I really don't want the protagonist to have a harem with an angel. No matter which angel is matched with the protagonist, it would be good, but having a harem feels too insulting to these characters. After all, the original angel is so... Loyal to his significant other? After all, I swore an oath to protect you.

It was really awkward to read. I felt very uncomfortable while reading this book. , Reading is a pleasure to read, but why does your book feel so frustrating?

How the hell is this different from Hua Ye, the same harem stallion?

I just want to know, you are 30,000 years old, if you don't have a girlfriend who likes Qilin, and you already have two queens, why would you want to have sex with Qilin? I really don't understand. The same goes for angels. The two angel kings can still tolerate the male protagonist seducing a 20-year-old Qilin. What do you think?

How about scattering flowers? Oh, carry it away!

Emm, when you have nothing to do, write this book with a warmer ending for Alvin and the others. I feel so frustrated.

What's the plot behind it?

I can't understand it when I read Chapter 130. Why did I write so much earlier? If you want to fully comply with the layout of Super Seminary, then you shouldn't talk so much nonsense, but what you wrote earlier is so high that you have to forcefully change it to meet the so-called fan standards. Fan is because you used the system name of Super Seminary, and it is a doujin, not all its contents. That's called plagiarism, not fanfiction.

Is it over? Why not update it? If this is the case, it will be a mess.

Well... That Alvin is a time traveler, right?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Even if he is a eunuch, it is naturally a good book

Kesha

After reading Chapter 35, I was really disgusted. No wonder I didn't get a monthly pass. The subsequent books have this kind of plot. I guess you won't be able to get a monthly pass

The theme of Super Seminary: What Am I? Is novel! The author comes to canvass votes