
Yimeng Heigu
沂蒙黑姑
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 623k Words
- Genre
- Military
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- War of Resistance
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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83Recommends
89Fans
279Chapters
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Looking at this piece of history, I don't want to read it because I feel like I am licking it.
Uh, I read a little bit, and I would like to ask, should I put punctuation marks when speaking? For example Hei Gu said "A small team..." I was confused, Slowly type one? After reading one chapter, I can't even understand who said what. It's so difficult! Originally, this book has been so cold, but you still write like this🙂 Oh, I wish you good luck, This book is like this, is it for the entity?
The overall writing is quite solid and beautiful. The only flaw is that there are too many messy stories in the middle, which makes it feel like two orioles singing in the green willows - blowing farther and farther away. Especially when writing about Baodu Gu, you just briefly introduce the terrain of Baodu Gu. It turns out that it involves the kidnapping case of the Republic of China, this and that, and the past and present life of the bandit family. This is nothing like a black girl. If you want to write about a black girl, you can add a few more characters around the black girl. For example, design a military division-level think tank, then design a political commissar or instructor, as well as the party branch of the district committee, squadron, and small party group. Write more characters around the black girl. Make the leadership figures such as the colleagues and superiors of the district team fuller in personality, which is very good.